要做到reader-friendly,这是key point!怎样达到这一点,本人觉得有以下几点:
1.结构
条理清楚,最好一个段落表达一个意思,段落宜适中,不宜太长。针对IELTS250字,
可如此分配:para 1: introduction: state the fact, and show ur standpoint.
para 2: key sentence+support evidence
para 3: key sentence+support evidence
para 4: conclusion
根据你的ideas,for / against,可以多写一段,写出两个for or 两个against, 表明你更倾向于哪一方面。
在表达观点时,要记住一点,should之类不应用得太多,因为你是在阐述一个观点,这是主观的,不要太绝对,如果换作是中文,你一讲就是你应该怎么样? 读者会觉得,你在强迫他接受你的观点,可以用一些be likely to or may/might。
2.连词,副词和短语的运用
在有清晰的结构之后,要有连词把各个段落有机联结在一起,还在有段中,句与句之间的连接。副词来增强形容词与动词的表现力;另外不必一定要使用复杂的词汇,真正地道的英文,短语用得非常多。
比如连词:hence
副词:dramatically
短词:be likely to
3.简单,复杂句的并用,不要吝啬,
如果一篇文章一看没几个,,几乎全是复杂句,显得很有水准,但reader-friendly? 每段的中心句可用复杂句。
4.语法:单复数,a/an/the,不要缩写.
语法错误是难免的,但要尽量不要犯一些低级的,比如单复数,还有最易错的是怎样运the.还有不要把did not 缩成didnt.
5.用词的多样性.
常用的单词可多记几个同义词,这样在文章中读起来更舒服些。比如可能,may,perhaps,be likely to 因此hence, thus, consequently, as a result. 重要important vital crucial
整理一下我自己认为重要的一些词与短语,相信对写作有所帮助
burning question 目前急待解决的问题,最吸引人的问题,可用于第一段,亦可用pay attention to, attract .... , raise ... concern
完全地 altogether , completely, pure and simple
基本上 by and large
全面地 across-the board
全面的 comprehensive
许多:a plethora of =a large number of 不可能数用a large amout of
scads of , dozens of ,the bulk of
几个:a couple of =several
唯一而不可缺少的 unique and indispensable
不可避免的 inevitable = unavoidable
Unpalatable fact 不如人意的事实
Peter out 慢慢消失fade away 逐渐减弱Play a pivotal role = vital 关键的= important
from the minuscule low to the majestic high 从最低到最高Expedite = speed up = accelerate 加速
Tackle the problem 解决,处理问题
better off,更好,eg. It is better off taking a rest. 休息一下会更好。
归因于Ascribe to = attribute to
由于 by virtue of = due to = thanks to 接名词+ 从句 because = inasmuch as
在考试中的发挥,可能写不出平时练习的写作水平,因为时间紧迫再加上考试的压力,所以,还是建议写四段,事实上我在雅考中的写作,我写得感觉很差,因为用词很一般,而且句式也一般,唯一感觉好的就是条理清楚与论据充足,也许正因为此才拿了七分,希望大家能有所帮助。
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