四川省仁寿县城北教学点2017届高三英语二轮复习 短文改错+书面表达（45）

　　四川省仁寿县城北教学点2017届高三英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（45）

　　第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

　　此题要求改正所给短文中错误．对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个“了”；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况

　　改正： 该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉，该行缺一个词：、在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线。在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　Mr. Moore is the teacher whom I respect mostly.

　　66．_______

　　Though he's 34, he looked very young. He's the most

　　67．________

　　popular teacher in our school. Comparing with Others, 68.

　　________

　　he pays much attention to his way of teaching. He tries

　　69.________

　　various way to make his classes interesting. He

　　70._______

　　thinks we should know "what" and understand "why".

　　71. _______

　　So, he always encourages me to think by ourselves.

　　72. ________

　　Therefore, with his help, we all learned how to

　　73._______

　　settle problems. How a wonderful world of "why"

　　74．_______

　　he lead un to! We all admire Mr. Moore.

　　75. ________

　　【答案】短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）

　　looked改为looks

　　68. Comparing 改为Compared

　　69. much 改为more

　　70. way 改为ways

　　71. 正确

　　72. me 改为us

　　73. all 前/ 后加have

　　74. How 改为What

　　75. lead 改为leads

　　第二节 书面表达（35）

　　如今世界粮食短缺，价格飞涨，给部分地区造成社会动荡。请就下面表格所提供的内容进行陈述并谈谈你的看法。

　　注意：1.内容需包括以上要点，但不要逐句翻译

　　2.字数100左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数 3.参考词汇：城市化urbanization；生物燃料biofuels。

　　As you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　【参考范文】

　　One possible version:

　　As you know, food shortages have hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas. But who is responsible for the current world food crisis? First, annual world grains output has declined because of climate change. Then lots of farmland has been lost due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization.

　　Then what should we do to deal with the problem? On one hand, we should focus on the environmental protection and improve the ecology. On the other hand, strict measures should be taken to protect farmland.

　　As for me, I will call on the people around me to live thriftily. And for the moment, I think, we should study hard to develop science and help solve the food shortage in the future.

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文是一篇半开放性的议论文。试题只给出了简单的汉语提示，要求考生充分发挥想象力将文章扩展，这体现了新课标的命题思路。成文时应注意：1.文章的时态用现在时为主；

　　2. 人称以第一人称为主；3. 文章内容要齐全；4. 将零散的汉语提示有机的用连词结合起来，使文章提高质量。