2017届高考英语二轮语法复习训练：《短文改错》

　　第五部分

　　写作

　　专题一　短文改错

　　Ⅰ.体验高考

　　(2017·浙江卷)I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with people.

　　Before long，a train inspector comes to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket but became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner.The person who found a ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.

　　No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket­owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the strangers their help.If we could show concern to others on need，the world would be a better place to live in.

　　答案　

　　I was taking a train to London's Victoria Station.I

　　noticed that the carriage was

　　and filled with people.

　　Before long，a train inspector

　　to check our tickets.A passenger realized he couldn't find his ticket became quite upset.Then everyone in the carriage began searching

　　the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows from

　　owner.The person who found

　　ticket smiled with pleasure at his success.

　　No one in the carriage had

　　spoken to or even noticed the ticket­owner before.Yet they had so quickly offered the

　　their help.If we could show concern to others

　　need，the world would be a better place to live in.

　　Ⅱ.仿真、模拟

　　Passage

　　1

　　What Does a Credit Card Bring Us is written by Eillton Henley.It's a brief or excellent article about credit cards.The author explains what credit cards work.And he also points out the positive and negative aspect for having it.American consumers are mostly likely to use credit cards.However，the use of credit cards are expanding into almost every country in world.The key point making by the author is that users should pay for the amount in full when a bill is sent from the credit card company.This protected all the advantages and avoids all the disadvantages of using credit cards.

　　答案　

　　What Does a Credit Card Bring Us is written by Eillton Henley.It's a brief

　　excellent article about credit cards.The author explains

　　credit cards work.And he also points out the positive and negative

　　for having .American consumers are

　　likely to use credit cards.However，the use of credit cards

　　expanding into almost every country in

　　world.The key point

　　by the author is that users should pay

　　the amount in full when a bill is sent from the credit card company.This

　　all the advantages and avoids all the disadvantages of using credit cards.

　　Passage

　　2

　　After watch “English TV” last Sunday morning，I phoned to my classmate and told him to go to see a film in the afternoon.Before the film was over，we returned to school to do our lessons.While we are having a rest in the corridor，I saw Mr Liu，my China teacher.He told me that we had made some progresses in English，but my Chinese lagged behind，especially my Chinese composition.He suggested I should read more and keeping a diary every day.In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me well for improving composition writing.That was really good idea! What they said was quite right，and I should follow their advice.

　　答案　

　　After

　　“English TV” last Sunday morning，I phoned

　　my classmate and

　　told him to go to see a film in the afternoon. the film was over，we returned to school to do our lessons.While we

　　having a rest in the corridor，I saw Mr Liu，my

　　teacher.He told me that w had made some

　　in English，but my Chinese lagged behind，especially my Chinese composition.He suggested I should read more and

　　a diary every day.In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me

　　for improving composition writing.That was really

　　good idea! What they said was quite right，and I should follow their advice.

　　Passage

　　3

　　I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two week ago.I have been thinking about a question you asked me.In my opinion，you should come back after finish your studies abroad.For one reason，that you are studying is bad needed nowadays in our country.It will be quite easy for you find a good job.In fact，I knew a few big companies in our city hope to hire people like you.For another one reason，I think it will be more convenient for you to look after your parents but they are getting old.But this is only my point of view.It is up for you to make a right choice.

　　答案　

　　I'm very glad to have received the letter you sent me two

　　ago.I have been thinking about

　　question you asked me.In my opinion，you should come back after

　　your studies abroad.For one reason， you are studying is

　　needed nowadays in our country.It will be quite easy for you

　　find a good job.In fact，I

　　a few big companies in our city hope to hire people like you.For another

　　reason，I think it will be more convenient for you to look after your parents

　　they are getting old.But this is only my point of view.It is up

　　you to make a right choice.

　　Passage

　　4

　　This morning I found red wallet on the campus.Girls usual like red，so I believed the wallet was belonged to a girl student.I opened it，try to find out whose it was.Therefore，I found nothing but 300 yuan in it.I was wondering what to do with it while suddenly my classmates Chen Yang passed by.She suggested she put up a Lost and Found notice and I did so.I wrote down my telephone number and ask the owner to call me after she saw it.Later，a girl came to claim it on 3 o'clock this afternoon.

　　答案　

　　This morning I found

　　red wallet on the campus.Girls

　　like red，so I believed the wallet

　　belonged to a girl student.I opened it， to find out whose it was. ，I found nothing but 300 yuan in it.I was wondering what to do with it

　　suddenly my

　　Chen Yang passed by.She suggested

　　put up a Lost and Found notice and I did so.I wrote down my telephone number and

　　the owner to call me after she saw it.Later，a girl came to claim it

　　3 o'clock this afternoon.

　　Passage

　　5

　　Last Saturday，our school had organized all of the Senior 1 students to visit the children at a local orphanage.We took many books that was popular among children，as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys，to children.They were delighted to receive these gift.We played some games together and give performances.Before leave the orphanage we took photos with them and gave them our contact details but we could keep in touch with one another.

　　That day，each one of us had an enjoyable time.We gave the children their care and help；for return，they gave us their smiles and love.These voluntary activities made a deeply impression on us.

　　答案　

　　Last Saturday，our school

　　organized all of the Senior 1 students to visit the children at a local orphanage.We took many books that

　　popular among children，as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys，to

　　children.They were delighted to receive these .We played some games together and

　　performances.Before

　　the orphanage we took photos with them and gave them our contact details

　　we could keep in touch with one another.

　　That day，each one of us had an enjoyable time.We gave the children

　　care and help； return，they gave us their smiles and love.These voluntary activities made a

　　impression on us.

　　Passage

　　6

　　I as well as my family are going to New York City this weekend.I had been looking forward to go there for a long time.It is one of the modernest city in the world.

　　There have also a lot of museums where you can learn something you can't learn it in school.I'd also like to see the Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building.

　　Unfortunately，the twin towers destroyed on September 11th,2001 and I would have the chance to see them by myself.Now I am getting ready for the excited trip.I bet it will be a unforgettable experience.

　　答案　

　　I as well as my family

　　going to New York City this weekend.I

　　been looking forward to

　　there for a long time.It is one of the modernest

　　in the world.

　　There

　　also a lot of museums where you can learn something you can't learn

　　in school.I'd also like to see the Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building.

　　Unfortunately，the twin towers

　　destroyed on September 11th，2001

　　I would have the chance to see them by myself.Now I am getting ready for the

　　trip.I bet it will be

　　unforgettable experience.