2017届高考英语二轮复习书面表达训练：1

　　书面表达专题卷1

　　1．

　　校刊“英语园地”为配合学校创建“绿色学校”的工作，开展了“创建绿色学校英语征文活动”，请根据下列提示用英语写一篇征文稿。

　　内容如下：

　　存在现象 浪费水、电；

　　乱扔可回收的饮料瓶、旧书本等；

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　　个人看法和建议 对学生进行环保教育；

　　从关灯、回收废物等小事做起；

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　　注意：1、词数150左右。

　　2、可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

　　3、文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　The green School Project has become part of the environmental education in our school. However, there are still a lot of problems in the school 。

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　　第二节

　　书面表达（满分25分）

　　高考在即，一年以后我们每位同学也都面临着志愿的选择问题。对此同学们进行了热烈的讨论。有的同学认为应该依靠父母或老师，因为他们更有经验；有的同学则认为我的未来我做主，父母和老师的想法也许已经过时。请你将同学们的讨论结果和自己（李华）对该问题的看法、写信给对此感兴趣的美国笔友Tom。

　　注意：

　　1．词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数；

　　2．可适当发挥，增加细节，使行文连贯、完整。

　　Dear Tom,

　　With the coming of the college entrance examinations, all the students should make a choice.

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　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

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　　第二节 读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)

　　阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　I found that my way of learning English that I formed from middle school still works today. By listening to tapes and imitating the speakers one can improve his pronunciation within a short time. By reciting classic essays one can enrich their language as well as enlarge their vocabulary. As a non-English major， I like to set aside a certain period of time for English learning every day， usually an hour or at least half an hour. I utilize this precious time by listening to tapes and imitating their content and then reciting the short passages I like. To be frank， “Crazy English” has always been my favorite. This is definitely not intended to flatter. Instead of dividing my attention between too many materials， I’d rather concentrate on one particular resource at a time such as CE， not only because of its abundant content and native English， but also because of the benefits it has brought to me through intensive reading， listening and reciting， I believe that studying English by using these intensive methods will help you to get twice the result with half the effort.

　　［写作内容］

　　(1) 以约30词概括短文的要点；

　　(2) 然后以约120个词就 “如何学好英语” 的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：

　　      ①弄清自已学习英语的目的；认识到学习英语是一个渐进的过程；

　　      ②养成良好的学习习惯，学英语讲究日积月累；

　　      ③充分利用好INTERNET。

　　［写作要求］   可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

　　［评分标准］    概括准确、语言规范、内容合适、篇章连贯。

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　　4．书面表达：（15分）

　　你的美国笔友Lisa暑假期间将要来中国旅游，请你根据提示，写一篇介绍你的家乡广州的短文。

　　1. 广州市地处广东省中部，是广东省的省会，是一座有2200多年的文明历史的古城；面积7434.4平方千米 ，人口约1000万；

　　2. 1982年，广州被选定为全国首批历史文化名城之一。

　　广州一年四季如春、繁花似锦，故又有“花城”的美誉；同时，“五羊”是广州的象征。

　　4. 今日广州，正以迷人的风采迎接来自四面八方的海内外游客。

　　评分标准：

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

　　5．

　　自然情况 ①位于长江边、风景优美、适合居住

　　成

　　．就

　　②经济发展迅速

　　③新建了不少工厂、住房、道路等。

　　存在问题 ④水、空气污染

　　⑤交通拥挤

　　对江城发展的看法 ⑥(内容由考生自己拟定)

　　注意：1．回信中不能使用“江城”以外的地名。

　　2．词数100左右。信的开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入词数。

　　参考词汇：经济economy n．

　　Dear Bob，

　　It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng．

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　　参考答案

　　1．

　　One possible version：

　　Very often you come across an empty classroom with the lights still on. It’s not difficult to find evidence of wasting water, a very serious problem. Additionally, students do not recycle enough, throwing away the soft drink bottles, used exercise papers and books. Worse still, many students still use non-environmentally friendly lunch boxes, causing the White Pollution.

　　These things show that many students lack the sense of environmental awareness. It’s important to educate students to be more environmentally friendly. At the same time, students can do small things, such as collecting used items for recycling, turning off the lights, saving water. Always remember that it’s everyone’s responsibility to protect the environment.

　　【解析】

　　2．

　　One possible version：

　　Dear Tom,

　　With the coming of the college entrance examinations, all the students should make a choice.

　　What university should they choose to study in? what major should they study in university? We will also be faced with the same problem in year, so it brings a heated discussion among us students.

　　Some students think that it is better to rely on teachers or parents because they are more experienced. On the contrary, some other students think now they are already grown – ups, so they can decide everything for themselves. Besides, they agree that parents and teachers may have the ideas that may be out of date.

　　As far as I’m concerned, I think teachers and parents have more life experience. Also what they do will obviously benefit us. In a word, as students, we should take teachers and parents’ advice.

　　Look forward to your reply!

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　3．

　　The author shares his/her sucessful experience of learning English. The method inculdes listening to tapes and imitating the speakers, reciting classic essays and choosing proper learning materials such as Crazy English.

　　From my point of view, if you are not motivated to learn English you will become frustrated and give up, so firstly you must know why you learn English. And secondly remember that learning a language is a gradual process - it does not happen overnight. You must be patient with yourself.What’s more important,  make learning a habit. That is ,try to learn something every day. It is much better to study (or read, or listen to English news, etc.) 10 minutes each day than to study for 2 hours once a week. At last, Use the Internet properly. The Internet is the most exciting, unlimited English resource that anyone could imagine and it is right at your finger tips.

　　If you can stick to it, I’m sure you’ll be a successful English learner.

　　【解析】

　　4．

　　Located in the middle of Guangdong province, Guangzhou, the capital of Guangdong, is an ancient city with a cultural history of 2200 years. It covers a total area of 743, 4 square kilometers with a population of 10 million. Because it is warm and flowery all the seasons, it is also called “Flower City” and “Five Goats” is the symbol of it. Since 1982, Guangzhou was named as one of the first historical and cultural cities. The special character of Guangzhou is attracting more and more tourists from all over the world.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：题目要求写一篇介绍家乡广州的短文。写作要点包括：广州的地理位置、人口、历史、气候等。要求句子结构要正确，不能出现语法错误；包含所有信息，使作文保持与语意连贯。

　　亮点说明：

　　范文使用了非谓语动词Located in the middle of Guangdong province；with复合结构with a cultural history of 2200 years；原因状语从句Because it is warm and flowery all the seasons等语法知识，使作文句式多样，层次清晰；

　　范文使用了was named as，all over the world等短语，使表达更生动、形象。

　　考点：材料类作文

　　5．Dear Bob，

　　It's very kind of you to write me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.

　　The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.

　　Yours，

　　Xiaohua

　　【解析】这篇书面表达主要结合要点来写，首先介绍家乡江城的自然情况：The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang River. It is a beautiful place for people to live in.这里的stand表示位于，不定式to live in做定语修饰a beautiful place。然后介绍江城的成就，Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses and roads have been built. 这句话中的时态很重要，用现在完成式。More schools and hospitals are available for its people.这里的be available for是“可以获得的”。表达存在问题时，要注意用表示转折的词，像however，such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours.举例说明这里用了such as。最后是对江城发展的看法，让考生自己发挥，就要看考生的思维和表达能力了，用In my opinion,引出自己的观点，I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we'll have a better hometown in future.这句话里面用了be brought under control“控制住….”，so that引导的是目的状语从句。都是很值得学习的。