如何写出中考英语高分作文

　　一、写作决窍

　　总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;

　　关键词汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;

　　组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;

　　字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。

　　二、写作步骤

　　1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的信息，告诫读者什么。

　　2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。

　　3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。

　　4.先草稿，后抄写。

　　三、习作点评

　　[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组]

　　Choose one of your hobbies and write an article for the school magazine about it. Tell the magazine readers.

　　What exactly your hobby is;

　　When and how you became interested in this hobby;

　　Why you enjoy your hobby;

　　About your hopes and plans for the future.

　　写作要求：

　　1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的信息体现在文章中。

　　2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。

　　3.词数60-80.

　　[学生习作A]

　　My hobby is read books①.When I was seven years old.I became interested in reading books.I like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.I can learn a lot of knowledge from books. Books also② can teach me how to be a good person.Books even can solve many problems for me.I will read more good books to improve myself.

　　①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。

　　②also的位置应放在can之后。

　　[点评]：档次9-11分。

　　①要点不全，漏掉最后一个要点。

　　②句子基本无误，能正确传递信息给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。

　　③有少量错误。

　　[学生习作B]

　　My hobby is reading.Reading books is very enjoyable.When I was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.I went to bed every night.The stories were so interesting that I always felt they werent enough.So I began to read books by myself.Little by little I became interested in reading.I can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.When I read books,I can enjoy the beautiful sentences.At the same time I can improve my writing.I want to be a writer in the future,so I must study hard and read more books so that my dream can come true.