2017届高考英语三轮复习：写作满分训练11

　　2017届高考英语三轮复习写作满分训练11

　　某大学教授称，高学历者的贫穷意味着耻辱和失败，并对大学生提出要求：“当你40岁时，没有4,000万身价不要来见我，也别说是我的学生。”对此，凤凰网进行了调查。多数人持反对态度，认为教师不应用金钱来衡量学生；有少数人则认为这是一种激励；还有极少数人说不清楚。请你根据漫画并结合饼状图（pie chart）用英语写一篇短文。

　　注意：1. 适当地发挥想象，增添细节以使行文连贯；

　　2. 词数120左右；

　　3. 文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　A survey has been conducted by ifeng.com about whether a teacher should judge his students’ success by the money they have earned…

　　（2017浙江卷 ）

　　学校图书馆需要购置一批新书， 现向学生征求意见。假如你是李越，你认为学校图书馆最需要购置科普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。请你用英语给图书馆王老师写一封100—120词的信，推荐这两类书，并分别说明推荐理由。

　　注意：信的抬头与落款已给出（不计入词数）。

　　Dear Mr. Wang,

　　_______________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Yue

　　、书面表达

　　书面表达

　　A survey has been conducted by ifeng.com about whether a teacher should judge his students’ success by the money they have earned.

　　It is true that some teachers judge their students’ success by money. As can be seen from the picture, a teacher says that a student without 40 million yuan at the age of 40 means shame and that wealth means success.

　　But opinions are divided among the surveyed people. Just as the pie chart shows, 70% of them oppose the teacher’s view. They think that teachers shouldn’t judge their students’ success by money. However, 25% of them think this is a good way to encourage students to make more money. There are also a few people who are not clear about how to measure students’ success.

　　In my opinion, we should understand success in a reasonable way. Money is certainly one way to measure success, but it is not the only way.

　　【考点】考察应用文写作

　　【写作指导】

　　本文属于应用文中的书信，所以需要注意书信的特殊格式以及特殊用语。要求以李越的口吻向图书馆王老师推荐科普类图书（popular science books）和文学类图书（literary books）。要点：1.你向王老师推荐这两类书。2.理由：科普类图书帮助我们理解科技的基本原则，引起我们的好奇心和发展意识。文学类的书可以提高我们的文学素养。鼓励我们批判类的思维。

　　本文对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

　　【一句多译】

　　那就是我我推荐另外一种书：文学作品。如古典文学，大师作品。通过精彩的故事和语言呈现伟大的思想。

　　（1）That is why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.

　　（2）That is the reason

　　why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language.

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Mr. Wang,

　　Knowing that our library is going to buy books, I’d like to give some suggestions.

　　What we need most are popular science books. Usually popular science books explain basic principles of nature in a simple and interesting way. They help us understand science subjects better and arouse our curiosity about scientific discoveries.

　　In addition to reading for knowledge, we read for fun and inspiration. That is why I recommend another category of books：literary books. Classic works, written by masters, present great thoughts through fascinating stories and language. They not only offer us joy and excitement, but also encourage us to think critically.

　　I’ll be glad if you can consider my recommendation.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Yue