高考英语满分作文：保护环境从我做起

　　导语：马上就要到世界环境日了，作为中学生我们能为环境做些什么呢?下面是小编为大家整理的一篇关于保护环境从我做起的高考英语满分作文，希望能帮到大家。

　　题目：你校学生会准备办一期英语墙报，主题为：保护环境从我做起。请你根据下图所示写一篇英语短文。

　　注意：1.词数120左右，开头语已为你写好;

　　2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　What Can I Do for Our Environment?

　　Everyone can do something for our environment.

　　第一档：满分作文

　　What Can I Do for Our Environment?

　　Everyone_can_do_something_for_our_environment.

　　When we are in our classroom after 8：30 in the morning，we should not keep the lights on to avoid wasting electricity since there is enough light in the classroom.And if it is cloudy and rainy and lights are on，we should turn off the lights after school.Another thing we can do is to protect the forest which is reducing.We should use both sides of paper and we should not use paper cups and disposable chopsticks which are made of trees.

　　All these are the things we can do every day to make our environment better. As long as we insist on doing so，our environment will become better and better.

　　点评：作者通过使用情态动词should、定语从句、条件状语从句、时间状语从句等，将图画中所传达的信息以及自己的观点顺利地表达了出来。该文条理清晰，内容完整。

　　第三档：15分

　　What Can I Do for Our Environment?

　　Everyone_can_do_something_for_our_environment.

　　As we all know ①one__fact，②resources__available are not ③reproducible and become less and less.Our environment is also becoming worse and worse.In the near future，we will face up with big trouble.So from now on we have to save resource and protect our environment.

　　If you leave ④classroom，do not forget to turn off the lights.You know，electricity is generated from other ⑤resource，such as water，charcoal.

　　And to protect environment，first of all we need protect forest.To protect forest，we ought to reduce or refuse to use wooden goods.For an instance，if we have to use paper，use both sides of it，and ⑥not use paper cups or disposable chopsticks.

　　点评：文章信息准确，没有遗漏要点，符合图画作文的写作要求。文中的①处多余;②处位置颠倒;③处表述不恰当;④处应加上定冠词the;⑤处应为复数;⑥处应为dont。