2017届高考英语（课标全国）一轮复习课件：写作提升 第9讲

　　bad­tempered adj.坏脾气的 talkative adj.能说会道的，健谈的 warm­hearted adj.热心的 consequently adv.因此 【常用句式】 1．...was/were born in/into a poor/rich family. ……出生在一个贫穷的/富裕的家庭。 2．as a child of...years old 还是个……岁的孩子时 3．...spend his childhood in... ……在……度过了他的童年。 4．graduate from...Department of...University 毕业于某大学某系 5．...is situated/ located in... ……位于…… 6．In front of the village is... 村前有…… 7．It turns out to be... 结果是…… 8．Once there was a．.. 从前，有一个…… 9．I was about to...when... 我正要……，突然，…… 10．Hardly had I done...when.../No sooner had I done...than... 我刚……，就……/我一……，就…… 11．There will be (a party/speech/contest/concert...) to be held by...in(place) at (time)． 某活动将在某时某地由……举办。 12．I was very tired ，but I was happy that I did a good deed. 我很疲惫，但我很高兴自己做了一件好事。 【万能模板】 写人 sb.is________. He’s ________.He’s ________but he looks younger for his age.The impression he leaves on me is ________.He is short and thin________.He is honest and always ready to help others________.Never will I forget the day when ________.We have much in common regarding ________.We often________.He is such a good student that he is loved and respected by us all.

　　叙事 One day，________，________.When I was ________，something strange happened________.Finally________. I’ll never forget________. 十一黄金周、春节期间，高速路上的堵车现象触目惊心，国庆节假期更是被人们戏称为“黄金粥”，借以调侃人多车多的拥堵状况。 学校放假，学生们不免外出旅游，即使不外出旅游，也难免会遇到堵车的情况。现在，请叙述一次你最为难忘的堵车经历。 要求： 1．中心突出，结构合理； 2．语言流畅； 3．词数不少于120。 【参考范文】 It was our national holiday and I had eight days off, so I went with my parents to visit my grandma in the country. Indeed, I will never forget the journey. On the morning of Oct.1，I was woken up by my mother. She told me to start out early, or we might be blocked on the way.Hearing this，I thought she was frightening me. However, when we got to the expressway, I began to realize what I thought was wrong . There were so many cars, buses and trucks on the road that we found it very hard to move forward. More than five hours passed, but we still had over 600km to go. Hungry and thirsty, I could hardly stand it any longer. Mother and father kept on comforting me. In the end, we arrived at Grandma’s, but it was already 11：00 p．m. The journey was unforgettable and I think it is a trouble to go home on holidays for many people. I hope that our government can do something to solve this problem. 谢谢观看！ 第九讲

　　记叙文 记叙文是对某一事件或一系列事件的发生、发展、结束以及某一人物的变化情况所做的文字表述。它通常包括写人、写景、写事。其主要形式是：故事、人物介绍、资讯报道、缩写、改写等。这类题材的试题在试卷中多以看图作文、材料作文以及材料缩写等不同形式出现，是高考书面表达的主要考查方式之一。 写作时要注意以下几个方面的问题：

　　①严格按照基础写作的要求完成各个信息点，不要为了文章的生动而随意添加信息。 ②信息点的表述不要完全按照题目所给的顺序，要适当重组信息点。 ③记叙文写作的时态多数是用一般过去时，但也要注意灵活运用其他时态。 ④叙事类记叙文的话题通常和中学生的生活阅历有关，如校园生活、旅游、交通、交友等，平时要注意积累这些方面的词汇。 【必备词汇】 　good­looking adj.相貌好看的 ugly­looking adj.模样丑陋的 ordinary­looking adj.相貌平平的 pretty adj.漂亮的；机灵的，聪明的 funny­looking adj.外表可笑的 far­sighted adj.远视的；有远见的，慎重的 near­sighted adj.近视的 grey­haired adj.满头白发的 healthy adj.健康的；健全的 charming adj.有魅力的；迷人的，可爱的 attractive adj.有魅力的 humorous adj.幽默的 absent­minded adj.心不在焉的 independent adj.独立的 diligent adj.勤奋的；用功的 patient adj.有耐心的