每年高考,语文作文都很受关注。
Every year, the college entrance examination, Chinese composition are very concerned.
2007年福建省高考语文卷,一反自行命题前3年的传统,在作文题的命制上直接给出题目———《季节》,要求考生写一篇除诗歌外文体不限、不少于800字的作文。这个题目,看似平实,但要出彩却不容易。今年我省的考生在这个命题上的发挥如何?昨天,2007年高考语文作文阅卷工作结束,共评出12篇高分作文。让我们随着这12位考生的笔触,去品读他们眼中的“季节”,去看看考生们给我们怎样的答卷。
In 2007, Fujian Province college entrance examination Chinese volume, contrary to the tradition of three years before the self proposition, directly gives the title - "season" in the composition system, requiring the examinee to write a composition with no limit in style and no less than 800 words except poetry. This topic seems plain, but it's not easy to be brilliant. How does the examinee of our province play on this proposition this year? Yesterday, the 2007 college entrance examination of Chinese composition marking work finished, a total of 12 high score composition. Let's follow the strokes of these 12 examinees to taste the "season" in their eyes and see what kind of answers they give us.
季节
Season
怀念从前,季节总如歌般行吟。当春来到时,就有“桃之夭夭”的景致;当夏来到时,就有“小荷才露尖尖角”的生机;当秋走近时,会有“晴空一鹤排云上”的诗情;当冬走近时,会有“窗含西岭千秋雪”的韵致。
Miss the past, the season always sing like a song. When the spring comes, there will be the scene of "peaches are young"; when the summer comes, there will be the vitality of "small lotus only shows its sharp corner"; when the autumn comes, there will be the poetry of "a crane in the clear sky and a row of clouds"; when the winter comes, there will be the charm of "window contains the snow in the west ridge for thousands of autumn".
那该是怎样的乐趣,怎样的生活?
What kind of fun, what kind of life?
有四季伴你前行,生活的路多姿多彩,一路蜂忙蝶舞,一路花香弥漫。
There are four seasons to accompany you forward. The road of life is colorful. The bees are busy dancing and the flowers are fragrant all the way.
而如今?
And now?
一幢幢高楼拔地而起,于是春天的草没有了立足之地;土地水泥化了,夏天的溪流没有了流淌的床;清洁工扫得勤快,秋天的落叶没有了归根之所;扫雪车多了,冬天的雪没有了消融之家。
Many tall buildings have been built up, so the grass in spring has no place; the land has been cemented, and the streams in summer have no flowing beds; the cleaners sweep hard, and the leaves in autumn have no place to return to; there are many snow sweepers, and the snow in winter has no melting home.
工厂的烟囱多了,挺拔的大树多了,宽阔的大道有了,山间宁静的小路没了。
There are more chimneys in the factory, more tall trees, wide roads and quiet paths among the mountains.
哎,我们多么可怜啊。办公室一族无论严寒或酷暑,总有空调机调节室内温度。办公室似乎可以称得上“四季如春”,可君不见那里面的空气如何的污浊!
Oh, how pitiful we are. No matter the office is cold or hot, there are always air conditioners to adjust the indoor temperature. The office can be called "four seasons like spring", but you can't see how dirty the air is!
一名演员,必须在酷夏顶着大太阳穿冬天的棉袄,还要对着摄影机微笑,显得“很温暖”。外面,明明大雪飘飘,她还要穿着清凉的夏装在台上演出,演出夏天的味道。
An actor must wear winter's cotton padded jacket under the sun in the hot summer and smile at the camera to look "very warm". Outside, it's snowing. She's going to wear cool summer clothes to perform on the stage to show the taste of summer.
可怜的人哪!
Poor man!
季节,如此与他们格格不入。季节很艰难地想走近他们,他们有些人却用手一挥,摆开了四季。
Season, so out of place with them. Season is very difficult to approach them, some of them with a wave of their hands, opened the four seasons.
有的人汲汲追求,追求财富,追求地位名望,所以他们厌恶四季,一年到头只要能西装革履,风风光光就行。这些人,是季节该抛弃的人!
Some people pursue wealth and fame, so they hate the four seasons. They only need to wear Western clothes and wear Western clothes all year round. These people, is the season to abandon people!
可是,绝大部分的人是可怜的。他们喜欢季节,可是他们的工作时间安排表上,没有安排与四季见面玩耍的时间。他们是被迫离开季节的。
But most people are poor. They like the season, but they don't have time to meet and play with the four seasons on their work schedule. They were forced to leave the season.
能不可怜他们吗?
Can you spare them?
什么时候,还能够有像李清照那样与朋友一起“争渡、争渡,惊起一滩鸥鹭”的时光;什么时候,还有机会去原野桥畔领略“斜风细雨不须归”的清爽?
When can we have the time like Li Qingzhao and his friends to "fight for crossing, fight for crossing, and start a beach of gulls and herons" together? When can we have the opportunity to go to the riverside of Yuanye bridge to enjoy the cool "wind and rain do not have to return"?
城市在一座座地建设着,为何不给季节留一个空间,让他们在城市安家?不要只让季节在稻田走过,也让季节在城市与人为伴。
Cities are being built one by one. Why not leave a space for the seasons to settle down in the city? Don't just let the season pass in the rice field, but also let the season accompany people in the city.
怀念从前,向往明天。希望明天,季节在城市扎根发芽,开花,如歌般行吟。
Miss the past, yearn for tomorrow. I hope that tomorrow, the season will take root and sprout in the city, blossom and sing like a song.
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