2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分 写作提升系列第二板块 第13节(北师大版)

　　the weekends.There is a Bank of China，which can provide you with currency exchanges.It is open for eight hours，beginning at nine in the morning.By the way，there’s a barber’s just opposite the bank.If you want to go to the laundry，there is one on the ground floor of the building just behind the dormitory. If you have any difficulty，you may just call our hotline,8645336.We are always ready to provide you with our good service.

　　第十三节　说明文 1．抓住中心，分清主次 首先要仔细阅读文字提示或观察图表，确定文章的中心内容，再根据内容把文章分成几个段落，每段都要拟定一个主题句，然后确定中心人称和主体时态。 2．列全要点，扩编句子 以拟定的主题句为中心，选择恰当的词语和句型组织材料，编写句子，形成段落。 3．谋篇布局，连句成文 按照一定的逻辑顺序，用适当的过渡词把已经写好的段落串联成一篇完整的文章。 佳句递送 [好开头] 1．他出生在1990年，现在是一个20岁的学生，正在一所大学就读。 ①Born in 1990，he，a 20­year­old student，is studying in a university. ②Born in 1990，he is now a 20­year­old student，studying in a university. 2．加拿大，世界第二大国，占地997万平方公里。 ①Canada，which is the second largest country in the world，covers an area of 9.97 million square kilometres. ②Canada，the second largest country in the world，covers an area of 9.97 million square kilometres. ③Canada，covering an area of 9.97 million square kilometres，is the second largest country in the world. [好结尾] 1．She devoted herself to scientific research and made great contributions to... 她为科学研究献出了一切，对……作出了巨大的贡献。 2．She was awarded the Nobel Prize in Chemistry for her scientific achievements. 因为在化学方面的科研成就她被授予诺贝尔奖。 3．His achievements are worthy of praise. 他的成就值得称赞。 [好句子] 1．作为一个鼓舞人心的领导，人们已经开始喜欢他了。 ①He is considered as an inspiring leader and people come to love him. ②He，considered as an inspiring leader，is more and more popular. ③People come to love him as an inspiring leader. 2．他对所有人及自己所做的任何事情都严格要求，这让他深受人们的爱戴。 ①He was strict with everybody and in everything he did；as a result，he is deeply loved and respected. ②He was strict with everybody and in everything he did，so he is deeply loved and respected. ③He was strict with everybody and in everything he did，which makes him deeply loved and respected.

　　3．他在当地很有名气，引起了一名中国著名歌唱家的注意，并把他推荐给了中国中央电视台。 ①He gained popularity in local areas，which caught attention of a famous Chinese singer，who recommended him to CCTV. ②He was popular in local areas，catching attention of a famous Chinese singer，who recommended him to CCTV. ③His popularity in local areas caught attention of a famous Chinese singer；as a result，she recommended him to CCTV. 4．坐落在山顶的庙经历了这个地区的许多变化。 ①The temple stands on the top of the mountain，and has experienced many changes in this area. ②Standing on the top of the mountain，the temple has witnessed many changes in this area. 佳作赏析 [题目要求] (广东高考)你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。 [写作内容] 请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物。 姓名：Allan Stewart 国籍：澳大利亚 出生日期：1915年3月7日 世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位*时年龄最大 学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。 第一个学位：1936年获得 第二个学位：医学博士** 第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。 第四个学位：2017年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习时间，受到老师表扬。 *硕士学位：master’s degree；**博士：doctor [写作要求] 只能用5个句子表达全部内容。 [评分标准] 句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。

　　[现场阅卷] 精彩变式 ①用句型“it is never too late to do...”进行改写 ②用现在分词的完成式作状语进行改写 ③用定语从句进行改写 ④用过去分词短语作状语进行改写

　　升级·五档作文 Allan Stewart，an Australian old man，born on March 7,1915，is already the holder of the world record for being the oldest graduate.He thinks①it is never too late to challenge himself to achieve something worthwhile.He got his first degree in 1936，followed by a doctor’s degree of medicine.②Having decided to study law in his eighties，he got the master’s degree in 2006，③which was his third degree.In 2017，he received his fourth degree by network learning，④praised for his proper arrangement on his study schedule.

　　演练提升 假设你是一所对外汉语大学的工作人员，新学期开学时，请你用英语写一段有关学校服务设施的文字介绍，并将其张贴在新生宿舍门口，方便不懂汉语的学生熟悉环境。其中应包括以下要点： 1．商店、邮局、银行在校园西部游泳池附近； 2．营业时间：商店——每天9∶00～22∶00　邮局——9∶00～17∶00周末休息　银行——中国银行9∶00～17∶00可兑换外币； 3．理发店在银行对面，洗衣房在宿舍楼后面一栋楼的第一层； 4．服务电话：8645336。 注意：1.词数120左右； 2．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：兑换外币currency exchange　洗衣房laundry

　　To all the new students， Welcome to our school.To make your stay here more enjoyable，here’s some information about the service available at our school.

　　【参考范文】 To all the new students，Welcome to our school.To make your stay here more enjoyable，here’s some information about the serviee available at our school. Located in the west of our school，just near the swimming pool，are the shops，the post office and the bank.The shops stay open from nine in the morning till ten at night，where you can get daily necessities.The post office is open for eight hours，from nine am to five pm.And it doesn’t open during