2014高考英语书面表达一轮训练（1）附参考范文
书面表达的要求是切中题意,语言准确,条理清楚。写作既可以体现词汇、句型、语法等的掌握情况,又可以体现一个人的逻辑思维。因此,写好一篇短文是件不容易的事。
高考命题逐渐向开放式的作文过渡,开放式的作文更有利于考生发挥自己的水平,其难度也相应提高了。因此,对于开放式的作文,只要短文写得流畅,表达得清楚,体裁正确,逻辑合理,就应视为是一篇好作文。请参考下面一篇书面表达:
写作要求:出国留学已成为一种潮流,请你就此问题谈一谈自己的观点,简要论述留学的利与弊。词数为100左右。
范文如下:
Nowadays going abroad to study is very popular. Even some primary school students, whose families are well off, are studying abroad, let alone university students and postgraduates. Studying abroad can widen one's view and help learn about the cultures of foreign countries. Of course, it's a good way to learn foreign languages. But studying abroad is not suitable for everyone because of the high cost and fees. If a student's family can't support him and he has to struggle in a foreign country for a living not for his studies, I think he needn't go abroad. He can study well in China and he will be able to become successful.
So going abroad to study is one way, but not the only way, to one's education and success.
在写本篇作文时,在表达上应当注意以下几点:
1.由于高考作文一般要求写一篇100词左右的作文,篇幅不易太长,不能随意发挥。题材广泛,但不能失去控制。
2.在写作中要尽力避免使用一些生词,如:"潮流"(trend)。遇到需要的词汇而不会表达时,换种说法表达即可。因此,上文的第一句"Nowadays going abroad for studies is very popular."就是一个很好的转换表达。
3.对于这个题目,短文中应当有留学的"利"与"弊"两方面的内容,不要只论述单方面的内容。
4.学会使用一些连接词以及一些过渡性的词汇,使行文自然、流畅。如范文中的nowadays, even, but, of course, if, so, I think等。
5.注意文章的开头与结尾句。第一句的作用是引出下文,而结尾句是"画龙点睛"。
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(2012武汉武昌五月调研)
请根据以下提示，结合自己的学习生活，就“如何缓解压力”这一话题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈自己的建议或做法。
Nowadays students study hard and they are always under a lot of pressure.It's necessary for them to have some ways to ease stress and minds.
注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
②除诗歌外，文体不限；
③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
④词数为120左右。
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参考范文
One possible version：
Pressure is a common serious problem nowadays.Many students in our class worry about their exams.
Much pressure as we have from our studies，we need a relaxation after heavy work to renew our energy.Furthermore，burying ourselves all day under piles of books is not the only way to study.
I'm always under pressure，too.My parents expect me to go to a key university.One evening，I had a talk with my mother.I told her I was not lazy and I really felt tired.I needed time to relax.My mother agreed with me at last.
So I think a conversation with parents or teachers or good friends is an essential way to solve the problem.Besides，we can listen to music after class or we can even cry or shout in the open in order to refresh ourselves.
下面四幅图描述了格林先生和他的孩子们在周末晚上看电视的情景。尽管他讨厌流行歌曲和乐队队员，由于孩子们喜欢，他不得不迁就。请用英语写一篇短文说明两代人对电视节目的不同喜好。
注意：
1．短文须包括所有图画的内容，根据行文要求可适当增加细节，使短文连贯、通顺。
2． 词数100左右。
1中书上文字：Top of the Pops最新走红流行歌曲；图2中电视上文字：the Gorgons一演唱组名） One possible version：
Mr. Green and his children usually spend some time watching TV in the evening. But they don't like the same TV program. His children like pop music very much, but Mr. Green hates it .
One evening at the weekend, the children wanted to watch Top of the Pops. They told their father it was performed by the Gorgons, a new group. Mr. Green had to give in. The children enjoyed the program very much while Mr. Green thought that the music sounded terrible and the group all looked like wild men. He didn't listen to them.
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高考英语书面表达讲义：教育校园话题作文
例1：你班李明和王英同学在高三阶段有不同的学习方法。请描述下列各图，适当增加细节使文章连贯，并谈谈你的看法。
Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three. They both work hard and but they have different learning methods.
Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listening to the teacher. As a result, he misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his homework. So he has to stay up late and doesn't get enough sleep.
However, Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning. She listens attentively and tries to catch everything that the teacher says in class. Because of this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it possible for her to go to bed early.
In my opinion, Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself, so I prefer her learning method.
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高考英语书面表达讲义：教育校园话题作文
例2：假设你叫李华，你将作为高三毕业生代表，根据以下要点在毕业晚会上用
英文作一简短的告别演讲：
1、对三年高中生活的怀念;
2、对老师的感谢;
3、对母校的祝福。
My teachers and fellow students,
In a couple of weeks, we'll say goodbye to our mother school. How time flies! Now It's really hard for me to put my feelings into words. The past three years has been really a wonderful journey with you guys, full of laughter and tears.
To make the journey safe and fruitful, our great teachers contributed their time, energy, love and the whole heart. Here, we are extremely grateful for all that you, dear teachers, have done for us.
It'll soon be the time for us to depart, though unwillingly. But it is not the end. It just means that we're going to begin a new journey.
Finally, on behalf of all the graduates present here, let me extend our sincere wishes for our mother school and respectable teachers. Thank you!
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5. 以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道基本信息：
书名：Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother
作者：Amy Chua，美籍华人，耶鲁*大学教授
出版时间：2010年
内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事
效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论
相关报道：
中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售
意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法
最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛**和耶鲁录取
*耶鲁：Yale
哈佛：Harvard
[写作内容]
根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：
1.图书的基本信息
2.图书的相关报道
[写作要求]只能用5个句子表达全部内容
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯Chinese American and professor in Yale University, was published in 2010. In it, the writer described how she brought up her tow daughters in traditional Chinese ways. The publication of the book caused heated discussion about which educational method is better---the Chinese one or the American one. The Chinese version of the book began to be sold in China at the beginning of 2011. Although the majority of Chinese mothers disapproved of what the writer did, the latest news revealed that the 17-year-old elder daughter was already admitted to Harvard University and Yale University respectively.
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2.最近，经常有资讯报道发生在青少年身上的交通事故，其场面令人触目惊心。因此，你们班同学对于青少年交通事故的原因及后果进行了一次讨论。请你根据以下内容提示，给某英语报社写一封信，描述讨论结果并针对如何减少该类型交通事故的发生提出你的建议。
原因 司机 精力不集中，超速行驶
酒后驾车
青少年 不遵守交通规则
边走边看书、听音乐
后果 青少年轻者耽误学业，重者丧失生命
让父母十分担心
建议 （自由发挥，至少两点）
注意：1.词数：130-170
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
2.Dear Editor,
I’m writing to tell you about a discussion our classmates had about the causes and effects of traffic accidents involving teenagers.
There is no doubt that both drivers and teenagers are to blame for such traffic accidents. On the one hand, drivers fail to concentrate on their driving or drive above the speed limit. Some drivers even drive after consuming alcohol. On the other hand, teenagers often disobey traffic rules, such as ignoring traffic lights. Also, many teenagers read books or listen to music while walking, which causes traffic accidents.
Some teenagers lose their lives and some are badly hurt and need treatment, which cost them plenty of study time due to traffic accidents. This causes parents to worry.
Therefore, in order to reduce traffic accidents, I think the government should force drivers to be more responsible when driving. Furthermore, drivers who break traffic rules should be seriously published. At the same time, teenagers should learn more about road safety and always follow the traffic rules.
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