2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分 写作提升系列第二板块 第12节(北师大版)

　　第十二节　记叙文 记叙文写作时注意以下几点： 1．内容完整，脉络清楚 写好记叙文，首先要头绪分明，脉络清楚，明确文章要求写什么。要对所写的事件或人物进行分析，弄清事件发生、发展、一直到结束的整个过程，然后再搜集、选取素材。一般来说，记叙文包括六大要素，即“六何”——“何人于何时何地为何如何做何事”。写这类文章我们要从六个方面(when，where，who，what，why，how)入手，将题目所要求的全部要点交代清楚。记叙文的目的就是叙述一个经过，因此要有头有尾，自始至终，确保内容的完整。 2．中心突出，详略得当 在文章的框架确定后，对支持故事的素材的选取是很关键的。选材要注意取舍，应该从表现文章主题的需要出发，分清主次，定好详略。在写作过程中我们要突出重点，详细叙述那些能表现文章主题的重要情节，略写、粗述那些非关键的次要情节。 3．语言灵活，准确生动 记叙文要用具体的事件和生动的语言对人、事、物加以叙述。一篇好的记叙文的语言既要准确、生动，又要表现力强，这样才能把人、事、物描写得具体生动，可读性强。

　　[好开头] 1．Although it happened three years ago，I never forgot the evening party. 尽管那发生在三年前，我将永远忘不了那场晚会。 2．Last week we had an amusing experience. 上周，我们进行了一次有趣的活动。 佳句递送 [好结尾] 1．I learnt a lot from it. 从中我学到了很多。 2．This was really an unpleasant trip I had ever had! 这是我曾经有过的一次最不愉快的旅行。 [好句子] 1．由于大雨所有的航班都被取消了，乘客们不得不改乘火车。 ①All the flights had been cancelled because of the heavy rain，so all the passengers had to take the train. ②All the flights had been cancelled because of the heavy rain；as a result，all the passengers had to take the train. ③All the flights having been cancelled because of the heavy rain，all the passengers had to take the train.

　　2．一听见有人呼救，他毫不犹豫地跳入河中。 ①On hearing someone calling for help，he did not hesitate to jump into the river. ②Hardly had he heard someone calling for help when he jumped into the river without hesitation. ③No sooner had he heard someone calling for help than he jumped into the river without hesitation. 3．对于这起交通事故的原因，我认为卡车司机应该负主要责任。 ①As for the cause of the accident，I think the driver of the lorry should be to blame. ②As far as the cause of the accident is concerned，I think the driver of the lorry should be to blame. ③As far as the cause of the accident is concerned，I think，it is the driver of the lorry who should be to blame.

　　[题目要求] (江西高考)星光中学(Xingguang High School)近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括： 1．时间与地点：4月10日，大青山(Daqing Mountain)； 2．活动的过程； 3．你对于这次活动的评论。 佳作赏析 [现场阅卷]

　　精彩变式 ①用现在分词的完成式作时间状语进行改写 ②用过去分词短语作伴随状语进行改写 ③用“be＋of＋抽象名词”进行改写 ④将否定词置于句首，用倒装句进行改写

　　升级·五档作文 In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise，our school organized a mountain­climbing on April 10.Hundreds of us took part in it. It was a nice day.①Having gathered at the foot of Daqing Mountain at 8∶00 am，we set out for the top in high spirits.All the way we were chatting，singing and laughing，enjoying the fresh air and the beautiful scenery.When some fell behind，others would come and offer help.About two hours later，we all reached the top.②Bathed in sunshine，we jumped and cheered with joy. The activity ③was of great benefit to us all.④Not only did it get us close to nature and give us relaxation from heavy school work，but it also promoted the friendship among us. What a wonderful time！

　　假设你刚刚参加了一次“伦敦游学”活动，请根据以下五幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文汇报，在班内介绍你们游学的过程。 注意：1.词数不少于120； 2．汇报的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：大本钟Big Ben　伦敦眼London Eye　住宿家庭home­stay family 演练提升 Good morning，everyone.It was an honor to have been selected to go on a study tour to Britain.

　　That’s all.Thank you! 【参考范文】 Good morning，everyone.It was an honor to have been selected to go on a study tour to Britain.On the morning of March 27，we arrived at Heathrow Airport where we were warmly welcomed by our home­stay families.Soon we went to different families where we had traditional English food and chatted happily.Later we went to Westminster College to attend a presentation about the school.A professor gave us a vivid and interesting introduction and we learned a lot about the college.In the following days we visited some famous scenic spots such as Big Ben and London Eye.We took many photos there.On the last day we had a farewell party at which students from China and Britain gave fantastic performances including songs and dances. From the study tour，we have improved our speaking skills，and we’ve also got a better understanding of British culture. That’s all.Thank you！