【3年高考2年模拟】2016届高三英语一轮复习课件 写作指导七 图画类夹叙夹议文

　　写作指导 栏目索引 写作指导 栏目索引 课标卷外研版 英语 写作指导七　图画类夹叙夹议文 1 写作指导 第一,图画类夹叙夹议作文最大的特点就是材料除了给出图片外,还 给出了中文的提示信息,它主要考查考生的读图能力和一定的发散思维 能力,同时也考查考生的认知水平、思考方法、逻辑思维等多方面的综 合素质,还对考生的想象力、识别能力和归纳判断力等都提出了较高的 要求。 第二,一般情况下,题目虽然对写作范围做出了界定,但是考生的发挥空间 仍然很大,具有一定的开放性,让考生有话可讲、有感可发。同时,考生还 要把握好时态、人称、行文逻辑、卷面整洁,以及句式的灵活多变,只有这样的文章才能取得较高的分数。 写作指导  2 常用句式 (1)As is vividly described in the picture above... (2)The picture indicates/conveys the meaning that... (3)As can be seen in the picture... (4)This cartoon tells/warns us that... (5)The purpose of the pictures is to... (6)According to the pictures above,we can see that... (7)It’s obvious that... (8)This picture brings back...to... (9)The difference between...and...is that... (10)Only in this way can we… 3 写作典例 (2017江苏) 请根据你对以下两幅图的理解,以“Actions Speak Louder than Words” 为题,用英语写一篇作文。

　　参考词汇: banner(横幅)　stump(树桩) 你的作文应包括以下内容: 1.简要描述两幅图的内容; 2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解; 3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。 注意: 1.可参照图片适当发挥; 2.作文词数150左右; 3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 Actions Speak Louder than Words                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                            【范文】 Actions Speak Louder than Words People celebrate Earth Day differently.In Picture 1,a man is trying to put up a banner on a lonely tree surrounded by stumps,but in vain,while Picture 2 shows a couple are happily planting a tree. The message conveyed here is clear:“Actions speak louder than words”. Our earth is suffering severe damage.Should we just pay lip service or take practical measures to protect it? The answer is definitely the latter.Immedi- ate actions should be taken,like stopping cutting down trees,to better the en- vironment. Actions are important in other fields,too.Instead of shouting empty slogans,it

　　is more meaningful to donate books and sports goods to children in need. We should strictly and voluntarily obey traffic rules,stopping at the red light rather than complaining about traffic jams.Only when we match our words with actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish. 【写作点评】 (1)在第一段和第二段中准确运用了过去分词作后置定语,增加了表达效 果。 (2)用rather than连接了两个v.-ing形式作状语,丰富了句式。 (3)文章中出现了几个很高级且很准确的词汇,彰显了作者扎实的写作基础。 (4)第三段最后一句中运用了“Only+状语从句”引起的倒装句式,把文 章推向了高潮。 4 跟踪训练 (2017湖南洞口一中月考) Directions:Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 下图中王强的妈妈正在与老师交谈,请根据图画所给提示,用英语写一篇 不少于100词的短文,描述图片内容并发表自己的感想。                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                        【范文】 One day,Wang Qiang’s mother was talking with his teacher.When asked what shortcomings Wang Qiang had,the mother talked a lot.But when asked about her son’s advantages,she kept silent,not knowing what to say. The picture reflects a real problem in our daily family life.Parents try to sat- isfy their children physically,arranging everything for their children.They think the children must follow their advice,no matter whether it is suitable or

　　not.However,when their children don’t obey their will or can’t live up to their expectations,they will complain a lot.They only know their children have failed.They can’t see their children’s strong points. In my opinion,parents should communicate with their children as much as possible.Parents should learn every aspect of their children,especially their strong points,as children desire to be praised.Only in this way can children and parents understand each other and live happily.