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上帝的宠儿

God's darling

——东施新传

——New biography of Dongshi

我，东施也，以丑名垂青史。但千百年来，我一直过得很郁闷，很不爽呀！

I, Dongshi, have a reputation for ugliness. But for thousands of years, I have been very depressed, very unhappy!

话说自从那年那日，我学习邻家美眉西施皱眉捧心、病歪歪的样子后，被时人嘲笑了一番，还原创了一条成语“东施效颦”送给我后，我就足不出户，整天以泪洗面。（但是，尽管我茶不思，饭不想的，倒也没见消瘦下去。）我就不明白，西施病成那样，臭男人们倒是我见犹怜，大发慈悲和男子汉的英雄情怀呢。我呢，只不过稍微学习、模仿了一下，为何引发众多的不满和讽刺呢？我知道，因为我生了一张丑陋的脸蛋，郁闷之极！我不禁要责怪父母的粗心、责怪上帝的不公了，上帝在创造我的时候一定是走了神，不然我的五官为何这样粗糙和错位！

Since that day, when I learned from my neighbor's beauty, Xi Shi, who frowned and held his heart and was ill, I was laughed at by the people of that time. After I was given the idiom "to imitate the frown in the East", I stayed indoors and washed my face with tears all day long. (but even though I don't think about tea or rice, I haven't lost weight.) I don't understand that when Xishi is so ill, I can't help the smelly men. They are merciful and heroic. I just studied and imitated it a little bit. Why did it cause so much dissatisfaction and satire? I know, because I gave birth to an ugly face, extremely depressed! I can't help blaming the carelessness of my parents and the unfairness of God. God must have gone when he created me, otherwise why my five senses are so rough and misplaced!

我一定要找上帝算账！强烈的思想占据了我的心，我决定不惜一切代价去找上帝评评理，找回我失去的一切！

I must find God! Strong thoughts occupied my heart, I decided to go to God at all costs to judge, find all I lost!

等待了千百年，我终于乘坐“神舟十号”载人飞船飞向太空，飞到上帝的“安乐宫”去。上帝的家园可不是一般的美丽，难以用笔墨形容！我虽然妒忌羡慕，可也无心留恋，直奔“极乐殿”去。咦，那个坐在花园中闭目养神的老头儿是谁呀？，就是上帝！于是，我整整衣衫，走上前去，咳了一声，说：“上帝老爷，你倒也悠闲自在呀！，怎么不去民间体察疾苦呢？我，东施，因为你的疏忽，长成这副模样，受尽的人们的白眼和嘲笑，你要为我做主呀！”说着，不禁悲从中来，眼泪沾湿了我的衣襟。上帝睁开了双眼，微笑着看着我，倾听着我的诉说。等到我的控诉一吐为快后，他才慢慢地开口说道：“我可怜的孩子呀，这么多年来，你都生活在众人的眼光里，你失去了自我，同时又编织自我束缚的牢笼，你从来没有从自己身上发现自己的优点和闪光点呀！”接着，上帝又缓缓说道：“万物生于世间，自有它的价值。你看，这花园中，小草没有鲜花美丽，可是要是没有了小草，鲜花的美丽就凸现不出来。你呢，不要模仿别人，不要羡慕别人，赶快走出这个自我小天地，找找你的特长和优点，帮助他人，为世人服务，你会收获到人们应有的喜爱和尊敬的！”说完，上帝挥挥衣袖，又闭目养神去了。

After waiting for thousands of years, I finally took the shenzhou-10 manned spacecraft to the space and flew to God's "easy Palace". God's home is not the general beauty, hard to describe with ink! Although I was envious and envious, I didn't care to go straight to the "blissful Palace". Eh, who's that old man sitting in the garden keeping his eyes shut? , God! Then, I dressed up, went forward, coughed, and said, "Lord God, you are free and easy! Why don't we go to the people to observe the sufferings? I, Dongshi, because of your negligence, have grown into this kind of look, the white eyes and ridicule of the people who have suffered, you must make up your mind for me! " Said, can not help but from the middle, tears wet my lapel. God opened his eyes, smiled at me, listened to me. After my accusation was quickly released, he slowly opened his mouth and said, "my poor child, you have been living in the eyes of all people for so many years. You have lost yourself, and at the same time you have woven a cage of self-restraint. You have never found your own advantages and highlights from yourself!" Then God said slowly, "all things are born in the world and have their own value. You see, in this garden, the grass is not as beautiful as flowers, but if there is no grass, the beauty of flowers will not be highlighted. As for you, don't imitate others, don't envy others, go out of this small world of yourself, find your strengths and advantages, help others and serve the world, and you will get the love and respect that people should have! " After that, God waved his sleeves and went away again.

我听了上帝的一番话后，愣在了那儿……

After listening to God's words, I was stunned there

从上帝那儿回来后，我反省了自己，审视了自己。我，拥有健壮的身体，有的是力气，于是干完了自家田里的活儿，还可以帮助邻居李奶奶家一把；我，拥有婉转的歌喉，唱歌的时候，既愉悦了自己，还给劳动的人们以快乐的享受，啊，我还走上了星光大道的舞台；我，拥有明亮的眼睛，我做的女红，绣出的花朵可以吸引蝴蝶飞舞，入围国际大奖……

When I came back from God, I reflected on myself and examined myself. I have strong body and strength, so I finish my work in my own field, and I can also help my neighbor Grandma Li's family. I have a gentle singing voice. When I sing, I not only delight myself, but also enjoy the people who work happily. Ah, I also walk on the stage of Xingguang Avenue. I have bright eyes, I make scarlet, embroidered flowers It can attract butterflies to fly and be shortlisted for international awards

哈哈，我笑口常开，我走出了自我小天地，受到了各家媒体的采访，我不再是丑的代名词，我是个性的化身，新时代女性的代表。

Ha ha, I always smile. I have stepped out of my own small world and been interviewed by various media. I am no longer the synonym of ugliness, I am the embodiment of personality and the representative of women in the new era.

这天，我收到了来自天庭的贺卡：“你是我的宠儿——安琪儿之东施，祝贺你！”

On this day, I received a greeting card from heaven: "you are my favorite - Angel's host, Congratulations!"