2016届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：5

　　高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达5

　　2017年高考真题——英语（广东A卷）【题文】你接受一项写作任务，要为当地英语晚报写一篇报道。

　　［写作内容］

　　请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道，内容包括：

　　人物：英国人查理德·阿维斯（Richard Avis）

　　出生日期：1974年12月1日

　　时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人

　　目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义

　　相关信息：

　　借助当地媒体寻找

　　迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家

　　职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等

　　计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人

　　打算根据此经历写一本书

　　同年同月同日生的人：time twin

　　［写作要求］

　　只能用5个句子表达全部内容

　　［评分标准］

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

　　【答案】

　　【参考范文】

　　Richard Avis, a British, was born on December 1st, 1974. In order to understand the meaning of successful life in different cultures, Richard, from 2011, began to seek time twins around the world. With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on. Richard intends to find 40 time twins before his birthday and he is going to write a book based on this experience.

　　【解析】

　　解析：

　　【考点】考察提纲类短文

　　【写作指导】

　　本文属于提纲类短文，叙述寻找同年同月同日生的人的Richard Avis所做事情的具体信息。使用第三人称和一般现在时为主（在叙述过去发生的事情时使用一般过去时）。要点：人物：英国人查理德·阿维斯（Richard Avis）出生日期：1974年12月1日；时间：2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人；目的：理解不同文化中成功人生的含义：借助当地媒体寻找；迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家；职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等；计划40岁生日前找到40位同年同月同日生的人；打算根据此经历写一本书

　　提纲类书面表达主要特点是：要点明确，范围具体，贴近生活，易于动笔。此类试题中有较多的文字说明，实际上规定了考生表述的思路，对考生的写作范围作了较为明确的限定，试题中规定的要点一个也不能回避。考生极易受中文提纲的制约，将书面表达变成了翻译，造成语法结构和语汇上的单调，因此平时要多练习，活用语言，使文章流畅。

　　【一句多译】

　　借助当地媒体寻找；迄今找到32名，其中男性17名，女性15名，来自13个国家；职业包括政府官员、运动员、司机、教师、艺术家等；

　　（1）With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females. Their positions include government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on.

　　（2）With the help of the local media, he has already found 32 time twins from 13 countries, of whom there are 17 males and 15 females, including government officials, athletes, drivers, teachers, artists and so on.

　　山西省康杰中学、长治二中、临汾一中、忻州一中2015届高三上学期第一次联考英语

　　【题文】书面表达（满分25分）

　　假设你是新华中学高三学生李华，进入高三后你的朋友William感到压力很大，学习效果甚微，请你给他写一封电子邮件，帮助他放松身心，提高学习效率。

　　内容要点：

　　1. 快乐学习，保持愉快的心情；

　　2. 积极参加体育活动，听听歌曲音乐；

　　3. 多与同学交流，互相鼓励。

　　注意：

　　1. 开头和结尾已经为你写好,词数100词左右。

　　2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Dear William,

　　Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior Three. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】写作

　　Dear William,

　　Recently, I have heard that you feel stressed as a student of Senior Three. Here is some advice on how to study effectively.

　　First of all, learn in a relaxing way. This will remove our pressure, making study an easy job. Another way to keep up our spirits is to take part in sports. Not only does exercise build up the body, but also it provides us time to relax and fresh our mind, making us memorize things faster and longer. Music, too, is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.

　　Last but not least, we should exchange ideas with our classmates. Through the communication we can find support, which will encourge us to overcome difficulties in our study.

　　Hope these can benefit you.

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　河南省淅川县第二高级中学2015届高三上学期期中考试英语试题

　　【题文】

　　现在你们的学习任务越来越重，最近你班就“高三学生是否应该减少体育活动”的话题展开讨论。下表是讨论的具体内容和双方的观点。请根据表中所提供的信息写篇作文介绍讨论的情况并阐明自己的观点。

　　  大多数同学认为 少数同学认为

　　观 点 不应该减少 应该减少

　　理 由 1、  参加体育活动可以调节身心、减轻压力。

　　2、  学习固然重要，但身体健康是前提。 1、 

　　放在学习上。

　　2、 

　　注意：1、词数120左右

　　2、参考词汇：relax使……放松；

　　refresh使……恢复精力；

　　relieve减轻。

　　We recently had a discussion about whether we Senior3 students should cut down the time for sports. Opinions are divided.

　　__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　Possible version 1 :

　　We recently had a discussion about whether we Senior3 students should cut down the time for sports. Opinions are divided.

　　The majority of the students think that we shouldn’t cut down the time for sports. Sports are a good way for us to relax and refresh ourselves. In the meanwhile, they think sports can reliever all kinds of pressure. In addition, good health is the first thing, though study is very important. No good health, no study.

　　However, some other students think that the time for sports should be cut down, because the time for their study is too limited. In their opinion, every minute should be made good use of to improve their lessons. On the other hand, more sports will make some students tired, which will affect their study.

　　Personally, I think we should concentrate most of our energies on study and take exercise at the same time. Only in this way can we improve our study and our health as well.

　　Possible version 2:

　　Recently the topic whether we Senior 3 students should cut down the time for sports has aroused wide concern among the students. As to this, opinions vary from person to person..

　　The majority of the students hold the view that we shouldn’t, claiming that sports are a good way to relax and refresh themselves. Meanwhile, different kinds of pressure can be relieved through sports. More importantly, good health is the guarantee of study. No good health, no study.

　　However, some other students think otherwise. For them, the time for study is not enough. Therefore, every minute is valuable and should be made good use of to improve their lessons. On the other hand, more sports will make them tired, which will affect their study in a degree.

　　Personally, I’m in favor of the first view and we shouldn’t ignore exercise while studying attentively. Only in this way can we improve our study and our health as well.

　　广东省惠州市2015届高三第二次调研考试英语试题

　　【题文】阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文“When should I begin to acquire good habits?”a young boy asked his teacher.

　　“How old are you?” asked the teacher.

　　“Eight years old, sir.”answered the boy.

　　“Then you have just lost eight years,” the teacher replied.

　　There is no doubt that habits are formed at a very early age. When one is young, it is easy to acquire good habits.

　　Good habits are practices that help us in our daily life. The habit of brushing one’s teeth in the morning, for instance, keeps one’s teeth clean and prevents a bad smell which is unpleasant to others. Bad habits such as sticking one’s tongue out, biting one’s fingernails and picking one’s nose, are undesirable ways of behaving in front of others. If we want people to enjoy being with us, we should try to develop habits that are pleasant.

　　It is said, “We sow an act; we reap a habit. We sow a habit and we reap a character.” The habits we formed at an early age shape our character. Habits are like tributaries(支流) which flow into a river. The river is made up of all its tributaries; a person’s character is made up of all the habits that he or she has acquired over the years.

　　【写作内容】

　　1.以约30个词概括本文内容；

　　以约120个词谈谈你对好习惯养成的看法，并包括以下要点：

　　（1）你认为好习惯重要吗，为什么？

　　（2）你身上有哪些好习惯，它们对你的学习或生活有什么影响。

　　（3）怎样才能养成良好的习惯。

　　【写作要求】

　　1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。

　　2. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　【评分标准】

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

　　The author tells us that habits are formed when we are young and we should try to develop good habits, for they benefit us in our daily life and help us shape our character.

　　I can’t agree more with the author. Cultivating a good habit can not only shape our character, increase our inner beauty but also influence those people around you. Therefore, I think it is of great significance to form a good habit.

　　As for me, I benefit a lot from my good habits like getting up early to speak English aloud, reviewing and previewing lessons before going to bed every day. In the past, I didn’t dare to speak English before others because of my poor pronunciation and I also did badly in my English tests. Thanks to my good habits, however, I have been making progress in my English study. Now I am proud of my speaking and writing in English.

　　Then how can we form a good habit? First of all, you should be determined to fight against your laziness. Once you make up your mind to do something, never give up easily. Then, you have to be confident, believing that you can become a better person. Last but not least, keep urging yourself. It may take a long period for you to form a good habit but remember it is perseverance that makes you successful!

　　【解析】解析：考查学生的综合语言概括能力。本文主要讲述好习惯的重要性，并写出自己身上的好习惯和养成好习惯的方法。学生喜闻乐见，容易一气呵成。

　　安徽省淮南市第九中学2015届高三上学期入学摸底考试英语

　　【题文】写作（满分25分）

　　假定你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：

　　1.乐观的人生态度；2努力学习；3参加体育锻炼。

　　生词：态度 attitude

　　注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　(One possible version)

　　【解析】

　　特点：主题引入自然流畅，能让学生迅速进入情境，找到感觉。要点明确，段落清晰；与学生生活贴近，有话可说，有话能说。

　　限定大方向的同时，给学生比较充足的联想和自由发挥的空间。

　　本文主题明确，同时需要一定的联想，难度适中。

　　文章应包含以下要点:

　　1.乐观的人生态度；2.努力学习；3.参加体育锻炼。

　　【答案】

　　We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.

　　Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can help to build our country and enjoy life better. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a day’s study.

　　If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.