【3年高考2年模拟】2016届高三英语一轮复习课件 写作指导六 话题类夹叙夹议文

　　写作指导 栏目索引 写作指导 栏目索引 课标卷外研版 英语 写作指导六　话题类夹叙夹议文 1 写作指导 话题类夹叙夹议文应该注意以下几点: 第一,根据话题内容叙事。考生可以通过外表、行动或变化用语言描绘 一个人、一个物体、一个地方或一个场面。 第二,发表议论,不同人对事件的不同看法,或正反观点的对比。发表议论 的过程中要紧扣材料中心,确立论点,论据要真实可信,论证过程要有说服 力和感染力。 第三,发表自己的观点,同时对文章做出总结。 写作指导 2 常用句式 I think...As far as I’m concerned... For my part...Personally speaking... As to me...As I see it... It seems to me that...In my view... I’m of the opinion that...I believe/feel... If you ask me...I advise you... 3 写作典例 (2017福建) 如何理解“成功”,不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语 (quotation),按要求用英语写一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of en- thusiasm.” —Sir Winston Churchill 内容要求: 1.你对该引语的理解; 2.你的相关经历; 3.恰当的结尾。 注意: 1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2.文中不能出现考生的具体信息; 3.词数:120左右。

　　This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                【范文】 This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t get dis- couraged right after failures.Instead,we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. At the age of twelve,I got a nice bike as a birthday gift.So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it.However,it was harder than ex- pected.The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control.Worse still,I took many falls off the bike.I was about to give

　　up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.With more prac- tice,I did better and better.Looking back,I feel I wouldn’t be able to ride a bike if I had lost heart. Actually,we can’t succeed in everything we try.What’s important is that

　　we should stick at it. 【写作点评】 (1)段落层次分明,对该引语的理解、相关的经历、结束语分段描述。且 动词时态运用恰当:一般现在时与一般过去时交替使用。 (2)恰当地使用了过渡词语,使整篇文章连接顺畅、结构紧凑。 (3)使用了So excited was I that...,I was about to give up when...,Looking back...等,提高了文章的档次,增加了表达的多样化,提高了得分点。   4 跟踪训练 (2017河南太康期中) 下面4幅图描述的是高三学生Tom和Mike的一次经历,请你根据图画内容 和文字提示写一篇100词左右的英语短文。注意适当发表个人观点。                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                         【范文】 At present,playing computer games is becoming more and more popular with people,especially with school students.Take Tom and Mike for exam- ple.Every day after school,they go to the net bar to play games till deep into

　　the night,and they often have a competition to see who wins more scores. Once,Tom didn’t go home until eleven o’clock at night.When he got home,he told his mother that he had been going over his lessons.Poor mom! She believed him and cooked two eggs for him.“Take more care of your- self as you work too hard,my dear son,”she said.But Tom’s face turned red at his mother’s praise.Later he made up his mind to work really hard. 写作指导 栏目索引 写作指导 栏目索引