2016届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：32

　　高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达32

　　湖南省浏阳一中、攸县一中、醴陵一中2015届高三联考英语试题

　　【题文】

　　Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.

　　伴随我们成长，长辈们在不经意间老去。一曲《时间都去哪儿了》戳中了所有人的泪点，引起很多人的共鸣。相信你也会有些感触。请以此为话题写一篇短文：

　　内容：1. 你和一位长辈之间发生的一件事

　　2. 你的感触和反思

　　注意：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域;

　　2.短文词数120词左右;

　　3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯;

　　4.书写清晰、工整;

　　One possible version:

　　The song Where Has the Time Gone moved many people, which also brought me back to an unforgettable incident between my grandpa and me.

　　When I was 13, my parent worked in Guangdong Province and I was take care of by my grandpa. I got addicted to computer games because of loneliness and learning-weariness. My parents were disappointed and angry, forcing me to drop out. But Grandpa said no. He decided to accompany me to school and waited for me outside till the end of class everyday. Until one day he was seriously ill, I was touched and felt guilty.

　　He used his own way to get me back from the wrong way. Now he is getting older and older. I can’t afford to buy him expensive gifts now, but I can help him with the housework. What’s more, I am determined to work harder to make him feel proud of me in the future.

　　【解析】

　　【技巧点拨】

　　1.主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；

　　2.一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；

　　3.恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；

　　4.注意卷面整洁，书写标准。

　　河南省北大附中河南分校2017届高三冲刺英语

　　【题文】书面表达（满分25分）

　　假定你是李华，每当听到“常回家看看”这首歌时，你都非常感动。向父母表达爱的方式

　　有很多种，请你根据以下要点，写一篇演讲稿号召同学们都要尊敬父母。

　　提示：1.经常帮助父母做一些力所能及的家务活；

　　2．经常关心父母的生活和身体健康状况；

　　3．在父母生日时表达祝愿，让他们知道我们的爱。

　　注意：1．词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当发挥以使行文连贯；

　　3．开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数。

　　My dear fellows,

　　Today I'd like to talk about love to our parents.

　　Many people are moved by the song Going home often when they hear it ,including me.

　　Thank you!

　　【答案】

　　广东省阳东一中、广雅中学2015届高三第一次联考英语试题【题文】基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)

　　中国民工学校状况越来越受到人们的关注，假设你是李华，你和你的同学共同对你所在的城市的民工学校进行了调查。了解情况之后你写信给英语周报，呼吁全社会关注民工学校，帮助民工子弟。

　　[写作内容]：

　　民工学校的现状 1、设施简陋

　　2、师资缺乏

　　3、民工子弟热爱学习

　　改善民工学校现状的建议 政府方面：资金的投入

　　学生方面：...... （至少提两个建议）

　　呼吁全社会的人关注民工学校

　　[写作要求]

　　1、只能使用5个句子表达所有写作内容，信的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入句子个数。

　　2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　[参考词汇]：民工学校：migrant schoolDear Editor，

　　Recently, my classmates and I made a survey about the migrant schools in our city. Problems do exist.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　【范文】

　　Dear Editor，

　　Recently, my classmates and I made a survey about the migrant schools in our city. Problems do exist.

　　Owing to the lack of money, most migrant schools have no modern equipment, no playground, no libraries, and even not enough teachers. However, we find that the migrant kids are just as keen on study as us. In order to improve the situation, we think our government should take measures to pour more money into migrant schools. As for us, the local students, can help to collect money or donate books to them. We do hope that the whole society can care more about migrant kids, because if everyone contributes a bit, migrant kids can surely enjoy equal education opportunity.

　　Yours sincerely

　　Li Hua

　　广东省湛江一中2017届高三临门一脚英语

　　【题文】读写任务 （共1小题，满分25分）

　　阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　One night when my wife was preparing dinner, our little son took a piece of paper to her which read:

　　For washing the car---- $5.00

　　Playing with little sister---- $0.25

　　Getting a good report card----$5.00

　　For sweeping the common corridor--- $2.00

　　Total ---$12.25

　　His mother looked at him standing there expecting payment. She picked up the pen and turning the paper over, this is what she wrote：

　　For 10 months I carried you---- No charge

　　For the toys, food and clothes ---- No charge

　　The full cost of my love ---- No charge

　　When he finished reading, he had big tears in his eyes. He looked at his mother and said, “Mummy, I love you!” Then he took the pen and in great big letters wrote on the “bill”: “All paid.”

　　【写作内容】

　　1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

　　2. 以约120词，以 “母爱” 谈谈你的想法，内容包括：

　　(1) 读完故事后你的感受；

　　(2) 记一件有关母爱的感人事件；

　　(3) 你对母爱的看法。

　　【写作要求】

　　1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不能直接

　　引用原文中的句子。

　　2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　【评分标准】

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

　　【答案】任务写作

　　Possible version

　　The writer’s son asked payment from his mum for the things he did. After reading what his mum wrote on the paper, the son realized her unconditional and priceless love, moved to tears.

　　After reading the story, I am also moved by the Mum’s selfless and priceless love for her son. Without saying the word “love”, the mother did what she could to express her deep love to her son. And her love gave her son a second life!

　　Talking of a mum’s love for her kid, I have never forgotten a story which touches me deeply in heart. A little boy had a serious disease. After a long time treatment, it seemed that doctors could do nothing to save him. He was frightened and became desperate, crying all day long. But his mother didn’t give up but consistently comforted him with loving, encouraging words and tender care. The boy gradually calmed down, then perseveringly fighting against the illness bravely, and eventually survived. It was his mum’s love for him that helped the boy conquer the great challenge in his life.

　　For me, Mum, a word that means the world to everyone, is the warmest word in their heart. Nothing can express more. A mother’s love is like a circle, which has no beginning and ending. It keeps going around and around, ever expanding and touching everyone who comes in touch with it. The circle surrounds them like the morning’s mist, warming them like the noontime sun, and covering them like a blanket of evening stars. Thus, remember her unconditional love and never forget to love her more than ever.

　　江西五校（江西师大附中、临川一中、鹰潭一中、宜春中学、新余四中）2015届高三第一次联考 英语

　　【题文】书面表达（满分25分）One possible student version:

　　Some students have always been very efficient at schoolwork, among whom, Li, monitor of our class, is an example. He distinguishes himself as the most productive student in the class.

　　When asked why he is always so productive, Li responded that it was some good habits that benefited him greatly and enabled him to be quite effective at schoolwork. Li always has a strictly-followed plan, for he believes that efficiency depends on good organization. Besides, he makes full use of his time. He listens attentively and takes notes in class, keeping close pace with the teacher. After class, he not only finishes the homework but also makes sure that consolidation work has been done. Moreover, he attaches great importance to critical thinking, with which he never accepts anything blindly.

　　From Li we can learn that a student’s good performance and success is closely connected with his good habits. Good habits are very important. We may benefit from them or suffer from the absence of them.