2016届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：20

　　高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达20

　　广东省中山市2017届高三高考模拟题英语试题

　　【题文】

　　A boy quarreled with his parents and ran away from home. He had a hard life

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　　any contact with his family for years. Later he wanted to go home

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　　he was afraid that his parents might not welcome him.

　　Finally he decided to send a letter to his father

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　　(express) his desire to return home and begging his pardon. In his letter he asked his father to tie a white ribbon on

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　　tree near his house by the side of the railway lines if he was ready to welcome him back home.

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　　he did not see the ribbon on the tree, he would think that his family did not welcome him and then he would leave them forever.

　　He boarded the train and waited very

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　　(nervous) as the train was about to pass by his home. To his surprise, the tree

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　　(decorate) with hundreds of white ribbons

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　　danced in the wind. His family did not want him to miss the sight of the ribbon and the welcome signal, so

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　　covered the whole tree with ribbons to show their whole-hearted

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　　(happy) and willingness to welcome him back.

　　【答案】16. without

　　17. but

　　18. expressing

　　19. the

　　20. If

　　21. nervously

　　22. was decorated

　　23. which/ that

　　24. they

　　25. happiness

　　广东省惠州市2015届高三第二次调研考试英语试题

　　【题文】随着智能手机的广泛应用，越来越多的年轻人成为低头族。近日，重庆划设了中国第一条专供手机使用者的人行道。请根据以下内容写一篇报道。

　　【写作内容】

　　地点 重庆洋人街景区

　　基本情况 3米宽，50米长

　　人行道一分为二；一边划设给手机使用者，另一边则为非手机使用者使用

　　目的 保障手机使用者的行走安全

　　看法 一些人赞同：认为人行道的设置是合理的，可避免手机使用者在行走中造成不必要的伤害

　　一些人反对：认为最好的办法是加强行人的安全教育，改掉手机使用者沉迷手机的不良习惯。

　　参考词汇：人行道：sidewalk；

　　洋人街景区：Yangrenjie Scenic Spot

　　【写作要求】

　　1. 只能用5个句子表达全部内容；

　　2. 首句已给出，不计入总句数。

　　【评分标准】

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

　　With the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in China are glued to them.___________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　With the increasing popularity of smart phones, more and more young people in China are glued to them. To ensure the safety of phone users on the road, the first “mobile phone sidewalk in China” was built in Yangrenjie Scenic Spot, Chongqing. It is divided into two pathways, one for cell phone users and the other for those ordinary pedestrians. As for its appearance, different people hold different opinions. Some people think it reasonable, viewing it as a good solution to the unnecessary injuries when they use phones while walking. However, others consider it pointless, believing it would be better if phone users can get rid of the bad habits of getting addicted to using phones and enforce the safety education for pedestrians.

　　【解析】

　　【思路点拨】本文是议论文，主要讨论是否应该为手机族设专线的问题，学生很容易把握要点，也容易写出自己的感想和评价。

　　该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇十分流畅，可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用to ensure不定式结构作状语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面衔接的也十分恰当，使用了as for，while，however等连接结构。文中使用了get rid of，get addicted to doing等高级词汇。本文语言流畅，高级结构应用自如，抓住了要点，是一篇佳作。

　　书面表达 （满分25分）

　　假如你是李华，你表哥Robert在美国留学，给你发来信息，说他新开通了微博(microblog)并邀请你加入。请给他回复一封电子邮件，说你同意加入并要求他在微博上为你提供以下内容：

　　1．定期介绍美国的风土人情；

　　2．多介绍一下他在美国的留学情况，因为你也有留学的打算；

　　3．多上传一些好的照片或视频。

　　注意：1．词数120左右；开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　2．必须包含全部内容要点；文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名等。

　　3. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Dear Robert,

　　I’m glad to receive your massage. Thank you very much for inviting me to join in your microblog._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　I am looking forward to your latest information in your microblog.

　　Yours

　　Lihua

　　【答案】

　　2017年高考真题——英语（湖北卷）

　　【题文】请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。Small things make a big difference. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.

　　注意：无须写标题；

　　除诗歌外，文体不限；内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例； 文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。One Possible Version

　　It isn’t hard to grow up into a responsible member of society.

　　I can well remember an incident that happened on a rainy Sunday afternoon. I was on my way to the bookstore and was waiting for the green light at a crossing when a girl of about ten was knocked down by a passing car, which drove off quickly. A man immediately rushed to the girl to give her first aid and I joined in without hesitation. Luckily she was not badly injured and we sent her to the nearest hospital. Compared with the escaped driver, I am proud of what I did.

　　As a member of the society, I am aware that being responsible is what it takes to make a better society.

　　2017高考真题英语（重庆卷）

　　【题文】青少年研究专家Susan Beacham在自己的英文网站上开辟专栏,邀请大家分享心目中的“最 好礼物”。她认为,礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和精力。

　　假设你是李华，请用英文发帖,内容应包括：

　　赞同Susan的看法

　　你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么

　　该礼物的意义

　　期待大家回复

　　注意:（1)词数不少于80;

　　（2）符合语言规范；

　　（3）在答题卡上作答；

　　（4）开头已给出（不计入总词数)。

　　I am a

　　high school student from China.___________________________

　　【答案】

　　【考点】考察半开放性作文

　　【写作指导】

　　本文要求你以李华的口吻描述你对于Susan持有的“礼物贵在心意，应为之付出时间和经历”观点的态度。属于议论文写作，所以使用一般现在时和第一人称。

　　要点：1.赞成Susan的看法。2.举例说明你收到的最好的礼物（朋友之间用心做的一张生日卡片）等；3.该礼物说明朋友对我的感情是真挚的，生虽然礼物不贵重，但是情义很重。4.期待大家的回复。

　　【一句多译】

　　一天，当我打开书本的时候，我发现了附在第一页上一张漂亮的卡片，给了我最好的祝福。

　　I opened my book, I found a beautiful card attached to the first page, giving me best wishes.

　　One day, when I opened my book, I found a beautiful card attached to the first page, which gave me best wishes.

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