浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习 短文改错+书面表达（24）

　　浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Though great progress has been made in science these years, there are still many people live

　　in poor conditions. They make their living by collecting and selling used thing. Their children

　　cannot go to school because they have not enough money to send their children to there. Why

　　you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? The answer lies on the population

　　explosion. A president of a developing country once say: “It is us who are to blame for the

　　poverty because we used to ‘produce’ children without limit.” Although this few words sound

　　simple enough, they have clear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.

　　书面表达（满分30分）

　　假如你是李华，你们学校最近开展了创建“平安校园”的活动。你们班为此组织主题

　　班会，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，谈一谈你对如何创建“平安校园”的一些想法。短文应

　　该包括下面的内容：

　　1．安全意识的重要性；

　　2．在运动中要注意安全；

　　3．在校内要注意人身安全；

　　4．同学间发生矛盾时，一定要保持冷静、理智；

　　5．逐步将“平安校园”活动转化为全体师生的实际行动。

　　注意：

　　1．不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节使行文连贯；

　　2．词数100--120个左右；

　　3．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　注释：校园安全 safety at school

　　My dear classmates,

　　There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life. Recently our school

　　has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay on.____________