2017届湖北省武汉市高考英语书面表达训练（8）

　　湖北省武汉市2017高考英语书面表达暑假练习（8）及参考范文

　　【湖北省2017高考英语《考试大纲》调研卷二模试题】

　　短文写作（共1题；满分30分）

　　请你根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass. It is about learning to dance in the rain.

　　注意: ①无须写标题；

　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；

　　④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　⑤词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

　　短文写作【范文赏读】

　　In our daily life, we are often confronted with difficulties, even great troubles. Some people do nothing but wait, while others face them bravely and conquer them. Personally, I think we should learn to face difficulties positively and make every effort to overcome them.

　　My memory drew me back to four years ago when I was a junior middle school student. At that time, I had great trouble studying English. First of all, I felt it hard to memorize English words. Besides, I didn’t dare to say anything in class when the teacher asked questions though I knew some answers. What annoyed me most was that I failed exams constantly. I was about to give up when my English teacher found problem. He encouraged me and gave me some good advice. Inspired by him, I was determined to defeat it. Following his advice, I made progress gradually.

　　From my experience, I can draw a conclusion that difficulties are weak if you are brave enough. So keep up and try to defeat them whenever you have any. Never wait for the storm to pass;instead, learn to dance in the rain.

　　【山东省2017模拟】写作【满分30分）

　　孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。

　　：

　　1．描述漫画内容；

　　2．分析漫画所揭示的问题；

　　3．提出你的看法。

　　注意：

　　1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

　　2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；

　　3．词数120左右;

　　4．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

　　参考词汇红地毯red carpet

　　铺路pave the way

　　From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet．

　　（2017湖北卷）第二节：短文写作（共1题；满分30分）

　　请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.

　　注意：①无须写标题；

　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　③内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；

　　④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

　　【考点】考察开放性作文

　　【写作指导】

　　本文属于开放性作文，要求我们就：我们做的微小的事情都可以对我们的社会产生很大的影响。告诉我们要关注生活中的小事。仍然属于议论文，可以使用一般现在时和第三人称。当然也可以写成记叙文，叙述一件小事让我们懂得要关注细节。

　　要点：1.叙述生活中发生的一件小事；以及这件小事对我们产生的影响。2.说明任何一件小事都会对我们的社会产生很大的影响。告诉我们要重视这样的小事。

　　首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

　　【一句多译】

　　我在去书店的路上，在十字路口等待的时候，一个十岁左右的女孩还被一辆开得很快的汽车撞倒。

　　I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly.

　　②I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, driving off quickly.

　　【参考范文】

　　It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.

　　I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

　　As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.

　　【江西省吉安一中2017模拟】书面表达（满分25分）

　　假设你是Li Hua，昨天是你18岁的生日，请根据下列要点，用英语写一篇日记。

　　要点：

　　1. 简要描述庆祝生日的时间、地点、方式和参加对象；

　　2. 描述让你最感动的一个场景；

　　3. 最后写出你的感受。

　　注意：

　　1. 内容积极向上，语意连贯，结构完整。词数120左右；

　　2. 不能写成诗歌形式；不能使用具体的人名和地名；

　　3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　March 20, 2017

　　Fine

　　Yesterday was my 18th birthday. _______________________________________________

　　__________________________________________________________________________

　　__________________________________________________________________________

　　【参考范文】

　　March 20, 2017

　　Fine

　　Yesterday was my 18th birthday. As Father and Mother thought it was a big occasion for me, they suggested I hold a birthday party at home to celebrate it. For several days they had been busy preparing for this. By 4 o’clock I was pleased to see all my friends had come. Mother cooked us a big meal.

　　We ate and talked happily. The most exciting moment was when Mother put a big birthday cake on the table and all my friends began to sing Happy Birthday. Seeing the 18 candles burning, I couldn’t keep back my tears. Mother asked me to make a wish before I blew out all the candles. After that, everyone enjoyed the sweet birthday cake and shared my happiness.

　　【广东省广州市2017综合测试】

　　读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

　　阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　I came from a family that never liked to waste money, and my parents taught me that living within my budget was the most important thing.

　　I had a very comfortable childhood, and never felt the need to throw away money on unnecessary things.

　　But things changed in my twenties, when I found myself in a city with plenty of food and shopping attractions! I burned through my income in the department stores on Saturday mornings, then burned through my credit cards at the night clubs on Saturday nights. Before too long, I was deeply in debt and constantly borrowing more money from my friends. It was during this time that I reflected on my behaviour, and decided that life was a lot more comfortable when you weren;t continually stressed about money.

　　For me, being thrifty （节俭）is not about being short on money. It’s about being smart with your money so you can enjoy your life to is fullest. I love recycling and getting back to nature, and teaching the kids about eco-friendly and responsible living.

　　Whether I like it or not, my natural feeling is to find ways to do everything for less. Less money, less time and less stress!

　　【写作内容】

　　1. 以30个词概括上文的主要内容。

　　2. 以约120个词就“节俭”的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：

　　①对你来说，节俭是什么？

　　②你认为节俭是否重要？为什么？

　　③就生活中如何做到节俭提一些建议。

　　【写作要求】

　　1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

　　2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　【评分标准】

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

　　【参考范文】读写任务（满分25分）

　　概括要点：

　　1. family never liked to waste money;

　　2. …was deeply in debt;

　　3. being thrifty is being smart with your money… find ways to do everything for less.

　　第二部分：

　　1. 对节俭的理解；2. 对节俭的重要性的论述； 3. 就生活中如何做到节俭提出建议。

　　Version 1

　　In the passage, the writer describes how he forgot his family’s thrifty tradition and eventually met with financial difficulty. This helped him realized the importance of thriftiness and start to practise thriftiness again.

　　To me, being thrifty means valuing money, making the most of what I have and trying never to spend beyond my budget or on unnecessary things.

　　Thrift is an old and dated concept to many young people. As life has become a lot easier, people tend to indulge(沉溺) in a luxurious lifestyle. That’s why I regard this nearly forgotten practice more important now than ever before.

　　Actually, to be thrifty can be really simple. Most of the time, it’s simply a matter of being more thoughtful in our everyday life: turning off lights when leaving the room, not using the air-conditioners unless necessary, bringing our water bottle from home rather than spending on soft drinks, using public transports to avoid needles driving and parking, ordering just enough when eating out, and so forth. To do these might mean doing things others won’t do and controlling our desires. But remember, a smart person is not one who always tries to impress others by showing off their wealth, but one who spares no effort to save for the future and for others.

　　Version 2

　　The writer recalls the stress and economic problems he had after moving to a big city, forgetting the thrifty habits of his youth and wasting all his money. At last, however, he learned his lesson and became thrifty once more.

　　I think a thrifty person is someone who uses only what they need and avoids wastes. Being thrifty can save us money, but more importantly, it is necessary if we want to save our planet. In the face of growing environmental problems, I believe it is more necessary than ever to reduce the amount of rubbish and pollution each individual produces. If we fail to control the amount of waste we produce, our society and our planet are doomed(毁灭) and this concern must outweigh any short-term satisfaction we get from buying and consuming more.

　　It is for the reason that I buy as much fresh food as possible, rather than packaged food, which requires much more energy to produce and adds to our pollution problems. I also try to cycle or walk everywhere I go, or at least use public transport rather than getting a taxi or depending on a private car. Actions like these keep me fit and healthy, helping environment and leave me with more money in my pocket! Why don’t you try these too? You might really enjoy the results.