2016届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：35

　　高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达35

　　辽宁省沈阳市东北育才学校2015届高三上学期第一次模拟考试英语

　　【题文】书面表达（满分25分）

　　假设你叫李华，是一名高三学生。自从进入高三以后，你发现部分同学晚上学习到很晚。他们边学习边吃零食或喝可乐，早上则由于起床太晚而不吃早餐，你感觉这样会对身体有害。请你根据这种现象给《英语周报》写一封信反映上述情况，并谈谈自己的想法。

　　注意：(1) 可根据内容需要适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　(2) 词数：100左右。

　　Dear Editor,

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　吉林省吉林市2015届高三第一次摸底考试英语试题 25分）

　　学校校报面向在校高三学生组织英语征文活动，请以“我的高三生活”为主题写一篇英语短文，具体内容如下：

　　1. 生活安排

　　     2. 学习计划

　　     3. 理想的大学及专业

　　1. 字数100左右；

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3. 开头语已为你写好。

　　My last year in the senior high school has already started.       

　　  范文My last year in the senior high school has already started. I need to balance both my life and study in order to make it colorful and meaningful.

　　I strongly believe that doing sports every day may build up my body. Besides, communicating with teachers, parents and friends can be of great help to reduce my pressure. As for my study, I’ve made a practical plan to follow strictly. I should also overcome my shyness to consult the teachers if there’s something making me confused. What’s more, to improve physics is the most urgent because I have to make a solid foundation for my dream university — Cambridge, where I would like to major in physics.

　　I really hope that my dream will come true through my persistence and diligence.

　　【答案解析】此文通过英语提高的过程很好的把这几个词联系起来，形成一篇结构严谨，遣词造句很好的文章。文章中用了高级词汇和句子结构，如：动名词短语做主语communicating with teachers, parents and friends can be of great help to reduce my pressure.；  不定式做主语；状语从句；定语从句； to improve physics is the most urgent because I have to make a solid foundation for my dream university — Cambridge, where I would like to major in physics.；衔接词：Besides, ；What’s more等。

　　江苏省南京市2017届高三考前冲刺训练（南京市教研室）

　　【题文】书面表达

　　你准备参加英语演讲，主题是The value of goals, 在准备稿件时，你读到下面一篇文章，给你很大启发。请按要求准备一份演讲稿, 字数约250词。

　　Florence Chadwick was a great swimmer. However, not all of her efforts worked out. In addition to working hard, she had a secret for success. At the age of 34, her goal was to become the first woman to swim from Catalina Island to the California coast. However, in 1952, the sea was like an ice bath and the fog was so dense that she could hardly see her support boats. Her body was numb and she had been swimming for nearly 16 hours. Against the frigid grip of the sea, she struggled on---hour after hour---while millions watched on national television.

　　Alongside Florence, in one of the boats, her mother and her trainer offered encouragement. They told her it wasn’t much farther. But all she could see was fog. They urged her not to quit. She never had… until then. With only a half mile to go, she asked to be pulled out. Still thawing her chilled body several hours later, she told a reporter, “Look, I’m not excusing myself, but if I could have seen land I might have made it.” It was not tiredness or even the cold water that defeated her. It was the fog. She was unable to see her goal.

　　Two months later, she tried again. Despite the same dense fog, she swam with her faith intact and her goal clearly pictured in her mind. She knew that somewhere behind that fog was land and this time she made it.

　　　你的演讲稿包括以下内容：

　　你读完这个故事的感受；

　　谈谈你是如何理解目标在人生当中所起到作用；

　　鼓励大家要树立目标，并为目标的实现而努力。

　　【答案】Possible version:

　　Ladies and Gentlemen,

　　Good morning.

　　Several days ago, I read a story about Florence Chadwick, who first failed to swim from Catalina Island to the California coast because of fog. However, trying again, she succeeded and became the first woman to make it, with her goal in mind despite dense fog/ though it was still foggy.

　　After reading it, I am deeply inspired by how she succeeded. Her story gives me the strength to pursue my goal, no matter what hardships I am to go through. Her experience makes me aware of the power of a goal in helping one succeed in what he wants to do. Goals are undoubtedly playing an important role in our life. First of all, as goals often go with hopes, they have the magic to enable us to be positive towards ups and downs. Moreover, bearing goals in mind, we are less likely to be blind to the ideals of our life or be distracted from our way to success. Finally, as goals are what we are longing for, they thus can motivate us to strive for greater achievements, making our life more satisfactory/ fulfilling.

　　Since / Now that goals are so significant to our life, we students are supposed to set goals in life/ it is advocated that every one of us should set goals, keep them in mind and spare no effort/ make every effort to achieve them regardless of all the difficulties.

　　Thank you very much for your attention.

　　甘肃省嘉峪关一中2017届高三下学期适应性考试（三）英语

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　　书面表达（满分25分）

　　假设你是新华中学的高三毕业生李华，刚刚参加完高考。最近听说美籍华人李响出资帮助贫困大学生。请你根据以下要点写一封资助申请信。

　　1．个人情况介绍；

　　2．申请资助原因(家庭困难情况)；

　　3．资助款的使用及今后打算。

　　注意：1．词数：120—150(开头已给出，不计入总词数)；

　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Dear Mr．Li，

　　I’m had to hear that you will help those who are lacking_in money in going to college．I'm writing to apply for it.__________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】Dear Mr.Li,

　　I’m glad to hear that you will help those who are lacking in money in going to college . I am writing to apply for it

　　My name is Li Hua , a senior three student of Xinhua

　　Middle School ．Ｉｈａｖｅ　ｍｕｃｈ　ｆｉｎａｎｃｉａｌ

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　　ｂｕｔ　Ｉ　ａｍ　ｅａｇｅｒ　ｔｏ　ｇｏ　ｏｎ　ｗｉｔｈ　ｍｙ　ｆｕｔｈｅｒ　ｓｔｕｄｙ．　Ｉｎ　ｍｙ　ｆａｍｉｌｙ，　ｍｙ　ｆａｔｈｅｒ　ｉｓ　ｔｈｅ　ｏｎｌｙ　ｂｒｅａｄｗｉｎｎｅｒ　ｗｈｉｌｅ　ｍｙ　ｍｏｔｈｅｒ　ｗａｓ　ｌａｉｄ　ｏｆｆ　ｔｗｏ　ｙｅａｒｓ　ａｇｏ　．　ｍｙ　ｂｒｏｔｈｅｒ　ｉｓ　ｓｔｕｄｙｉｎｇ　ｉｎ　ａ　ｊｕｎｉｏｒ　ｓｃｈｏｏｌ　．　Ｉ　ｔｏｏｋ　ｐａｒｔ－ｔｉｍｅ　ｊｏｂ　ｄｕｒｉｎｇ　ｔｈｅ　ｓｕｍｍｅｒ　ｖｏｃａｔｉｏｎ，ｂｕｔ　Ｗｈａｔ　Ｉ　ｈａｖｅｅａｒｎｅｄ　ｉｓ　ｆａｒ　ｆｒｏｍ　ｅｎｏｕｇｈ　ｆｏｒ　ｍｅ　ｔｏ　ｐａｙ　ｔｈｅ　ｔｕｉｔｉｏｎ　ｆｅｅｓ．Ｉｎ　ｏｒｄｅｒ　ｔｏ　ｃｏｎｔｉｎｕｅ　ｍｙ　ｓｔｕｄｙ，　Ｉ　ｈａｖｅ　ｔｏ　ａｐｐｌｙ　ｆｏｒ　ｙｏｕｒ　ｈｅｌｐ．

　　Ｉｆ　ｍｙ　ｒｅｑｕｅｓｔ　ｉｓ　ａｃｃｅｐｔ，　Ｉ　ｗｉｌｌ　ｍａｋｅ　ｇｏｏｄ　ｕｓｅ　ｏｆ　ｔｈｅ　ｍｏｎｅｙ　ａｎｄ　ｐｕｔ　ｍｙ　ｈｅａｒｔ　ｉｎｔｏ　ｓｔｕｄｙ．　Ｉ　ｈｏｐｅ　ｙｏｕ　ｗｉｌｌ　ｃｏｎｓｉｄｅｒ　ｍｙ　ａｐｐｌｉｃａｔｉｏｎ．

　　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　河南省中原名校2017届高三高考仿真模拟统一考试 英语

　　【题文】书面表达（满分25分）

　　假设你是李华，最近跟父母去国外旅行时所居住的旅馆服务不好。请根据以下要点提示

　　给旅馆老板写一封英文投诉信，

　　l空调无法关掉；

　　2浴室不干净；

　　3．晚上周围噪音很大，且不给更换房间。

　　4服务员态度随意，漫不经心。

　　注意：l．词数100左右；

　　2．短文须包括所给要点，但不必逐句翻译；

　　3可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　4文章的开头和结尾已经给出，下计入总词。

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　I am writing to complain about your hotel service. My parents and I had a terrible stay in

　　Room 512.

　　__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Looking forward to hearing

　　from you

　　Yours faithfully

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I am writing to complain about your hotel service. My parents and I had a terrible stay in Room 512.

　　Firstly, the air-conditioner wouldn’t work. When I asked the staff for help, they said ok. But eventually no one came. Secondly, I found the bathroom rather dirty to bathe in. What was worse, the noise outside at night was so loud we found it hard to fall asleep. I asked to change rooms, but was refused for the reason that the hotel was full. It was surprising that the waiters treated us in a very casual and indifferent manner.

　　     I would like you to refund my money. Unless I get a satisfactory reply, I’ll write to the Consumer Association.

　　Looking forward to hearing from you.

　　                                      Yours faithfully,