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实例解析：连接词让雅思作文更生动

发布时间：2016-02-29 编辑：查字典英语网小编

　　实例解析：连接词让雅思作文更生动

　　表示增补的连接词：and, as well as, besides, furthermore, moreover, not only...but also等

　　表示转折的连接词：however, in spite, though, but, otherwise, whereas, nonetheless等

　　表示原因的连接词：since, as, so, because, why等

　　案例：He was born in a small village. His father was a teacher in the village school. His mother did the housework. He began to go to his fathers school at seven. He graduated from it six years later. He went to the junior middle school in a nearby town. He studied at a senior middle school in the county. He was a good student there.

　　分析：尽管这段话中所有的句子都是正确的，但是句型单一，而且在八个句子中只有His father和His mother两个不同的主语，其他句子都是以He开头的。

　　修改：He was born in a small village. His father taught at the village school and his mother did the housework. He began to study at his fathers school at seven and six years later entered the junior middle school in a nearby town. After graduating from it he was admitted to a senior middle school in the county, where he proved to be a good student.

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