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GMAT考试写作指导:Argument范文二

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  60. This editorial argues that, since career advancement for scientists typically require:

  60 to 80 hours of work per week, affordable all-day child care must be made available

  to scientists of both genders if they are to advance in their fields. Moreover, the editorial

  urges that requirements for career advancement be made more flexible to insure that

  pre-school children can spend a significant amount of time each day with a parent. This

  argument is problematic in two crucial respects.

  The major problem with the view expressed in the article is that inconsistent

  recommendations are endorsed in the argument. On the one hand, scientists are urged to

  put their children in all-day child-care facilities in order to advance their careers. On the

  other hand, they are encouraged to spend a significant amount of time each day with

  their children. Obviously, scientists cannot be expected to adhere to both of these

  recommendations.

  Another problem is that the recommendations are based on the assumption that e

  or at least most. scientists have young or preschool-age children. But the editorial

  provides no evidence to support this assumption, nor is this assumption very likely to be

  true. Since, childless scientists or scientists whose children are old enough t: take care of

  themselves will have no need for the services advocated in this article it is doubtful that

  these recommendations will receive much widespread support.

  In conclusion, this argument is unconvincing. To strengthen it, the author must

  show that most scientists have preschool children and consequently are in need c the

  recommended services. Additionally, the author must address and resolve the apparent

  conflict between the recommendations.

  

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