【3年高考2年模拟】2016届高三英语一轮复习课件 写作指导二 高级词汇

　　写作指导 栏目索引 写作指导 栏目索引 课标卷外研版 英语 写作指导二　高级词汇 1 高级词汇指导 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少,也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标 准。词汇的运用不仅要准确,更要丰富。经常把第一反应词翻来覆去地 使用,会导致文章用词的质量上不去。要让语言表达书面化、多样化,就 要做到“人无我有,人有我优”,多使用第二反应词甚至第三反应词。 写作指导 第一反应词 聪明的clever 令人惊奇的 surprising 乐happy 悲 sad/unhappy 感到满意的satisfied

　　平静 quiet 烦 bored

　　生气 angry

　　怕 afraid 失望disappointed

　　努力的hard

　　非常,相当very(much) 替换词(第二……反应词) smart,intelligent amazing,astonishing pleased,amused,delighted,enjoyable,over the moon painful,bitter content

　　calm,peaceful be fed up with annoyed,cross,fly into a rage frightened,scared depressed,desperate diligent 越来越多more and more

　　许多的many

　　几乎不hardly 仅仅 only 好,棒极了 good 有益的helpful 糟糕的 bad 旧的,古老的old 适当的 right 不必要的unnecessary 首先 first 明显的obvious 准确的true diligent extremely,rather,badly,desperately,ex- ceedingly,intensely increasing,growing an ocean of,a sea of,an army of,a host of,a multitude of

　　barely,scarcely merely amazing,outstanding,miraculous,mar- velous beneficial,rewarding dreadful,unfavorable,adverse ancient 准确的true 著名的famous

　　详细的detailed 重要的 important

　　相信 believe 认为think

　　操控operate

　　解释,说明 explain

　　使用,利用 use 导致lead to

　　吸收absorb 想要want to 总之 in a word proper,appropriate,apposite hardly necessary initially,primarily,first and foremost conspicuous exact,accurate well-known,prestigious

　　specific significant,crucial,vital,consequential,of great importance

　　be convinced,hold the belief that take the attitude that,it is widely shared that manipulate 期待expect

　　参加join 考虑consider 对……感兴趣be interested in

　　奉献devote to 注意,重视pay attention to

　　interpret,illustrate employ,utilize contribute to,result in take in,assimilate intend to,tend to,be inclined to to summarize,in conclusion anticipate participate in

　　take into account sth.appeals to sb.,sth.exerts a tremendous fascination on sb. dedicate to pour attention into,attach importance to

　　续表 吸引attract one’s attention 记得remember 不同意disagree/be against 习俗,传统custom 人们people/persons 事实上 in fact

　　例如for example

　　但是but

　　因为because 假如 if capture one’s attention bear in mind frown on sth. convention,tradition individuals actually,virtually,as a matter of fact for instance,as an example nonetheless,nevertheless in that provided 2 写作典例 (2017山东) 某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动,你有意参加。 请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文,内容须包括:1. 该谚语的含义;2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。 ①A friend in need is a friend indeed. ②Where there’s a will,there’s a way. 注意:1.词数:120—150; 2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇:谚语proverb                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                              【范文】 Where there is a will,there is a way I first saw this sentence when I entered junior high school.The moment I came into the classroom,I saw the sentence on the blackboard.

　　I like the proverb because it tells a valuable philosophy of life.Achieving our goals is always not easy,but if we have a strong will,we are sure to realize them.

　　Once I was not very good at English.I didn’t know enough English words and my grammar was also poor,which really made me upset.Fortunately,my English teacher noticed my bad situation and said to me,“Don’t lose heart.Remember:where there is a will,there is a way.”Suddenly I was re- minded of the sentence on the blackboard! From then on,I decided to work hard on my English and it finally paid off. My English improved a lot and,more importantly,I gained much confidence. 【写作点评】 (1)作者运用了一些较为高级的词汇和短语:enter,valuable,upset,fortunate- ly,lose heart,from then on等,丰富了表达的内容。 (2)熟练地使用了各类词或短语引导的状语从句:the moment,because,if等, 使整篇文章结构紧凑、表达自如。 (3)准确地运用了过渡词语,使上下句连接顺畅,增加了得分点。 3 跟踪训练 (2017浙江诸暨中学期中) 高中生由于冲动并且不知道如何用正确的方法控制自己而往往会引发 同学间的冲突。请根据此现象用英语写一篇100词左右的文章。内容要 求如下: 1.记述一件发生在你自己或身边同学身上的一次同学之间的冲突。 2.简要阐述冲突发生时该如何正确处理。 注意:文章首句已给出(不计入总词数) Conflicts among us students are quite common because we are impulsive and don’t know how to control ourselves when they happen.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           【范文】 Conflicts among us students are quite common because we are impulsive and don’t know how to control ourselves when they happen.The other day, while waiting for my turn in the canteen,I stepped on another boy’s toes quite by accident.Immediately,I apologized.The boy,however,glared at me, saying that I did that deliberately.His rude remarks annoyed me too.I turned my back to him and tried to ignore him.But to my great surprise,he pushed me hard from behind.It was more than I could bear and eventually the quar- rel changed into an act of violence. Despite the fact that conflicts are unavoidable,we,when involved,ought to keep calm,put ourselves into others’ shoes and find a proper way out rather

　　than let the situation become worse.In this case,we are sure to live in peace with those around us.