雅思写作高分的10条要诀

　　雅思写作高分的10条要诀

　　simple and easy tips for atleast securing a 7 band score in writing.

　　1. spend 5 minutes on jotting down points on your question paper.

　　2. First impression is the last impression. Heard of this expression?

　　3. Your body paras should be stick to 2-3 good points on either side you choose. They can be based on your personal experiences or from history or from current events. Develop your essay around those points.

　　4. Your concluding para should be short and it is no more introducting points but rather reinforcing your firm stand on the topic. A three-four line conclusion is good enough.

　　5. When you write an essay. Write it straight from your heart. There must be a soul behind the writing. There should be some emotions in the essay.

　　6. Keep your writing sentences short. If you want to write a long sentence, its length should not be exceeded over two short sentences.

　　7. Use some $5 vocabulary words . So that they can stand out and the checker can notice them easily. Those $5 vocabuary words are common words that you see in newspaper articles over and over again.

　　8. Dont worry about essay length. A 260 word essay can secure a good band than a 350 word essay.

　　9. Dont ever give a single chance to your checker to pick up speeling mistakes. If you write the essay with that mentality, youll do weill in the real test.

　　10. Learn to relax so that you can come up with good points for your essay. Writing essays should be a past time activity for you rather than a cumbersome chore which is forced upon you by a third party.

　　Topic: The gap between standard of living in the city and the countryside is increasingly becoming wide. How to reduce the difference?

　　Introduction: When you look back to the last century, amazingly you will find that not only all worlds largest populated cities had experienced different population growth rates, but also the difference between the city and the countryside had grown accordingly. Two reasons of mine can examine this tendency as following.

　　Topic sentence 1: The glamorous city life allures lots of human resources to move to/agglomerate in the city, taking major contribution to the gap. Supporting sentences: In the city, there are many advantages to attract those talented people to settle down--more job opportunities, cultural activities, sporting events, you name them. Therefore, even those well-educated people who are originated from the country intend to lead a dynamic city life instead of returning to face the static country view. If the rural government can work out some favorable policies such as low prices of land occupied for industrial uses, with the combination of low cost of workforce, investors are willing to establish factories in the countryside. The improvement of employment situation will enormously help pull back some intellectuals and lessen the gap.

　　Topic sentence 2: In the second part, I would mention the factor of transportation. Supporting sentences: The vital resistance of economic development in the countryside is the inconvenient transportation. It has been witnessed in China that almost all leading cities are scattered along the coastline. They take advantages of sea, air and other sophisticated transport facilities to enjoy high economic growth rates. I suggest that the central government should fund on infrastructure for the whole nation, including rural areas, to build up a nationwide transport network. Consequently tourism as well as housing in the countryside will be boosted, and the difference between the city and the country would be minimized.

　　conclusion: To sum up, intelligent resources would determine who is the winner or loser of the intense competition; moreover, transit systems also play an important role in developing economy. If both issues were tackled properly in the countryside, gap between the city and the country would never be overwhelming.