09届中考英语写作突破5
2. 补全短文(完型填空)
三遍法:第一遍了解大意;第二遍作题;第三遍检查确认
例题:
Alex ___1___ in a factory in a big town. He liked ____2____ very much, and was very good at it. Whenever he was free, he went down to the small ___3___ behind the factory and tried to catch some fish, but there were very ___4____ there, because the water of the river was dirty.. then one summer he went to the seaside during his holidays and ___5__ at a small, cheap hotel.
I've never fished in the sea ____6___, he thought. It will be rather different from fishing in our river.
On the first day he ____7____ a lot of fish and was very ____8___. He gave them to he hotel, and they ____9___ them for all the persons at the hotel, and they enjoyed them very much. After that, he did this every day. But when he got his bill at the ____10____ of his holidays, he saw on it For oil to fry fish (7days): 14 dollars.
答案:1. worked 2. fishing 3. river 4. few 5.stayed 6. before
7. caught 8.happy/pleased/glad 9. cooked 10. end
3.短文写作
短文写作评分标准
评分标准:
第一档:(15分-13分)符合题目要求,整篇表达清楚,语法无误,词汇拼写正确,卷面整洁。
第二档:(12分-10分)符合题目要求,整篇表达清楚,语法有少量错误,少量拼写错误,卷面欠整洁。
第三档:(9分-6分)基本符合题目要求,漏掉若干关键词,超出了题目限制,整篇表达基本清楚,语言有部分错误。
第四档:(3分-5分) 只能写出题目要求的一两个要点;只有个别句子能看懂,语法、词汇错误很多。
第五档:(1分-2分)只写出了符合题意的若干单词。
写作要求: 符合题意;逻辑通畅;语法单词正确;卷面清洁。
写作的难题--写作的步骤
篇--段--句--词
1.篇 明确主题
2.段 构建结构
运用提纲
提纲案例
《我最喜爱的老师》
篇 主题:
段 提纲: 1. 老师基本信息介绍
a. 年龄
b. 相貌
c. 所授科目
d.
2.令我感动的小故事 (描写与叙事相结合)
a. 时间 b. 地点 c. 事情的经过 d. 关键词 shy; encourage
3.我对老师的评价
关键词:enjoy his class; like
3. 句 填充内容
多用短句(简单句),慎用长句(并列句/复合句/并列复合句)
文中参杂若干语法正确的长句能够成为亮点并得到加分。
短句为主,辅之于长句。
句子的完整、时态、人称、单复数、以及动词的变形。
修辞
比喻 像
be like The house is like a tank.
He is like a panda.
as as I am as hungry as a wolf.
The teacher is as busy as a bee.
He is as strong as a horse.
夸张 I am the luckiest boy in the world to have such a nice teacher.
拟人 The sky is smiling with beautiful sunshine.
4.词
可分为 一般词汇 和 具体词汇
一般词汇 He is a good man. good
具体词汇 honest; diligent; hardworking; kind; nice; warmhearted; brave; selfless.
一般描写 和 具体描写
一般描写 She is very beautiful.
具体描写 She is very beautiful. She has dark hair, big shining eyes, and pretty face.
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