2016届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：45

　　高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达45

　　湖北省武汉二中2017届高三全真模拟考试（二） 英语

　　【题文】综艺节目“爸爸去哪儿”展现了打破传统的新时代男人意识到陪伴子女同建立事业一样重要。

　　第二节短文写作(共1题: 满分30分)

　　请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　Telling lies is what we are taught not to do, but in some cases, telling lies seems to be what we have to do.　

　　注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

　　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　　③内容必须结合生活或学习中的一个事例，写出真情实感。

　　　④文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；

　　　⑤词数不少于120字左右。

　　【答案】With great importance attached to honesty, children are taught not to tell lies. However, there are occasions when we realize that telling lies seems to be the only choice.

　　My best friend Li Hua used to be rather poor in English, especially his terrible and strange pronunciation. Hardly could he make himself understood when speaking English. Bearing a heavy load in mind, he felt desperate and upset. He dared not speak English in class. When asked quetions by our English teacher, he was always nervous and embarrassed. The classmates always made fun of him, saying that he was speaking Japanese! Once I met him in the corridor.Therefore I praised that his pronunciation was very special and kind of like Obama's. Believing what I said, he got greatly inspired. He spared no effort to practice speaking English every day.

　　Now, he can speak English fluently with a perfect accent.

　　Recently, he told me that it wasn't long before he knew that what I said just a little white lie but he appreciated it badly, without which, he said, he couldn't have achieved such great progress.

　　广东省中山一中2017届高三高考热身英语试题

　　【题文】

　　以下是网上走红的 “低碳哥”的基本情况.

　　【写作内容】

　　根据以上“低碳哥”的基本情况写一篇介绍,内容包括:

　　“低碳哥”的简要介绍及走红的时间;

　　他的主要做法及人们的看法

　　3、你的看法

　　【写作要求】

　　只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

　　【评分标准】

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

　　参考词汇: 低碳哥Low-carbon Brother

　　二氧化碳 carbon dioxide

　　【答案】

　　A young man called Low-carbon Brother became a hit one on the Internet in 2011, who suggests living a low carbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reduce carbon dioxide in the air. For example, he always picks up some waste paper on the street and uses the blank side to write something and while he is watching TV, he always turns down the brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Besides, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think that what he is doing is just a show and impractical. But as far as I am concerned, I strongly support his idea and his behavior because although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, he at least can enjoy a healthy life.

　　辽宁省沈阳市东北育才学校2015届高三上学期第一次模拟考试英语

　　【题文】书面表达（满分25分）

　　假设你叫李华，是一名高三学生。自从进入高三以后，你发现部分同学晚上学习到很晚。他们边学习边吃零食或喝可乐，早上则由于起床太晚而不吃早餐，你感觉这样会对身体有害。请你根据这种现象给《英语周报》写一封信反映上述情况，并谈谈自己的想法。

　　注意：(1) 可根据内容需要适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　(2) 词数：100左右。

　　Dear Editor,

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　江西省南昌市八一中学2017届高三第三次模拟考试英语

　　【题文】作文25分

　　假如你是李华，今天去参观长城时，发现长城到处是垃圾，城墙上还有游客到此一游等的刻字。你想就此事向英语报投一篇稿：1、反映这种乱扔垃圾的不文明现象；2、号召广大游客爱护景区卫生环境；3、建议。

　　注意: 1.词数:120左右;

　　2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.邮件的开头已为你写好。

　　Dear editor,

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　吉林省吉林市2015届高三第一次摸底考试英语试题 25分）

　　学校校报面向在校高三学生组织英语征文活动，请以“我的高三生活”为主题写一篇英语短文，具体内容如下：

　　1. 生活安排

　　     2. 学习计划

　　     3. 理想的大学及专业

　　1. 字数100左右；

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3. 开头语已为你写好。

　　My last year in the senior high school has already started.       

　　  范文My last year in the senior high school has already started. I need to balance both my life and study in order to make it colorful and meaningful.

　　I strongly believe that doing sports every day may build up my body. Besides, communicating with teachers, parents and friends can be of great help to reduce my pressure. As for my study, I’ve made a practical plan to follow strictly. I should also overcome my shyness to consult the teachers if there’s something making me confused. What’s more, to improve physics is the most urgent because I have to make a solid foundation for my dream university — Cambridge, where I would like to major in physics.

　　I really hope that my dream will come true through my persistence and diligence.

　　【答案解析】此文通过英语提高的过程很好的把这几个词联系起来，形成一篇结构严谨，遣词造句很好的文章。文章中用了高级词汇和句子结构，如：动名词短语做主语communicating with teachers, parents and friends can be of great help to reduce my pressure.；  不定式做主语；状语从句；定语从句； to improve physics is the most urgent because I have to make a solid foundation for my dream university — Cambridge, where I would like to major in physics.；衔接词：Besides, ；What’s more等。

　　时

　　间: 2011年。

　　人物介绍: “低碳哥”, 用行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人,主张少用能源,减少二氧化碳的排放。

　　主要做法: 1. 捡起废纸,用空白一面写字；

　　2. 不开灯看电视,还把电视亮度调到最低(minimum)；

　　3. 上班骑自行车,不开车等。

　　人们的看法: 做秀,不现实。

　　你的看法: 我完全支持他的想法和行为，尽管他的行为未能对全球气候变暖造成很大的影响，但他至少可以享受健康的生活。