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雅思写作思路透析:是否该禁止不必要的航空旅行

发布时间:2016-02-29  编辑:查字典英语网小编

  Topic:

  A long-distance flight consumes the fuel as much as a car consumes in several years time, and causes the same amount of pollution as cars. So some people think we should abandon the non-essential fights , and it is more efficient than restricting the car use. Give your opinion about it.

  接下来分析一下这道题目,应该说上过我的作文课的学生会发现这次的题目不难写,因为我在课上重点分析过类似的题目。从结构上来说,这个题目毫无疑问适合用三对一结构来进行写作。以下为参考结构:

  第一段:开头段

  Introduce the topic

  Statement

  第二段:让步段

  第三段:重点段

  第一句:过渡句

  第二句:分论点一

  The practice potentially hinders the economic development in most countries.

  第三句: Theoretical Evidence

  Abandonning non-essential flight-Employees in related fileds such as international tourist guides are likelty to become unemployed-Soaring unemployement rate-Economic development suffers

  第四句: 分论点二

  The practice is likely to bring about great financial disaster to some countries whose economy relies on tourism to a large extent.

  第五句:Case Evidence

  可以以马尔代夫这样的国家为例。

  第六句: 分论点三

  The practice is also likely to cost people much more time on traveling, especially to some business people who need constantly travel from place to place.

  第四段:结尾段

  Summarize the nature of the practice-The problems outnumber the benefits

  Restate the opinion-The practice is not a wise decision.

  

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