2017届高考英语三轮复习：写作满分训练8

　　2017届高考英语三轮复习写作满分训练8

　　假如你是李华，你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信，向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题。信的内容应包括下列要点：

　　焦虑症状：头晕、乏力、睡眠不好、食欲不振等

　　建议1．平时努力学习，正确对待考试，考前制定好合适的复习计划2考试期间正常作息3．睡前洗热水澡、喝热牛奶等有助于睡眠

　　其他建议(内容由考生自己拟定)

　　注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。

　　2.要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；

　　3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计词数。

　　参考词汇：头晕—dizzy(adj.)Dear Editor,

　　I am Li Ming of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

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　　假设你是李华，于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班（flight number BA793）回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱（suitcase）。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。

　　信件要点包括：

　　陈述写信原因

　　简要描述该行李

　　说明其重要性

　　期待回复并表示感谢

　　注意：

　　1. 词数100左右。

　　2. 信件格式已为你给出。

　　3. 请在答题卡上作答。

　　、书面表达

　　Dear Editor,

　　I am Li Hua of Senior Three, Guangming Middle School. I am writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.

　　Most of us feel nervous whenever we’re taking an important exam. Some feel dizzy or tired, some suffer from lack of sleep, and some lose their appetite. In fact, all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.

　　First of all, in my opinion, it’s important for us to have a right attitude towards exams. They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies, so there is no need to worry too much about the results. We should study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam. In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.

　　Besides, enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam. Therefore, during the period of exams, we should not stay up too late. We can also try a warm bath or a cup of warm milk before going to bed. They might help us to have a sound sleep.

　　(We’d better go out for a walk or do some outdoor exercises before and during an exam so that we can keep ourselves relaxed and then concentrate ourselves on exams.)

　　Yours ,

　　Li Hua

　　【思路点拨】试题为应用文中的书信写作，试题只给出写作框架，并未给出所有的具体写作细节，为半开放性写作。写好此文，需注意三点：一是写信格式要准确，信的开头已经给出，但切要写好信的结尾。二是要详略得当，本文应重点写的是对箱子的描述。三要注意适当地增加细节，恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Sir/Madam,

　　I’m Li Hua. I took the flight BA793 on June 3, 2010. But when I came to my home, I found I lost a suicase. I am writing to you to request you to help me find it back.

　　My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip. There is a lable on the handle with my name and address on it. It si really important for me, because I had put all my important documents in it, including my ID card, passport and so on. Besides, it si what my father sent to me on my birthday.

　　Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receiving your earliest reply.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua.

　　【范文点评】文章要点齐全，写作层次清晰，紧扣要点框架并适当添加细节，行文连贯，句式多变，能够正确运用各种复合句，对箱子的描述恰当得体。