2017届高考英语书面表达练讲指导评析（第二部分）专题四：开放式专题练评3

　　2017届高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第二部分专题练评）（专题四 开放式3）

　　请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.

　　注意： ①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　④词数为120左右。

　　事例诠释You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.”的内涵呢？笔者以为这样的事例事1.三年前由于中考的失作，你没有考入重点中学，而是进了一所普通中学……

　　①想想当时你本人面对那样的校园、教室、宿舍等等（应该与你梦想考入的重点中学肯定有不小的反差）心情如何；

　　②普通中学也不是一无是处。你本人怎样利用其有利一面（这点要充分地进行挖掘）使自己获得了学习上的成功的；

　　③你本人的经历告诉你一个什么道理（揭示主题，与题中那句话挂上钩）。

　　参考答案一（官方提供）

　　Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.

　　My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.

　　参考答案三

　　Three years ago the fault during the senior high school entrance examination led to me to enter an ordinary school. On the first day at school, when I glared at the bad-conditioned dormitory where I would live for three years, I was so disappointed that I would give up studying there. However, soon I found the teachers were strict in their work. They tried their best to make classes interesting and lively. Whenever I had trouble in study, they often offered to help me. Besides, the classmates got along well with each other. So I decided to make the best of the advantages. After several months, I made great progress and was praised by my teachers, which made me regain my confidence.

　　My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.

　　事例2.天生或后天残疾。举例说明他们这些残疾人是怎么通过自己的努力来改变自己人生的……

　　参考答案一

　　Nowadays faced with many opportunities and challenges, many people are always confused about how to deal with them. As far as I am concerned, we should attach great importance to what you are given, which can benefit you a lot in return.

　　???

　　I have ever watched a TV program named “If you are the one”, in which a girl impressed me most. As a little girl, she was badly injured in an accident, causing her to lose her arms. However, it didn’t make her frustrated or break down. Instead, she kept her courage to lead a new life. Disabled as she was, she could challenge a variety of things with her legs, such as eating, writing, even playing the piano. I think it was her courage and perseverance that made her succeed.

　　??? From what I have mentioned above, what makes the girl outstanding is that she can make full use of what she is given even if she has lost her arms.

　　事例3.由于家庭的变故，举例说明怎样克服这个不利的因素而取得成功的……

　　参考答案

　　“You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it. ”Do you believe this proverb? Perhaps my classmate Liu Yilin’s experience can convince you of it.

　　Liu Yilin’s life is very difficult. He lost his parents when he was achild, and he was brought up by his uncle. His living conditions were worse than most of us. However, when asked about his ambitions, he says with a smile, “I want to go to Qinghua University to study physics, and I want to make great contributions to our motherland and to the mankind.” Encouraged by the great will, he has been studying very hard. He won the gold medal in the World Olympic Physics Competition this year. Our school has decided to recommend him for admission to Qinghua University.

　　事例4.面对困难，坚持克服困难，从而取得成功……

　　参考答案一

　　Faced with “what you are given” is not beneficial to you, if you are a man of perseverance, you are sure to choose to fight and finally you are a success. Believe it or not, one of my experiences can convince you of it.

　　参考答案二

　　Faced with “what you are given” is not beneficial to you, if you are a man of perseverance, you are sure to choose to fight and finally you are a success. Believe it or not, one of my experiences can convince you of it.

　　同步练习

　　请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。

　　Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn about team work. Teamwork shows us how other people’s roles fit the purpose of the group, and it teaches to be patient and how to respond to different people.

　　注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；

　　④文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；

　　⑤词数为100左右。

　　参考答案