教了一年多的雅思写作,学生总是问我要怎样去使文章的句型多样化起来,至少能做到满足6分的写作标准。其实一篇好文章的条件很多。除了内容丰富和组织紧密之外,词汇的运用和句子的处理,也起着决定性作用。但是目前很多雅思考生的问题就是句子过于口语化,普通化,句式仅仅是在主谓式运转,没有强调句,被动句和there be句型等。论证部分的内容更是用非常平铺直叙记流水帐式的方式写,毫无生动性。这个现象也是归因于考生的思维局限没有得到扩展,写作习惯和平时的阅读积累句型等方面原因。现在随着手机短信,互联网的广泛应用,写作这个东西变得越来越不正式。习惯问题往往会给雅思写作带来致命的伤害。所以,我个人觉得养成一个写作的习惯不管是对考试还是将来的工作都会是大有帮助的。
在雅思写作中,大家也都可以了解到这个最简单的道理:雅思句子可长可短,同一件事,可以用不同的句式表达。如果句子清一色是简单句,文章必定很单调乏味。如果全篇充满了冗长的复杂句,读起来也很费力。那什么才是最合适的呢?最好的方法是以简单句为基础,配合适当的并列句和复杂句。简单句可长可短,通常要加些附属成分,如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词短语,以及节缩成分。
总之,作者可根据情况,使句子多样化,使文章灵活多姿。例如下列五个句子的基本概念一样,但是句式不同,内容重点也有些差别:
The goats grazed peacefully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. +2)
Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter.
In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. - )
There were goats grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter.
As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter.
The young pilots first overseas training made him feel very uneasy.
Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training.
The young pilot was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy.
It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.
Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy.
The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very uneasy.
The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy.
When the young pilot was on his/first overseas trainging, he felt very uneasy.
As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy.
The young pilot was on his first overseas training, so that he felt very uneasy.
在上述12个句子中,-是简单句;是并列句;-是复杂句。简单句除和之外,其他五样,用的人并不多。人们最喜欢采用复杂句,尤其是和这两款;接着便是并列句。如果大多数人的句子只限于,, , 和这五种,而其他的则弃如敝屣,不是很可惜吗?
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