雅思写作官方高分范文点评

　　When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and

　　ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To

　　what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　官方给出的高分答案

　　Overall, I disagree with the opinion expressed. I would like to begin by pointing out that traditional skills and ways of life are not automatically of one country, but of a culture or community.

　　In many ways, the history of civilization is the history of

　　technology: from the discovery of fire to the invention of the wheel

　　to the development of the Internet, we have been moving on from

　　previous ways of doing things.Some technologies, such as weapons of mass destruction, are of negative impact. Others, such as medical advances, positively help people to live better or longer, and so very much help traditional ways of life.

　　Interestingly, technology can positively contribute to the keeping alive of traditional skills and ways of life. For example, the populations of some islands are too small to have normal schools. Rather than breaking up families by sending children to the mainland, education authorities have been able to use the Internet to deliver schooling online. In addition, the Internet, and modern refrigeration techniques, are being used to keep alive the traditional skills of producing salmons; it can now be ordered from and delivered to, anywhere in the world.就是靠这个写作技法独步文坛。创作出了另世人惊奇的尤利西斯.本文中，考官通过岛屿孩子的例子说明了因特网的好处，同时又用因特网举出了另外的一个例子。明白这个 写作思路吗!A-B B-C C-D D-E，如果没有篇幅的限制，他可以任意的导出。而且他这次的例子又是那么奇怪，居然说的是因特网以及现代的冷冻技术的应用使得传统的马哈鱼加工工艺保留了下来。现在，马哈鱼可以在全球达成定购与收购)。

　　In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means pointless, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.