a crowd of their guests collected and laughter was heard all over there.
汉语原句的节数增加到五节。译成英语,仍应确定正确的主干,两个学译不谋而合,将园中百花怒放, 而不是父母在园中设宴作为主干来处理。读来,给人一种观比萨斜塔的感觉。相比之下,参考译文则给人一种美感,散发出浓郁的英语味。原因很简单,参考译文选对了英译之主干 (my parents gave a banquet in the garden)。另外一个值得记取的经验是:汉语原句出现了一个句号,因此80%左右的学生译文,也亦步亦趋,硬性译成了一句,以上两句学译也不例外。复观参考译文,我们发现,被处理成两句,从容之中,更多了些干练!
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