Describe a garden that you visited and that you liked
You should say:
where it is ①
what scenery it has ②
what people do there ③
and explain why you liked it ④
①: 简单交代地理位置即可。
②: 风景描述。可以是公园里的花草树木,建筑物。
③: 功能介绍。人们在公园里进行的活动。如:晨练,踏青,散步休闲等等。
④: 重点描述所描述的公园带给你的感受。可运用我课上讲到的技巧: 外在感觉+内心感受相辅相成进行升华。而其中以内心的感受为主,争取能够给考官讲述出一副生动的画面。
Alryt, I wanna talk about the Ampere Garden by this chance. It is located at the central part of Changping District on the north bank of the ancient Canal.
It is an exquisitely beautiful garden indeed. More than 50 species of trees shrubs are represented, This garden is at its best in late May and June, when the trees flowers are green and in full bloom. Ooooops! The color comes from both the profusion of flowers and from colorful foliage. Autumn brings dramatic colors of changing leaves, while the winter season allows the visitor to see exquisite examples of bark, berries, and woody textures.
Its peaceful in the morning, you can see seniors doing exercise and kids frolicking around. When the dark falls, you can see couples chatting under the trees, sitting on the grassland or walking on the bank of the lake. Actually, it is a good place for everyone.
There, all is naught but order and beauty, luxury, calm and voluptuousness. Imagine yourself to be standing there in mid-garden, this extraordinary beauty all around you. Imagine or see the colors, the shapes, the spaces, the feel of this garden, the textures, the smells, the sounds of this exquisite garden. Wood, stone and brick combine seamlessly with plants to create an elegant garden that is just right for relaxation contemplation. ... this garden is more beautiful than any one Ive ever seen in my life, I swear!
词汇:
canal 运河, 渠道
exquisitely 精巧地, 敏锐地
species 种, 类;
shrub 灌木, 灌木丛
in full bloom 盛开
profusion 大量;丰富
foliage 叶子 一簇叶子; 花和枝条
seniors 老人
frolick 嬉戏,玩耍
dark falls 夜幕降临 天黑
voluptuous 令人舒服的 艳丽的
extraordinary 特别的, 非凡的, 突出的, 奇特的
seamless 无缝的, 无伤痕的
contemplation 沉思 凝视
备选答案:
where it is ①
This garden is located on the corner of TE Street.
This little beauty is our only city garden that can get away with just a four foot picket fence due to the watchful eye of its close knit neighborhood. The garden sits on a terraced hillside between Irving and Myrtle Streets.
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