2017届高考英语（课标全国）一轮复习课件：写作提升 第12讲

　　【常用句式】 一、基础句式 1．Look at the picture.

　　看一看这幅图。 2．The picture shows that.../As is shown in the picture/What the picture shows is that.../The picture presents to us that... 图片所示是…… 3．From the picture, we can see that.../As is seen in the picture.../As we can see in the picture.../ In the picture we can see that.../We can see from the picture that... 由图画我们可以看出…… 4．As is shown in the picture，...play(s) an important part in...

　　如图片所示，……在……方面起着重要作用。 5．As can be seen from the picture, it’s clear that... 如图片所示，很明显…… 6．It can be seen/found/noticed in the picture that... 由图画可以看到/发现/注意到…… 7．The picture is trying to tell us that... 这幅图片试图告诉我们…… 8．As is described in the picture... 正如图片中所描述的…… 9．The purpose of the picture is to show us that... 这幅图是要向我们展示…… 10．The picture above reminds us of... 上面图画让我们想到…… 二、高级句式 1．The picture shows/ reflects a common social problem/ a phenomenon... 这幅图反映了一个普遍的社会问题(现象)…… 2．The picture conveys/indicates a message that... 这幅图片传达(表明)了这样的信息…… 3．The picture intends to convey the message/meaning that... 这幅图试图传达了这样的信息…… 4．The message conveyed in the picture is clear. 这幅图所传达的信息是明确的。 5．The picture makes me think a lot about... 这幅图让我想到了很多关于…… 6．Such phenomenon are quite common. 这种现象很普遍。 7. Such a case is not rare. 这种情况不少见。 8．There are similar cases in our life. 在我们的生活中也有类似的情况。 9．There are several reasons behind this phenomenon. 这种现象背后有几种原因。 10．The reasons for this case can be listed as follows. 这种情况的原因可列举如下。 11．That sight reminds me of something in the daily life. 这景象使我想起日常生活中的事。 12．There are some possible reasons for this common social phenomenon. For one thing...，for another... 对于这种普遍的社会现象有许多可能的原因。一方面……，另一方面……

　　13．There are several/ a number of reasons/ factors accounting/that account for the phenomenon reflected in the picture. 有几个(一些)原因(因素)可以说明图画中所反应的现象。 14．From the picture, we can conclude/draw a conclusion that... 从图画中我们可以得出结论…… 【万能模板】 This picture describes__________， with__________. Recently it has become common for people in many walks of life to __________. It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about________， which is ________. He seems to be saying that________. In my opinion，________. Therefore, It is necessary for us to take measures to put an end to ________.On the one hand, we must ________.On the other hand，________.Only in this way can we________. (2017·福建高考)孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。 内容要求： 1．描述漫画内容； 2．分析漫画所揭示的问题； 3．提出你的看法。 注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2．考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯； 3．词数120左右； 4．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇：铺路 pave the way

　　From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet._______________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　【参考范文】 From the picture we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet. The son, well dressed, waves proudly in the middle while the father behind bends forward to hold the jacket and the mother in front rolls out the carpet, sweating. It shows a common phenomenon nowadays that children are the focus of families, shouldering the hope of their parents. Parents arrange everything for their children and spare no effort to pave the way for their success. As a consequence, children become so reliant on their parents that they have no independent thought or creative ideas. Such a situation is of great concern. In my opinion, overprotection and too much care are extremely bad for children’s development. Instead of doing everything for them, parents should encourage their children to overcome difficulties and inspire them to develop by themselves. Only in this way can they grow up to be independent and become truly successful. 谢谢观看！ 第十二讲

　　图画类 看图作文是近几年高考中的一个热点题型。该题型综合考查考生的观察分析能力、思维表达能力及语言运用能力。 图画类书面表达主要以图画为载体，附带少量文字提示或说明，要求考生从观察入手，通过对画面意思的理解，发挥想像力，按照一定的要求把图画内容准确、生动地加工成书面语言。这些情景形式以其直观明快、内容丰富、信息量大等鲜明的特点受到考生的青睐，为考生提供了充分发挥自由想像的空间，使大多数考生有话可写，有话能写，有话易写。这充分体现了以人为本的理念，突出了对创新意识和发散思维能力的考查。 写这类作文时应掌握以下技巧： 1．确定文章体裁。这类文章一般以记叙文或说明文为主。 2．确定人称。若以日记、回忆录等形式来写，一般采用第一人称；若以故事的形式来写，一般采用第三人称。 3．确定时态。根据图画内容及所采用的文章体裁，确定文章所要使用的时态。 4．发挥联想要合理、适度。这类文章一般要求考生做适宜的联想与发挥，以便使上下文更好地连贯起来。但联想和发挥一定要根据图画做到合情合理。 5．虚实结合，详略得当。对于图画中的内容，要注意详略得当。如图画中所出现的时间、数字或言论须一词不漏地清楚表达，而有些过程或原因可适当省略。

　　【必备词汇】 phenomenon n．现象 concern n．关心，关注 cartoon n．卡通，漫画 describe v．描述 depict v．描绘 common adj.普遍的，普通的 remind v．提醒 indicate v．表明 vivid adj.生动的 factor n．因素