Part I Writing
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Doing Shopping Online
With the development of the Internet, shopping is no longer a tiring thing. Just click your mouse to choose the articles you like, and the purchase is done. You dont even have to step out of the room. It seems all easy and quick。
However, peoples opinions vary on this trend. Some believe that on line shopping is time and money saving. With plentiful selection options, they can buy whatever they like at any time convenient. Still others insist that mis-purchasing alone is annoying enough, not to mention the credibility of the sellers and the safety of their accounts。
In my opinion, the convenience and excitement of on line shopping is beyond all doubts. In the meantime, we must always bear in mind that certain traps do exist, so wed better make sure the sellers are trustworthy before buying. In addition, we should also guard ourselves from the potential hackers who might steal our account information。
文章点评:
这是一篇中等偏上的学生作文。 本文先对网购热潮进行简介,引出全篇;接着对网络购物的正反两方面进行对比;最后提出自己的看法结束全篇。整体看思路清晰,逻辑严密,行文流畅,用语较为地道。
下面说一下这篇文章的有待提高之处:
Part VI Translation
87. The university authorities did not approve the regulation, nor did they make any explanation / nor did they give the reason for doing so 。
解析:本题考察了两个知识点。① nor的倒装句用法,后半句表示也不的否定意义,注意助动词的时态与上半句保持一致;② 对某事做出解释的表达,考察了汉译英中动词转名词的技巧,explain explanation,或者nor did they give the reason for doing so同样可以。
88. Jane is tired of dealing with customer complaints and wishes that she could be assigned another job
解析:本题考察了wish从句的虚拟语气用法和分配某人做某事的词组搭配,assign sb. to sth. 或者assign sb. sth。
89. John rescued the drowning child at the risk of his own life 。
解析:本题考察了冒着的危险/风险做某事的词组搭配,可以用at the risk / expense of ones own life
90. George called his boss from the airport but it ① was his assistant who answered / picked up the phone;② turned out that his assistant answered / picked up the phone
解析:该句比较灵活,在句法上,既可以使用强调句结构,也可以采用turn out的惯用搭配;在接电话的表达上,可以用pick up / answer the phone。强调句结构为it be sb. who do sth. ,而turn out变化则较多,可以用turn out to be sb. who do sth。或者turn out + that + 从句。
91. Although he was interested in philosophy, his father persuaded him into / talked him intomajoring in law。
解析:本题考察说服某人做某事的表达,persuade / talk sb. into doing sth。
整体评价:今年6月的翻译题难度适中,89和91题的词组搭配是拿分题,而87题的倒装结构和88题的虚拟语气用法也是广大四级考生的老朋友,不熟悉实在说不过去~
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