2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（8）附参考范文
(2012湖北孝感一次统考)
请根据下面提示，结合你的校园生活中的一个事例，就英语格言“Failure is the mother of success.”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。
In fact，there aren't always bright sunshine and gentle breeze，birds' singing and flowers' fragrant in our daily life.We have so many failures and hardships that someone will be disappointed and give up the hope of success，but life is what you make it.
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③词数为120左右。
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参考范文
One possible version：
Success will be gained after times of failure so long as we are good at drawing lessons from failures or mistakes and stick to what we are doing.That is the message carried in the proverb “Failure is the mother of success”．
For example，when I began to learn English，I was slow and clumsy that I read the words wrong from time to time.My poor pronunciation made myself laughed at by my classmates.But I didn't give up and kept practising reading aloud English every day.And my teacher gave me a helping hand，getting me right whenever I made an error.
In a word，as long as we don't lose heart and keep on trying，we are sure to go through failure and achieve our aims.
图表式书面表达思路与技巧
图表式书面表达是常见的一种写作形式,现笔者结合下面一则实例,谈谈怎样写好这类书面表达。 根据以下表格内容,请以"How to Reduce the Present City Population"为题,用英语为杂志社写一篇短文,阐述你对这一问题的见解。
建议I 具体措施:A. 晚婚 B. 一对夫妇,一个孩子 目的:减少人口自然增长(人口出生率) 建议II 具体措施:严格控制外地人进城务工经商 目的:减少外地人口对城市的压力 建议III 具体措施:A. 在郊区,建造生活、商业、文教、卫生、娱乐、休闲生活小区B. 在城外建造卫星城 目的:吸引城市居民到郊区和卫星城工作和生活
注意: 1)词数:100左右。 2)参考词汇:严格控制have a tight control, 卫星城 satellite town 一、 认真审题,准确把握提示要求。 1. 审体裁。准确把握体裁是写好一篇文章关键的一步。体裁的形式直接决定着考生用英语表达信息的途径和形式,并影响着书面表述语句的正确性和准确性。 2. 审人称。根据体裁要求,要准确把握人称的使用。是用第一、二人称,还是用第三人称。 3. 审时态。不同的体裁,其动词时态的使用也各有不同。一般情况下,故事、日记等体裁常以一般过去时为主要动词时态;书信、便条、通知等体裁常以一般现在时为主要动词时态。 分析以上实例,应以第一人称的口吻进行描写。从题目要求、表内要点以及体裁可知,本文时态应以一般现在时为主体时态。 二、 理清表内要点,进行合理发挥。 图表式书面表达其主要内容常被列在表内。考生首先必须理清表内内容要点,抓住主要信息进行描写。可先把表内所提供的内容要点用英语列出,尽量使用一些较高层次的词汇或短语以及所学过的句法结构(如定语从句、分词结构等)进行描述。例如上述实例图表中的内容可用英语列出以下几个短语或句式: (1) practice a policy of "Late Marriage" and "One Couple, One Child" (2) reduce the birth rate (3) have a tight control over country people entering cities to do various physical jobs (4) lighten the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population (5) build apartment blocks with shopping centers, schools, hospitals, as well as cinemas and theaters around us or even build satellite towns in the city suburbs or the counties round the cities (6) encourage city citizens to move there to live and work 三、 正确使用过渡性词语,提高文章的连贯性。 过渡性词语的使用是语言的连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句子与句子之间,段落与段落之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的过渡性词语是非常必要的。例如上述实例,我们可在要点(1)前插入表示时间顺序的过渡词语 first / firstly, 在要点(3)前插入secondly,在要点(5)前插入finally。在要点(6)前可以插入表示终结关系的过渡短语in this way / by this means。现将中学课本中应掌握的过渡词语总结如下: 1. 表示起始关系的有: first of all, according to, so far, as far as, to begin with, in my opinion等。 2. 表示时间顺序的有: first, then, later, in the end, finally, at last, after that, since then, immediately, suddenly, soon等。 3. 表示空间顺序的有: on the right / left, on one side of, at the top / foot / end of, in the middle of, in front of, at the back of等。 4. 表示并列关系的有:and, or, also, too, as well as, neither...nor, not only...but also, either...or, not...but等。 5. 表示转折关系的有: but, yet, however, while, on the contrary 等。 6. 表示因果关系的有: because, since, as, for, thanks to, thus, therefore, as a result (of), one reason is that...another reason is that...等。 7. 表示条件关系的有: if, unless, as (so) long as, on condition that等。 8. 表示让步关系的有: although, though, even if, in spite of, after all, in fact, what (who, when, where, how...) ever 等。 9. 表示递进关系的有:what's more, further more, besides, what's worse, to make the matter worse, also, still, on the one hand...on the other hand等。 10. 表示列举事实的过渡性词语有:for example / instance, such as, take...for example, as follows, and so on等。 11. 表示总结性的有:in short, in brief, in a word, on the whole等。 12. 表示过渡性的插入语有: I think (believe, suppose, imagine, guess...), I'm afraid, you know, as is known to us all, as we all know 等。
根据以上图表式书面表达题写作思路,上述实例可整理成文如下: How to Reduce the Present City Population
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20万元会使中国令世人瞩目，中国运动员创造了新的奥运会金牌纪录。获金牌的运动员除了得到政府奖金20万元以外，还会从地方得到更多的奖励。对此，社会各界反响不一。
赞成 不赞成
运动员为国争了光
运动员付出了许多辛苦和汗水
奖金有利于中国体育后备力量的培养 运动员是国家培养出来的，为国争光理所当然
得到大量奖金后，有些队员不会退役
一些企业趁机炒作，从中获取广告效应
请你就此现象进行简单阐述，并提出自己的一些看法或建议。(120词左右)
提示词汇：奖金bonus
参考范文
China has become a shock to the world in Olympic Game 20 the Chinese government will offer each gold medal winner the bonus of 200,000, local reward not included, which has become a household talk. Some say the players have won honor for our country after taking great pains, so they deserve it. What's more, it will benefit the training of future players. Others on the opposite side believe the players get well trained and paid by the country. It will go against our wish if the players quit after getting much money. Besides, it's said that some enterprises are taking advantage of this to sell their products. I think I will admire the sportsmen who worship not moneny but the spirits of the Olympic Games.
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作文（***）
目前，家长开车接送孩子上下学已成为一个普遍现象，人们对此做法褒贬不一。
请根据下列图表提示，描述被访者的看法，并就此现象发表自己的观点。
注意：1．词数100左右，文章的开头已经给出，不计人总词数。
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Nowadays it's a common phenomenon that parents drive their children to school and
back home, which causes a heated discussion．A survey has just been conducted about it，and the findings are as foows．One possible version：
Nowadays it's a common phenomenon that parents drive their children to school andback home,which causes a heated discussion．A survey has just been conducted about it,and the findings are as follows．
We can see that half of the supporters believe that more valuable time can be saved for students to get enough sleep．Another 30％think children can rest or have meals comfortably in their own cars．About l5％consider it reasonable just for the sake of children's safety．The rest of them think it offers more chances for parents to communicate with their children．
However，other people hold different opinions．55％of them believe that it results in more traffic jauls，especially around schools in rush hours．And 30％think that driving kids to and from school will undoubtedly add to the parents’burdens in aspects like time，energy and expenses．Still，15％worry that in the long term children may be more dependent on their parents，which does no good to them．In my opinion，we can take buses to sch．
. 假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。
上午与我校学生座谈（话题如校园生活、文化差异等）；
中午与我校学生共同进餐（午餐包括饺子、面条等）；
下午与我校学生游览海河。
注意：
1. 次数不少于100；
2. 可是当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；
3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总次数。
参考词汇：
海河 the Haihe River
Dear Mr Smith
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School. ___________
【参考范文】
7.Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the student Union, from Chenguang High School .We’re very glad to know you’ll come to our school on June 26th, and now it’s my pleasure to introduce our schedule to you. In the morning, you’ll have a talk with the students of our school. The topic includes school life, the difference between Chinese culture and American culture. Next, we’ll have lunch together at noon and you will eat typical Chinese food, such as jiaozi, noodles. After that, together with us students, you’ll have a trip to the Haihe River in the afternoon. That’s the plan for your visit. If you have any other question, please let me know.
Best wishes to you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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