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GMAT考试写作指导:Argument范文四

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  62. In this argument the author concludes that the new community fitness center

  should be equipped with the state-of-the-art exercise machines featured in Powerflex

  magazine. In support of this recommendation two reasons are offered: Powerflex

  contains pictures of bodybuilders using such machines, and Powerflex is a popular

  magazine, as evidenced by the fact that it frequently sells out at the local newsstand.

  This argument is questionable on two counts.

  First, a major implication of the argument is that the bodybuilders pictured using

  the machines in Powerflex magazine reached their state of fitness as a result of using

  these machines. The only evidence offered to support this contention, however, is the

  pictures in the magazine. It is possible that the bodybuilders pictured use different

  equipment for their workouts and are merely posing with the machines for advertising

  purposes.

  Second, the author assumes that machines that are suitable for bodybuilding will

  also be suitable to help maximize the fitness levels of the towns residents. This

  assumption is highly questionable. Machines designed to increase muscle development

  are significantly different from those designed to increase cardiovascular fitness.

  Consequently, it is unlikely that the machines pictured in the magazine will be of much

  use to help maximize the fitness levels of the towns residents.

  In conclusion, this argument is unconvincing. To strengthen the argument the

  author would have to show that the bodybuilders pictured using the exercise machines

  actually used the machines to reach their level of muscle development. Additionally, the

  author would have to show that the machines were suitable for increasing the fitness

  levels of the persons using them.

  

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