2016届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：11

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　　湖北省武汉华中师范大学第一附属中学2015届高三上学期期中考试英语试题

　　【题文】

　　请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　Gratitude is not only the greatest of virtues, but the parent of all others.

　　注意：

　　①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;

　　④词数为120左右。

　　【答案】

　　I would shudder at the thought of a world in which people have no gratitude for their country, society, family and those who helped them because gratitude is not only the greatest of virtues, but also cultivates all others.

　　Ideally, one inch of help deserves one mile of gratitude; if it is hard to be so for most ordinary people, at least one inch of help should be repaid by one inch of gratitude.

　　【解析】

　　【思路点拨】 本文主要从感激别人是美德入手，引出应如何感激别人。

　　2017高考真题英语（新课标I卷）

　　【题文】书面表达

　　假如你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意。请给该校写一封信，询问有关情况。（箭头所指内容）

　　注意：1.词数100左右

　　2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。

　　参考词汇：住宿—accommodation

　　山东省泰安市2015届高三上学期期中考试英语试题

　　假设你是高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Sam来信询问你目前如何进行高效复习的。请根据以下要点，结合自身实际写封回信。

　　1．学习方面：科学规划，提高效率；

　　2．生活方面：加强锻炼，健康饮食；

　　3．其他……

　　注意：

　　1．词数120—150左右；

　　2．开头语和结尾语已为你写好，不计入总词数；

　　3．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Dear Sam，

　　Thank you for your concern．_________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　Best wishes!

　　【答案】

　　【范文】

　　Dear Sam，

　　Thank you for your concern. In your letter, you asked me how to revise efficiently. As a student, it’s important for us to revise efficiently, which has a great influence on our achievements. As far as I am concerned, the following are all that I do in my study life.

　　To start with, you should have a revising plan, in which there must be the following aspects, what、when and how to revise. Next , you ought to keep in a good mood. Only when you feel happy can you learn efficiently and delightedly . Provided that you are upset now, do you want to study ? Thirdly, healthy body is a must.

　　There is no doubt that illnesses have a bad effect on our study. As a consequence , you’d better exercise regularly everyday so as to keep healthy. Last but not least, you must be strong-minded, since you you’ll find some questions difficult to deal with.

　　I’m more than glad to help you. And I hope these suggestions can give you some help.

　　Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　【技巧点拨】

　　主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；

　　一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；

　　恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；

　　注意卷面整洁，书写标准。

　　书面表达（共25分）

　　作为一名高三学生，你或许经常跟你的父母就看电视问题闹矛盾。你的父母以学业繁重和影响视力等为由阻挠你看电视，而你又认为电视能满足你的兴趣爱好同时繁重的学业下也需要放松，最后你们之间相互妥协达成了一致意见。请你以该话题写一篇字数120左右的短文。

　　注意：1. 就双方的理由可以进行适当的扩充，协议自己想象。

　　2. 开头已写好，不计入字数

　　I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my parents over whether I can watch TV after school.

　　【答案】I am a Senior 3 student. I often quarrel with my parents over whether I can watch TV after school.

　　My parents hold the opinion that I should study hard so that I will have more choices in the future. Besides,

　　they consider that it is harmful to my eyes to watch TV too often, which is the chief cause of short sight. But in my view, it is TV that gives me what I am interested in. In addition, it may relax my mind when I am tired, in which case the efficiency of my study will be improved.

　　In the end we reached an agreement. Only at weekends am I allowed to watch TV, however, the programs are limited to news, sports and entertainment, not including TV plays. This agreement is acceptable to me for it is beneficial to my study and life.

　　江苏省南京市、盐城市2017届高三第一次模拟考试英语试题请阅读下面背景材料，并根据问题，用英语写一篇作文向学校英文报投稿。

　　In China, an online shopping festival falls on November 11 when millions of Chinese shoppers 20 to Tmall.com and Taobao.com. In 2017, Tmall and Taobao together made 19. 1 billion in sales oil that dayHowever, in 2017, the shopping festival kicked off with an even sponger start-sales hit 100 million yuan 55 seconds alter midnight and reached 35 billion at the end of the day. This is just one of many companies that did business oil that day.

　　What does this material reflect? What is behind the phenomenon? And what are your comments and advice on it?

　　注意：

　　1. 词数150左右。开头己给出，不计入总词数。

　　2. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

　　3. 参考词犯：理性的rational

　　With the swift development of the Internet,__________________________________

　　___________________________.

　　【答案】

　　【参考范文】

　　With the swift development of the Internet, we can see online shopping has become a new trend in our daily life.There are several factors behind this phenomenon. First of all, it is very convenient for people to purchase what they want or like with the Internet easily accessible via their computers or telephones. Second, people shopping online have more choices of goods than those in real shops and area able to save time as well. Third, the relatively low prices on the Internet account for higher sales online.

　　In my opinion, as the pace of life quickens, it is natural for people to choose online shopping to save time and energy. But when we enjoy the convenience it brings us, we should be careful because sometimes the quality of goods cannot be guaranteed. Furthermore, we had better stay national and just buy what we really need; otherwise, it would cause a waste of money and resources.

　　【解析】【写作指导】

　　本文是材料作文，根据所给的材料，说明这种现象的潜在原因是什么，利弊是什么，你自己的观点是什么。注意时态用的是一般现在时。恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。