2016届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：23

　　高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达23

　　广东省湛江一中2017届高三临门一脚英语

　　【题文】基础写作 (共1小题，满分15分)

　　在过去几个月很多城市经常发生雾霾污染，这已经引起越来越多的关注。雾霾污染是一种空气污染，其中夹杂了烟雾，灰尘和其他干燥微粒，

　　写作内容：

　　请根据以下内容，介绍雾霾。

　　导致雾霾污染的因素 工厂排放的颗粒直接释放到空气中，与灰尘互相作用，导致了严

　　重的空气污染。

　　2. 私家车废气的排放。

　　雾霾污染的严重后果 1. 天气坏，越来越多的人看医生

　　2. 频繁的雾霾导致交通事故。

　　采取措施 1. 政府应尽快形成和完善相应的法规。

　　2. 每个人都要减少使用不环保的车辆。

　　雾霾污染: pollution haze

　　排放： emission

　　互相作用: interact with

　　写作内容：1. 导致雾霾污染的因素

　　2. 雾霾污染的严重后果

　　3. 采取措施

　　开头已给出

　　The pollution haze, one kind of air pollutions which is mixed up with smoke, dust and other dry particles, has occurred frequently in so many cities that more and more attention has been aroused in the past few months.

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　　【答案】基础写作

　　Possible version :

　　The pollution haze, one kind of air pollutions which is mixed up with smoke, dust and other dry particles, has occurred frequently in so many cities that more and more attention has been aroused in the past few months.

　　A number of factors can contribute to pollution haze, one of which is that, the particles, directly released into the air, interact with dust, leading to the serious air pollution. Besides, the emission of the private cars is another contributing factor that can’t be ignored. As for severe consequences caught by pollution haze, not only do more and more people have to see their doctors due to the bad weather, but also sometimes traffic accidents come up just because of the frequent pollution haze. To handle the problem, it is the government that should form and perfect some relative regulations as soon as possible. Additionally, we individuals ought to do our bit by reducing the use of such environmentally unfriendly vehicles as private cars.

　　江苏省苏州实验中学2017届高三下学期周考试卷

　　【题文】书面表达 (满分25分)

　　2017年春晚上, 一曲《时间都去哪儿了》戳中所有人泪点。伴随我们成长，父母在不经意间老去, 全社会都沉浸在对父母的感恩中, 你也颇有感触, 请以此为主题, 写一篇感想。

　　附歌词: ……记忆中的小脚丫，肉嘟嘟的小嘴巴，一生把爱交给他，只为那一声爸妈;时间都去哪儿了,还没好好感受年轻就老了, 生儿养女一辈子，满脑子都是孩子哭了笑了;时间都去哪儿了，还没好好看看你眼睛就花了，柴米油盐半辈子, 转眼就只剩下满脸的皱纹了……

　　要求:

　　1. 歌词仅供參考，请勿逐句翻译。

　　2. 文中应包括对父母付出的回忆, 和对如何感恩父母的反思。可以适当增加细节加以发挥。

　　3. 词数150左右。文章开头已给，不计入总词数。参考词汇： 皱纹 wrinkle

　　The audiences were all moved to tears by the song Where has the time gone in the Spring Festival Gala (春晚) of this year.

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　　【答案】参考范文

　　The audiences were all moved to tears by the song Where has the time gone in the Spring Festival Gala(春晚) of this year.

　　Every time I enjoy the song, I can’t hold back the tears in my eyes. To provide me with better educational opportunities, my parents have always been overworking without any complaints. Exhausting as his work was, my father always took me to school by bike when I was very young. I also owe my gratitude to my mother, who is always there whenever I have trouble.

　　It’s only when we find their grey hair and wrinkles that we realize they’re getting older. As a student, I can’t afford to buy them expensive gifts now, but I can help with their housework. What’s more , I’m determined to work harder to let them feel proud of me in the future.

　　江苏省南京市2017届高三考前冲刺训练（南京市教研室） 英语

　　【题文】书面表达

　　请你根据对下图的理解，用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包括以下内容：

　　1. 简单描述图片内容；

　　2. 谈谈你的理解和想法；

　　3. 举例说明理由。

　　注意: 1.词数：150词左右;

　　2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数;

　　3. 参考词汇：fertilizer

　　n. 肥料

　　Haste Makes Waste

　　As we all know, there goes an old saying, “Haste Makes Waste”. _________________________

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　　【答案】Possible version:

　　Haste Makes Waste

　　As we all know, there is an old saying, “Haste Makes Waste”. As is vividly shown in the picture, the couple get astonished when seeing their crops withering/ dead. The husband can’t help losing his temper, scolding his wife for her improper way of farming, while the wife argues that she simply wants the crops to grow faster by fertilizing more. She never thought too many fertilizers would cause the crops to die.

　　The picture clearly conveys a message that if people are eager to finish a task in a hurry, the outcome may be less satisfactory and even goes to the opposite. As is often the case, we can’t take every detail into consideration before a quick decision is made. Under such circumstances we attach too much importance to quick speed at the expense of high quality, which eventually contributes to greater losses. Additionally, more unexpected accidents may take place when we are in a hurry.

　　Remembering English words is a good case in point. If you set a goal of reciting 50 words within a short time, the result may let you down, for you forget them easily. However, if you slow down a little bit, for example, divide the words into several parts, one part at a time and go over them frequently, they can be kept longer and more easily in mind. Comparing the two methods, we find the latter is more efficient.

　　In conclusion, haste makes waste. If we can apply it to our daily life, we are bound to make progress.

　　湖北省孝感高中2015届高三上学期十月阶段性考试试题 英语

　　【题文】短文写作（共l题；满分30分）

　　请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　We all know that "Chances favor the prepared mind".

　　Only if you are well prepared, will you be able to seize them.

　　注意： 1. 无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语。

　　2. 除诗歌外，文体不限。

　　3. 文中不得透露个人姓名和学习名称。

　　4. 词数不少于120词。

　　There is no denying that we are eager for golden chances to be successful in life. However, many people are not aware that chances are always for those who get well prepared. I didn’t realize it until I went to high school.

　　Soon after I became a senior one student, a singing competition was to be held in school. I love singing but I was very shy then and had never sung at the top of my voice in public. I could only sing to myself most of the time. Somehow, I wanted to have a try. When I talked about it with my parents, they inspired me to follow my inner voice and told me as long as I got well prepared, I would make it. With their encouragement, I became confident and practiced hard after class. Sometimes, I would turn to my music teacher for help. When I felt I was ready, the day came. Standing on the stage, I took a deep breath and began to sing with my full emotions. It turned out that I won the first prize .

　　This experience has taught me a precious lesson in my life. If you are not successful yet, most probably you haven’t been well prepared. Once you have, chances will surely favor you.

　　2017高考真题英语（陕西卷）

　　【题文】

　　假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。

　　写作要点：

　　1.表示对客人的欢迎；

　　2.介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；

　　3.表达对客人的祝愿。

　　写作要求：

　　1.词数不少于100；

　　2.称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；

　　3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

　　Dear American guests,

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　　【答案】

　　【思路点拨】本题是应用文写作，体裁是写欢迎辞，也是材料作文，文体格式已经给出，因此在审题环节主要从以下几点着手：（1）主体时态：一般现在时；（2）主体人称：第三人称；第二人称；（3）写作要点：①欢迎客人；②“英语周”活动；③活动目的；④活动内容；⑤祝愿。在审题结束后要注意表达的准确性，行文的逻辑性和句式、词汇的多样性，尽量使用多样化的词汇和句式，并注意写作的层次，恰当使用连接词和过渡性词汇，以增强文章的逻辑性和可读性。最后就是要注意书写的美观和标点符号的准确使用，避免拼写、标点等较低级的错误等。