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　　七、表示递进关系的过渡性词语 what’s more，furthermore，moreover，besides，what’s worse，still less，to make matters worse，worse still，on the one hand... on the other hand...，for one thing... for another...等。 　Worse still，I took many falls off the bike.(2017·福建高考满分作文) 更糟的是，我从自行车上摔下来多次。 On one hand，I can earn some money by doing it to help my parents，and on the other hand，I can gain some experience from it，which will do good to my future life.(2017·山东高考满分作文) 一方面，我能通过做这样的事赚些钱来帮助父母，另一方面，我能从中获得一些经验，这会对我将来的生活有益。 [学以致用] 翻译句子 1．我在森林里迷了路，更糟糕的是，天开始变黑了。 I lost my way in the forest and to make matters worse，it became dark. 2．一方面，周末他们需要好好休息；另一方面，他们需要尽一切努力复习功课。 On (the) one hand，they should have a good rest on weekends. On the other (hand)，they should make every effort to review what they have learned. 八、表示列举事实的过渡性词语 such as，for example/instance，take... for example，that is to say，as follows，in other words等。 　They are of different shapes，such as diamonds，butterflies，flowers and birds.(2017·新课标全国卷Ⅱ满分作文) 它们形状各异，诸如像钻石、蝴蝶、花、鸟。 In fact，Chinese has never stopped taking words from other languages，say，“ganbu”or“minzhu”from Japanese.(2017·江苏高考满分作文) 事实上，汉语从来就没有停止过从别的语言中录入一些单词，比如，日语中的“ganbu”或“minzhu”。 [学以致用] 翻译句子 1．就拿北京来说吧，它是世界上最古老的都市之一。 Take Beijing for example，it is one of the oldest cities in the world. 2．也就是说，如果你想成功，必须相信自己。 That is to say，if you want to succeed，you have to believe in yourself. 九、表示观点的过渡性词语 in my opinion，in my view，in my point of view，as far as I am concerned，as for me，personally，I think...等。 　As far as I am concerned，they stand for love，friendship and unity.(2017·新课标全国卷Ⅱ满分作文) 以我看来，他们代表爱、友谊和团结。 [学以致用] 翻译句子 1．就我而言，我喜欢财富，但我更看重健康。 As far as I am concerned，I love wealth，but I value health more. 2．按照我的观点，人们不应该在公共场所抽烟。 In my opinion，people shall not smoke in public places. 十、表示总结的过渡性词语 in short，in brief，in conclusion，in a/one word，to sum up，all in all，on the whole，in general，generally speaking等。 　In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful.(2017·大纲全国卷满分作文) 总之，我的生活将会更丰富多彩。 All in all，traveling is the best choice to recharge ourselves and get ready for the new challenges.(2017·山东高考写作) 总的来说，旅游是充实自己、准备迎接新的挑战的最好的方式。 [学以致用] 翻译句子 1．总之，好公民应该遵守交通规则。 In conclusion，a good citizen should observe traffic regulations. 2．总之，过去20年里我们生活的变化给我们带来了便利和舒适。 In a word，changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us convenience and comfort. [演练提升] 阅读下列短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空 second，as a result，despite，on the one hand，what’s worse，in a word，on the other hand

　　As a new way of shopping，online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life. On the one hand，online shopping has many advantages. First，online shopping makes it easier for us to buy things.Instead of searching a crowded store，we just need to watch the computer screen and choose the things we like. Second，it is much faster for us to do shopping. We don’t have to spend a lot of time going to shops. Third，we can see a lot of goods shown on the computer screen at the same time. On the other hand，online shopping also has many disadvantages. The pictures of goods shown on the computer screen are not always what they are. As a result，we can be cheated easily. What’s worse，we cannot see the things in detail. In a word，despite the disadvantages of online shopping，I think it is an advanced way to do shopping. So we should develop it. 第十节　——句子间、段落间的衔接与过渡 [技法指导] 　衔接与过渡性词语的使用是语言连贯性得以实现的最常用手段。在句与句之间，段与段之间恰当地使用一些承上启下的连接(过渡)性词语是非常必要的。中学阶段应该掌握的连接(过渡)性词语可以归纳如下： 一、表示起始关系的过渡性词语 above all，first of all，to begin with，according to，as you know/as is known，as is shown in等。 　According to a research，the total number is reduced to less than 1，000 now.(2017·重庆高考书面表达) 按照调查结果，现在总数已减少到不足1 000只。 As we all know，good learning habits contribute to efficient study.(2017·四川高考满分作文) 我们大家都知道，好的学习习惯可以提高学习效率。 [学以致用] 翻译句子 1．首先，我认为一个人在国外多交朋友是很重要的。 First of all，I think it important to make more friends abroad. 2．正如图画所示，树被大风刮倒了，而小草依然在那里。 As is shown in the picture，a tree is knocked down by the strong wind，while the grass stays as it is. 二、表示时间顺序的过渡性词语

　　first(ly)，then，later，in the end，finally，at last，after that，afterwards，since then，immediately，suddenly，meanwhile等。 　Finally，we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently.(2017·江西高考满分作文) 最后，我们应该经常参加运动和户外活动。 First，talk to someone you trust about how you feel.This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself.Second，go outdoors and play

　　team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger.And third，remain optimistic about your future.(2017·安徽高考满分作文) 首先，告诉你所信任的某个人你的感受。这是一种不伤害别人及自己的释放愤怒的好方法。第二，去户外和朋友们玩一些团体性的活动，因为身体锻炼是消除愤怒的一种有效的方法。第三，对未来保持乐观。 [学以致用] 翻译短文 　上周我得了重感冒，首先是流鼻涕，但我并未当回事，然后开始咳嗽，后来感到发烧而且没力气，最后我被送进医院，不得不在床上躺了三天。 I had a bad cold last week. First，I had a running nose，but I did not take it seriously. Then I began to cough. After that，I had a fever and felt weak. Finally，I was sent to hospital and had to lie in bed for three days. 三、表示并列关系的过渡性词语 and，or，also，as well as，neither... nor...，not only... but also...，either... or...，not... but...等。 　I think we will have a good time there and I will send your photos taken there.(2017·山东高考满分作文) 我想我们会玩得很愉快，而且我将会把在那里拍的你的照片送给你。 In addition，the climate here is very similar to that in the USA，so there is no need for you to worry about it.(2017·天津高考满分作文) 另外，这里的气候与美国的气候非常相似，所以你没必要为此担心。

　　[学以致用] 翻译句子 1．努力学习，你就会考上重点大学。 Work hard，and you will be admitted to a key university. 2．游泳不但对身体有好处，而且能培养我们的坚强意志。 Swimming not only benefits our health，but also helps us have a strong will. 四、表示转折关系的过渡性词语 but，yet，however，while，otherwise，on the contrary等。 　However，I soon adjusted my mind of state and answered the questions calmly and carefully.(2017·四川高考满分作文) 然而，我很快调整了我的心态并平静而认真地回答了问题。 On the contrary，the volunteers always claim that they are tired of the life on earth，so they are eager to experience the future life on the Mars.(2017·广东高考满分作文) 相反，这些志愿者说，他们厌倦了地球上的生活，因此他们渴望体验未来火星上的生活。

　　[学以致用] 翻译句子 1．然而在我们学校，情况却大不一样。 In our school，however，things are quite different. 2．但遗憾的是我只考虑自己的事情，没有考虑父母的想法。 But unfortunately I mind my own business without considering my parents. 五、表示因果关系的过渡性词语 because，as，since，for，thanks to，due to，as a result of，so，therefore，as a result/consequence等。 　The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong，so you don’t have to worry so much.(2017·安徽高考满分作文) 真相是每个人都会有事情看上去要变糟的时刻，所以你不必过多担心。 As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.(2017·福建高考书面表达) 结果，孩子们变得太依赖于父母，以至于他们没有独立的思想和创造性的想法。

　　[学以致用] 翻译句子 1．多亏医生的及时治疗，他获救了。 Thanks to the doctor’s timely treatment，he was saved. 2．因此，我建议应该给我们更多的时间用于体育运动和睡眠。 Therefore，I suggest we be given more time for sports and sleep. 六、表示条件关系的过渡性词语 if，unless，in case of，as/so long as，on condition that等。 　I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.(2017·浙江高考满分作文) 若你们能考虑下我的推荐内容，我将很高兴。 As long as we stick to our dreams，we will become a winner sooner or later.(2017·湖南高考满分作文) 只要我们坚持梦想，我们迟早会成为赢家。 [学以致用] 翻译句子 1．只要你不灰心，就一定会成功。 As long as you don’t lose heart，you’re sure to succeed. 2．如果我们忽视我们的未来，就像图画中的这个人一样，我们就会以失败告终。 If we neglect our future，we’ll end up in failure as what happens to the man in the picture.