高考记言

“嘭”的一声巨响，五彩斑斓的火焰带着梦想与希望直冲云霄，划破静谧的漫漫夜空，留下一道道最完美灿烂的轨迹。

"Bang" a loud sound, colorful flame with dreams and hopes straight to the sky, across the quiet long night sky, leaving the most perfect brilliant track.

我行走在江边，看着彼岸升起的烟花，虽非属罕见，却美得不加修饰，仿佛看到了生之繁华，以至于忘了往前挪走一步。

I walked along the river and watched the fireworks rising on the other side. Although they were not rare, they were so beautiful that they seemed to see the prosperity of life that I forgot to move forward.

我爱这烟花，确信无疑，就像对书本的感情，偏执而无法扭转。它虽然始终停留在预定的轨道上，却总以自己的方式向盈盈的月光挑战，向绚烂的星空挑战，它注定将成为夜空中的主角。

I love the fireworks, and I'm sure it's just like the feeling for books, which is too paranoid to change. Although it always stays on the predetermined track, it always challenges to the full moon and the gorgeous starry sky in its own way. It is destined to become the leading role in the night sky.

而我们又何尝不是这样呢？用青涩的期盼与青春的激情写着三年韶华的轻狂，写着初涉人世的沧桑。我们尽情地欢笑，为苦战难题的成功而自豪；我们时而沉默少言，以卖弄奋笔疾书于题海，一面思考未来的人生方向；我们缅怀过往，挥洒受挫时的难抑的悲伤，却又总能拾起风帆，带着期望再次启航。

And why don't we? With the green hope and the passion of youth, I write three years of frivolity and the vicissitudes of life. We laugh heartily and are proud of the success of the hard struggle; we are sometimes silent and speechless to show off our efforts to write on the topic of the sea and think about the future direction of life; we remember the past and sprinkle the unbearable sadness when we are frustrated, but we can always pick up the sails and set sail again with expectation.

十二年的人生路，比起时隐时现的烟火，更显出它的坎坷和绵长。或许，它承载的不仅仅是闪光的那一刻精彩，更有人生的蓝图、人生的归宿。

Twelve years of life, compared with the hidden fireworks, shows its ups and downs and long. Perhaps, it carries not only the brilliant moment, but also the blueprint and destination of life.

十二年的奋斗只为那几小时的挥笔一搏，它满载了莘莘学子的美好憧憬与向往，满载了不复往昔的汗水与眼泪。它不是生命的终结，却以终结的绝然方式狠狠地画上了一个句号。

Twelve years of struggle only for a few hours, it is full of the students' beautiful vision and yearning, full of the sweat and tears that will never be back. It's not the end of life, but it's the end of the way.

回头看看远方，彼岸的烟花依旧在燃放，那大片大片的色彩浸染过江水，突现出姹紫嫣红的波光。我站在江岸俯首凝望，仿佛进入了光影重重的时空隧道，过往的点点滴滴历历在目。

Looking back at the distance, the fireworks on the other side are still on fire, and the large pieces of color permeate the river, highlighting the colorful waves. I stood on the Bank of the river and looked down, as if I had entered the tunnel of time and space full of light and shadow. I could see every bit of the past.

朋友们喜怒哀乐的脸庞在耀眼夺目的夜空中一个个浮现。要么因为老师的表扬，开心得像个三岁的孩子拍手欢呼雀跃；要么拿着触目惊心的成绩单，难过地悲怆满怀；要么看着同学领着奖状，抛给他一个羡慕又妒忌的眼神，却总也不愿承认他的好；要么就着一道数学题，与朋友争论得面红耳赤。

The faces of our friends, happy, angry and sad, emerge one by one in the dazzling night sky. Either because of the teacher's praise, happy as a three-year-old child clapped his hands and cheered; or with a shocking report card, sad full of sorrow; or looking at the students led by the certificate, throwing him an envious and envious look, but never willing to admit his good; if you want to have a math problem, and a friend's face red.

高考前的十二年就有如此酸甜苦辣的生活，让我们在苦中求进，进中取甜。我们在这些年里不断成长，懂得了把握完满的青春，懂得了体谅他人的无奈。不是只有哲人才懂得思考人生，我们同样也在边走边想。

Twelve years before the college entrance examination, there was such a sour, sweet and bitter life. Let's make progress in the bitterness and take the sweetness in the progress. In these years, we have been growing up, and we have learned to grasp the perfect youth and understand the helplessness of others. It's not only philosophers who know how to think about life. We also think while walking.

恍眼中，那空中艳丽的烟花仿佛勾勒出一幅幅丰富多彩的生活画面，那里蕴藏的是我们十二年来用动人的心弦谱写的一首青春赞歌。

In my eyes, the gorgeous fireworks in the air seem to outline a colorful picture of life, which contains a paean of youth composed by our moving heartstrings in the past 12 years.

名师点评

Famous teachers' comments

该考生另辟蹊径，不直接说“高考”，而是大谈“高考”前个人的奋斗历程，“用心良苦”，说高考，就是在说自己的成长经历，说高考的酸甜苦辣，也是在说自己成长过程中的酸甜苦辣。考生从江边的烟花说起，进而联想到自己的青春，在缅怀过去时，更加憧憬未来，立意颇高。语言极其流畅，是不可多得的一类文。

The examinee is not directly talking about the "college entrance examination", but talking about the personal struggle process before the "college entrance examination". He is talking about his own growth experience, the ups and downs of the college entrance examination, and the ups and downs of his growth process. The examinee starts from the fireworks on the riverside, and then associates with his youth. When he remembers the past, he looks forward to the future more, with a high intention. The language is extremely fluent, which is a rare kind of writing.