浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习 短文改错+书面表达（43）

　　浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

　　2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 ( 从第11处起 ) 不计分。

　　例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I

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　　was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday.

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　　We all have a strong desire to succeed. For some the desire is great than that of the average people. In fact, everyone wants to be successful so very few are willing to pay the price of hard working. Success is an attitude and has no really secrets. It all start with your belief system. Your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself. You must at first believe in yourself. On your journey to success, you will find that there are no shortcuts. You will never be able to completely master every detail of your life. Attempt to do so will only lead to disappointment. Besides, it’s necessary of you to have clear goals. You’d better put your goals on paper where they are visible so that they can help to monitor your progress.

　　第二节：书面表达(满分30分)

　　近年来，不少中学生注册了博客，对此人们观点各异。有人认为写博客可以帮助学生展示自我，减缓压力。也有人认为它浪费时间，耽误学习。请根据以上提示并结合自己的想法写一篇100-120词左右的短文，谈谈不同的人们以及你自己对中学生写博客的看法。

　　注意：

　　1．文章的题目和开头已给出(不计词数)

　　2．文中不得出现考生的具体信息

　　Middle School Students Are Writing Blogs

　　In recent years, it’s a common phenomenon that a growing number of middle school students start their own blogs on the Internet.

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　　第一节（每小题1分，共10分）

　　We all have a strong desire to succeed. For some the desire is great than that of the average people.

　　greater

　　In fact, everyone wants to be successful so very few are willing to pay the price of hard working.

　　but

　　work

　　Success is an attitude and has no really secrets. It all start with your belief system. Your belief

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　　starts

　　system starts with what you feel about yourself. You must at first believe in yourself. On your

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　　journey to success, you will find that there are no shortcuts. You will never be able to completely

　　master every detail of your life. Attempt to do so will only lead to disappointment. Besides, it’s

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　　necessary of you to have clear goals. You’d better put∧ your goals ∧on paper where they are

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　　down

　　或

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　　visible so that they can help to monitor your progress.

　　第二节（共30分，按高考评分标准分5档给分）

　　One possible student version

　　On this point, different people hold quite different views. Some believe it can provide a colorful stage for students to show their talents. Also, it’s a nice way to help them relieve pressure. However, others have totally contrary opinions and show great concern over it. They think managing a blog will take a lot of time and energy, which should be used for study.

　　Personally, I do approve of students having their own blogs. Nowadays, the Internet is playing a vital part in our life whose influence we can’t afford to ignore. As high school students in the information age, it’s essential to learn and make the most of this communicative tool for better study and better life. As a matter of fact, whether blogging is of harm or not depends on how we employ it. If we can take full advantage of blogging and meanwhile avoid its negative effects, we can surely benefit a lot from it.