2016届高三（牛津版）英语一轮复习讲义 写作 第九讲 解读图表信息稳固构建图表作文

　　第九讲　解读图表信息稳固构建图表作文

　　在社会经济快速发展、高度2 000名学生就“幸福感”的看法进行了调查。请根据以下数据用英语写一篇文章。比例 “幸福感”的来源

　　60% 从父母或亲友的爱、从温暖的家庭生活中感受到幸福

　　20% 从助人、捐赠、义卖中感受到幸福从友情中感受到幸福异于上述情况从不同角度讲述自己的幸福感

　　结论：调注意：1.要包括以下内容：(1)调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；(2)数据的解读；(3)总体评价。可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

　　1．60%的学生从父母或亲友的爱以及从温暖的家庭生活中感受到幸福。(一般表达)Sixty percent of the students feel happy.They have the love from their parents and relatives(高级表达)(系表结构＋并列连词)Sixty percent of the students________________ the love from their parents and relatives________________ from the warmth of families.答案：feel happy with；as well as的学生认为他们很高兴去帮助他人捐献给需要物品的人东西或参加义卖活动。(一般表达)Twenty percent of the students think they are happy to help others(高级表达)(Twenty percent think they ________________ help others，donate something to people________________ or take part in a voluntary________．答案：are pleased to；in need；selling除了以上这些方面其他学生也描述了不同方面的Besides，the rest of the students talk about their happiness from different aspects.

　　(高级表达)(高级词汇)______________________________their happiness from different aspects.

　　(高级词汇)________________________________their happiness from different aspects.

　　答案：Apart

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　　above；describe；In addition；the rest describe4．基于这些数据可以得出结论：我们的学生对生活充满爱但他们的生活经历是有限的他们的视野需要被拓宽。(一般表达)As it is based on the statistics(高级表达)(过去分词短语＋被动语态＋同位语从句＋并列句)________________________________________________________________，but their life experience is limited，so their horizons need to be broadened.

　　答案：Based on the statistics; a conclusion can be drawn that our students have deep love for life

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　　One possible version： percent

　　of

　　the

　　students

　　feel happy with the love from their parents and relatives as well as from the warmth of families.Twenty percent think they are pleased to help others，donate something to people

　　in

　　need

　　or

　　take

　　part

　　in

　　a voluntary selling.Among ten percent of them think friendship gives them much delight.Apart from the above，the rest of the students describe their happiness from different aspects.

　　Based on the statistics，a conclusion can be drawn that our students have deep love for life，but their life experience is limited

　　so

　　their

　　horizons

　　need

　　to

　　be broadened.

　　| 命题专家如是说 |图表类作文解题关键图表类作文一般是在图、表中给出一定的内容和情景要求考生根据图表信息准确、客观地反映图表内容并加以分析进而得出结论旨在考查学生从图表材料中获取信息并转换成文字信息的能力。仔细研读图表。认清图表中的数字、线条、阴影等部分的变化趋势和走向抓住其主要特点根据图表所显示的中心信息确定主题、内容层次以及主题句。确定主题段落。分析重组信息根据信息的不同性质确定具体段落列出各段的主题句。对所给信息的转述要使用不同的表达方法反映在文章中也就是要使用不同的词、词组、3．深化阐释主题。末段通常用于深化主题对全文进行总结发表个人看法。写此段时要注意结论的客观性、看法的合理性不可妄加评断。