十句作文法是由有关专家总结出来的一种高分作文方法,考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大幅度地提高成绩。为此有必要向考生加以介绍,目的是使一些对作文没有把握的考生找到一条可行的解决办法。
需要指出的是所谓十句作文并非一定10句,从很多考生的高分(200词以下)来分析,句子数量在8句至12句(依句子长短和结构不同而不同)。如以每个句子平均1015个单词计算,便能用812个句子完成一篇要求120150字的作文。
其基本模式为:┌─主题句 句 1第一段─┤开头└─扩展句 句 2
┌─主题句 句 1第一段─┤正文├─扩展句 句 2├─扩展句 句 3├─扩展句 句 4├─扩展句 句 5├─扩展句 句 6├─扩展句 句 7├─扩展句 句 8└─扩展句 句 9
第三段 ──结尾句 句10结尾
第一段为开头,包括两句。第一句为主题句,必须提出,通过问题点明全文主题;第二句为扩展句,须进一步说明和支持主题句。或是将关系倒过来,由第一句说明情况,第二句提出问题。
第二段为正文,共七句。第一句(句3)为主题句,提出本段的主题,它应与第一段的主题相关和一致。第二句至第七句(句4一句7)为扩展句,说明和支持本段的主题。句与句之间要注意运用好过渡使段落逻辑合理,结构得当。
第三段为结尾,简化为一句,也是全文的总结句,它将前面内容总结为一结果,表明自己的论点。
三段之间的连接要灵活运用启、承、转、合的连接过渡手段。例如:Example 1 Television Television presents a vivid world in front of us. (1)(主题句)
Through TV, we can learn what is happening half way across the world. (2)(扩展句)
Television also plays an important educational role in our daily life.(3)(主题句)
For one thing, the TV university provides an opportunity for many young men who can not go to formal universities. (4)(扩展句)
For another, children can broaden their scope of knowledge by watching such popular programs as The Animal World, and The Mickey Mouse and Duck Donald. (5)(扩展句)
Besides, women can learn about the latest fashion of dresses and the best recipe for making fruit cakes. (6)(扩展句)
Furthermore, we learn many world advanced technologies from TV programs such as computer and telecommunication. (7)(扩展句)
And also we can learn singing, dancing and doing physical exercises in some special TV training courses. (8)(扩展句)
In short, the effect of TVs educational role is becoming more and more obvious. (9)(扩展句)
Having viewed these several aspects, and with many more TV program produced, I believe that our life will become even more significant. (10)(总结句) (全文共165个词)
Example 2 Changes in Peoples Diet There have been some changes nowadays in the diet of the Chinese. (1)(主题句)
For example, grain, the main food of most people in China, is now playing a less important role, while the consumption of high-nutrition food such as milk, meat has increased. (2) (扩展句)
The changes in diet can be accounted for by a number of factors. (3) (主题句)
First,people are much wealthier than before. (4) (扩展句)
With a higher income, they can afford to buy good foods which, in the past, were rarely seen on the dinnertables of ordinary families. (5) (扩展句)
Another factor is that people have realizedthe importance of a balanced diet to their health.
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