浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习 短文改错+书面表达（5）

　　浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　例如：

　　It

　　was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧weekend with you. Luckily

　　the

　　I was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p.m. in

　　am

　　on

　　Friday evening.

　　After our final examinations, my brother and me thought we would give ourselves a treat

　　at restaurant. While waiting for our food, we emptied all our small changes from our wallets

　　on the table and counted it out. Soon, our food arrived with a note. It reads, “Your lunch has been

　　paid for. Have a lovely meal!” It was a wonderfully surprise as nothing like that had ever been

　　happened to us. I remembered an old man sitting nearby. He should have thought we didn’t have

　　enough money to the bill. We looked around to thank him, and he was not there. His kindness

　　meant so many to us.

　　第二节：书面表达（满分30分）

　　写一篇100—120个词的短文。你的应：

　　注意：1的标题已给出（不计词数）2. 参考词汇

　　Too Much Care Spoils a Child

　　As is shown in the picture above, ________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________

　　第一节 （10分，每小题1分）

　　After our final examinations, my brother and me thought we would give ourselves a treat

　　I

　　at ∧ restaurant. While waiting for our food, we emptied all our small changes from our wallets

　　a

　　change

　　on the table and counted it out. Soon, our food arrived with a note. It reads, “Your lunch has been

　　read

　　paid for. Have a lovely meal!” It was a wonderfully surprise as nothing like that had ever been

　　wonderful

　　happened to us. I remembered an old man sitting nearby. He should have thought we didn’t have

　　must

　　enough money to the bill. We looked around to thank him, and he was not there. His kindness

　　for

　　but

　　meant so many to us.

　　much

　　第二节（30分）

　　One possible student version

　　As is shown in the picture above, the blooming plant is being destroyed by over-watering. Often people do things with good intentions, but the result may be quite different. Such can also be the case with us while we grow up.

　　To spare us the kind of hardships they had in their childhood, our parents tend to offer us too much care, for example, making beds, washing clothes and even carrying school bags for us. They are doing all these without knowing that they are actually spoiling us. As children, what we really need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that we can learn from our own mistakes and grow to be independent. Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities.