2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分 写作提升系列第二板块 第14节(北师大版)

　　第十四节　建议信 1．结构分析 首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。 主体段落：通常首先肯定对方的优点，然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。 尾段：对提出的建议进行总结。 2．时态的使用：以一般现在时为主，同时兼顾其他时态。 佳句递送 [好开头] 1．I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my suggestions about how to appreciate art well. 很高兴收到你的来信，询问我如何很好地欣赏艺术。 2．I am glad to know that you are going to enter college and it is my great pleasure to give you some suggestions of choosing your major. 我很高兴得知你将进入大学并且很荣幸能就专业选择方面给你提一些建议。 3．Concerning your request，I would like to offer my advice on how to keep fit. 对于你的请求，我想就如何保持健康提出我的建议。

　　[好结尾] 1．In my opinion，you would be wise to accept his advice. 依我之见，采纳他的建议是您的明智之举。 2．I do hope you will consider my suggestion. 真心希望你能考虑我的建议。 3．I hope you will find these proposals useful，and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. 我希望这些建议对你有所帮助，并且乐于和你就此事进行进一步的交流。 [好句子] 1．In the first place，I would also recommend a balanced diet. 首先，我会推荐均衡饮食。 2．Why not drink a little，exercise，stop smoking and eat more fruit and vegetables? 为何不少喝点酒，参加锻炼，不抽烟，多吃水果和蔬菜呢？ 3．I feel that it would be beneficial to express my views concerning your fatness. 我觉得就你的肥胖问题表达我的观点可能会很有用。 4．闲暇之余，你可以有很多地方休闲娱乐。 ①In your spare time，you can enjoy yourself in many places. ②There are many places for entertainment where you can enjoy yourself in your spare time. ③Many places for entertainment will offer you a chance to enjoy yourself in your spare time. 佳作赏析 [题目要求] 你(王伟)的好友(李磊)最近经常和一些朋友去网吧、游戏厅玩，有时甚至旷课。请你根据下面要点给他写一封建议信。 1．朋友在人的一生中起着重要作用； 2．真正的朋友不会让你去做坏事； 3．所以我们要明辨是非，慎重交友。 [现场阅卷] 精彩变式 ①用非谓语动词短语作原因状语进行改写 ②用强调句型，强调句中加黑部分 ③强调句中谓语动词hope

　　升级·五档作文 Dear Li Lei， I am writing to you because I think I have something really serious to communicate with you. I have noticed that recently you often go to the Internet Bar and the Game Center together with several friends.Sometimes，you even didn’t have classes in order to play with your friends.①Being one of your best friends，I’m very worried about you.Friends play an important part in one’s life.②It is our friends that we have to choose carefully.Real friends will never ask us to do something wrong.I don’t think the friends around you are your real friends. It’s high time that you should think about the problem I have mentioned above.③And I do hope you will make a wise decision soon. Yours， Wang Wei

　　演练提升 假设你是李华。近日，你的笔友Jack听说你们学校正在开展“建设节约型社会(Construction of an energy­saving society)”的主题活动，发来邮件请你介绍一下你对该活动的看法和建议。请你结合以下要点，用英语给Jack回一封电子邮件。 1．不浪费粮食和纸张； 2．尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋； 3．毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用； 4．其他建议。 注意：1.词数：120～150； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：方便筷disposable chopsticks

　　【参考范文】 Dear Jack. Glad to receive your e­mail. As you know，there has been an activity of“Construction of an energy­saving society”in our school recently.I think it is of vital importance because our society is facing the increasing danger of lack of energy. Many reasonable suggestions are given during the activity.

　　In my opinion，there’re many things we can do.In our daily life，we shouldn’t waste any food or paper.It is also advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags.Besides，I think the government should make it a rule that those used textbooks should not be thrown away when we graduate from school，because most of the books are in good condition and can be recycled. Actually，there are quite a lot that we can easily do：for example，try to take buses or bicycles instead of driving cars，etc.All of these will definitely help to construct an energy­saving society. Yours， Li Hua