2016高考英语一轮复习：写作素养培养第10讲课件

　　It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families，shouldering the hope of their parents.Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success.As a consequence，children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas. Such a situation is of great concern.In my opinion，over protection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development.Instead of doing everything for them，parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves.Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful. (2017·银川市三校联考) 文明乘车是中华美德 请根据图画描述你的朋友小明发生的故事和你的看法。 注意：词数100左右。 _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 答案：One day, Xiaoming was on a bus to school when he noticed a pregnant woman getting on the bus. Xiaoming pretended not to see the woman and went on sleeping as usual but another child beside him offered his seat to the woman. Soon the bus arrived at the destination. It was late before Xiaoming realized. In our life, I think offering seats on bus, a small act though, is a symbol of kindness and the level of our civilization. Maybe Xiaoming was tired, but he should have offered his seat to the woman because she needed the seat more than him. Besides, the old and disabled should own separate and special seats. 走向高考 · 英语 人教版(课标卷地区) · 高考总复习

　　写作素能培养

　　第三部分 第十讲　揣摩图画内涵， 从容掌控图画作文 第二部分 图画类作文是材料作文的一种特殊形式，是一种变“画”为文的作文方式。这种题型提供给考生的是图画，要求考生在看懂图画意思后写作文，主要训练和考查考生的观察力、思考力、创造力和表达能力。

　　一、试题特征

　　1．素材贴近生活。图画类的书面表达一般都是中学生所熟悉的场景，画面生动形象，具有趣味性，体现高考书面表达“生活化”的特点。有时候还附带有英语或汉语说明，考生易获得直观信息。 2．文体形式多样。图画式作文主要有记叙文、说明文和议论文。

　　二、写作步骤 1．确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文、说明文和议论文为主。 2．确定人称。如果以日记、回忆录等形式来写，一般采用第一人称；如果是以讲故事的形式来写，则一般采用第三人称。 3．确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁，确定文章所要用的时态。

　　4．合理、适度的联想。这类文章的说明一般都要求考生进行适度的联想和发挥，以便使上下文能更好地连贯起来。 5．虚实结合、详略得当。对于图画中的内容，该详细叙述描写的，就必须要详细、具体；可以一笔带过的就一笔带过。比如图画中所有的时间、数字或言论须一词不漏地写清楚，而有些过程或原因则可适当简略。

　　三、注意事项 1．看图记叙文的写作 要注意把握写作素材的时间、地点、人物，以及事件的叙述。可以采取倒叙的方式，也可按事件的发生顺序进行描写。 2．看图议论文的写作 首先要认真阅读图画，把握图的意义，有时还要注意其隐含的观点与意图，并联系生活实际进行思考与阐述。

　　3．看图说明文的写作 要注意观察图画材料，找出所有内容，然后按一定的顺序有条理地阐述。说明文的叙述顺序一般有三种：时间顺序、空间顺序和逻辑顺序(比如按图画反映的数字大小进行叙述)。注意文章开头与结尾的呼应。

　　四、常用句式 1．用于描述图画或引入话题的句式 ①As is described in the picture... ②As is shown in the picture，we can see clearly the relationship between... ③The sight reminds me of something in my daily life.

　　2．用于记叙事件经过或分析现象的句式 ①At first...then...five minutes later...finally/in the end/at last... 开始时……然后……五分钟后……最后…… ②Some were doing...，some were doing...and/while others were doing... 一些人在做……，一些人在做……，而另一些人在做…… ③...was/were doing...when sb./sth. did... 当某事正在发生时突然又发生另一件事。 ④More and more people have come to realize the importance of... 越来越多的人已经开始意识到……的重要性。 3．用于发表议论或总结的句式 ①If such measures were not taken，the problem of...would be more serious. 如果不采取这样的措施的话，……的问题会更加严重。 ②We can conclude from this picture that...

　　从这幅图画我们可以推断…… ③As has been stated above，we must... 如上所述，我们必须……

　　(2017·高考福建卷)孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。 内容要求：

　　1．描述漫画内容； 2．分析漫画所揭示的问题； 3．提出你的看法。 注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯； 3．词数120左右； 4．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇：铺路pave the way

　　From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 句型二：正如上面图画生动呈现给我们的是一家三口正走在红地毯上。 As is vividly presented in the picture above/As the picture above vividly presents to us，a family of three are walking on a long red carpet.(使用as引导的非限制性定语从句) 中间过渡句：用一句话揭示图画的含义 它反映了当今的一个普遍现象：孩子是家庭的中心，肩负着父母的希望。 It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families，shouldering(shoulder) the hope of their parents.

　　结束句：用一句话强调所提建议的重要性(常用only引起的倒装句) 只有用这种方式，他们才能在成长过程中学会独立，才能成为真正意义上的成功者。 Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful. 人称要对：本文主要使用第三人称。 时态要准：基本时态为一般现在时。 要点要全： ①描述漫画内容； ②分析漫画所揭示的问题； ③提出你的看法。 第二步 定人称、内容要点、关键词及动词时态 目标 要点准——要点全而不漏，时态合理运用

　　核心词汇： ①穿着讲究的：be well dressed ②朝前弯腰：bend forward ③家庭的中心：the focus of families

　　④肩负……的期望： shoulder the hope of... ⑤为孩子安排一切：arrange everything for children

　　⑥不遗余力：spare no effort ⑦结果：as a consequence ⑧不独立思考，没有创造力：have no independent thought or creative ideas ⑨表明……的普遍现象：It shows a common phenomenon that… 要点四：父母为孩子安排好了所有的事情，不遗余力地为孩子的成功铺平道路。 Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. 要点五：孩子们对于父母变得如此依赖以至于他们没有独立的想法或创造性的观点。 Children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas. 要点六：这种状况让人感到忧心忡忡。 Such a situation is of great concern.

　　要点七：过度保护和太多的关心对孩子的发展极其有害。 Overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children's development. 要点八：父母应该鼓励孩子克服困难，激励孩子独立发展而不是为他们做一切事情。 Parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves rather than do everything for them. 升级句式三：用while连接升级句式一、二 The son，well dressed，waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet，sweating. 升级句式四：把要点四中的后半句改为分词短语作状语 Parents arrange everything for their children，sparing no effort to pave the way for their success. 升级句式五：把要点五改成倒装句 So reliant do children become on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas.

　　One possible version： From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son，well dressed，waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet，sweating.