第2讲 叙议结合类 【典例】(2016·浙江高考)
请以“One Thing I’m Proud of”为题, 用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文, 记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。 1. 记叙事情经过;
2. 简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。 注意: 文章的标题已给出(不计词数)。 One Thing I’m Proud of ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【解题思路】 第一步: 依体裁谋篇章 结构对 第一关 这是一篇叙议结合类文章, 短文的三部分应为: 第一段介绍一件自己认为得意的事情; 第二段记叙事情的经过; 第三段说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。 第二步: 列要点选句式 要点全 及格线 要点一: 我仍然记得我是如何变成一名好乒乓球运动员的。 _________________________________________________ 要点二: 我去高中学校的第一天, 我看到我的一些同学正在打乒乓球。 ______________________________________________________________ ___________ 要点三: 我真的对这次经历非常骄傲。 _______________________________ I still remember how I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. I’m really proud of this experience. 第三步: 扣主题拓展句 句式美 优秀分 要点二拓展: 我去高中学校的第一天, 我看到我的一些同学正在打乒乓 球。(添加事情的发展、经过、结果) ______________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ _____________________ The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class. 要点三拓展: 我真的对这次经历非常骄傲。(添加骄傲的原因) ____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________ _________ I’m really proud of this experience because it helps me realize that we can all fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect. ” 【现场阅卷·作文升格】 学 生 答 卷 我 来 阅 卷 该生习作为四档作文, 得分为19分。能覆盖所有内容要点; 词汇表达较为熟练, 高级词汇使用不是很多; 作者句法不错, 大部分句子都正确, 个别地方出现错误。 1. 第二句中的lasts改为lasting, 谓语动词错误, 这句话中is是谓语, last应用非谓语形式。 2. 第三句中的worked后添加as, 搭配错误, work as(担任)。 3. 第五句中的readed应改为read, 动词形式错误, read的过去式为read。 4. 最后一句中benefical应改为beneficial, 单词拼写错误。 五 档 作 文 One Thing I’m Proud of
I still remember how I became a good table tennis player.
The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates playing table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I was determined to be just as good. Later on, I often watched them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practising until I became confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of the term I became one of the best players in my class.
I’m really proud of this experience because it helps me realize that we can all fulfill our potential and achieve our goals through hard work. It also helps me better understand the proverb “Practice makes perfect. ” 一、叙议结合类作文“三段式”解题技巧
1. 如果是描述个人经历, 需要简明扼要地叙述事情情景; 如果是谚语/引语类作文, 首段应引入谚语/引语并解释其含义, 通过英文释义让谚语/引语通俗易懂。
2. 发表观点或看法并提供支持观点的证据。根据题目要求, 考生可以通过例子来支持这一经历/谚语/引语。所举的例子可以来自个人经历、历史、文学等。最好使用亲身经历来写, 将谚语的深刻含义用贴近生活的实例说明白。
3. 末段重申、总结或提出希望。进一步阐述经历/谚语/引语的意义, 利用其含义提出希望或呼吁。 二、叙议结合类常用词汇、句型及模板 (一)常用词汇 1. proverb n. 谚语
2. potential n. 潜力 3. experience n. 经历
4. aspect n. 方面 5. actually adv. 实际上
6. gradually adv. 逐渐地 7. similarly adv. 同样地 8. appreciate vt. 感激; 感谢 9. cherish vt. 珍惜
10. responsible adj. 有责任心的 11. be determined to do sth. 下定决心做某事 12. be faced with great difficulty面对很大的困难 13. be proud of以……而骄傲 14. be aware of意识到 15. be eager to do sth. 渴望做某事 16. be fed up with厌烦 17. contribute to great progress导致很大进步 18. with the help of sb. 在某人的帮助下 19. from sb. ’s point of view从某人的观点看 20. get discouraged垂头丧气 21. encourage sb. to keep going鼓励某人不断前进 22. give up doing sth. 放弃做某事 23. lose heart失去信心 24. attach great importance to重视 25. achieve success获得成功 26. have trouble/difficulty in在……有困难 27. talk of说到; 谈到 28. put sth. into practice把某物付诸于实践中 29. pay off取得成功 30. make a significant contribution to对……做出突出贡献 31. take a lesson from从……中汲取教训 32. volunteer to do sth. 主动去做某事 (二)常用句型 1. 精彩开头 ①(2015·湖南高考)Praise is really magical. Perhaps many of us had such experience.
……或许我们很多人都有这样的经历。 ②(2016·山东高考)My favorite proverb is “Where there’s a will, there’s a way”, which means that if you are really determined to do something, you will find a way of doing it and you will achieve success.
我最喜欢的谚语是……, 意思是…… ③(2016·福建高考)This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t get discouraged right after failure.
来自……的引语告诉我们…… 2. 正文佳句 ①(2015·湖南高考)Take myself as an example. I was very naughty in the primary school.
以我自己为例…… ②(2016·山东高考)Once, I was faced with great difficulty in learning English, especially in vocabulary and grammar.
曾经, 我面临……, 尤其是…… ③(2016·湖北高考)I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon.
我可以清晰地记得一件发生在……的事。 ④(2016·湖北高考)A good case in point is that I learned how to ride a bike with great difficulty at the age of twelve.
……是一个很好的例子。 ⑤(2016·浙江高考)I fully agree with the proverb and its implication. 我完全同意这个谚语和它的寓意。 3. 余味结尾 ①(2015·湖南高考)Every time when I heard others talk to me about my excellent examination result, I thought to myself that I would work even harder and make greater progress.
每次当我听到别人说起……, 我心中想我会更努力学习并且取得更大的进步。 ②(2016·福建高考)We can learn a lot from the proverb and put it into practice. We should stick at what we are doing and only by doing this can we succeed.
我们可以从这句谚语中受益匪浅, 并且付诸实践中。我们应该……只有这样做我们才能…… ③(2016·山东高考)From what I say above, we can see that people with a strong will are more likely to succeed.
综上所述, 我们可以知道…… ④(2016·福建高考)As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.
作为社会的一份子, 我意识到…… ⑤(2016·湖北高考)Judging from the examples given above, we may safely come to the conclusion that words could be powerful in both positive and negative ways.
从上面的例子中, 我们不难推出…… (三)常用模板
The good old proverb“______”(名言或谚语)reminds us that______(释义). Indeed, we can really benefit much from it.
First of all, ____(理由一). For example, ____(举例说明). Secondly, ____(理由二). Another case is that______(举例说明). Furthermore, ____(理由三).
In my opinion, ____(我的观点). In short, whatever you do, please remember the saying“______”. If you understand it and apply it to your study or work, you’ll necessarily achieve a lot from it.