2016届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：47

　　高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达47

　　四川省成都外国语学校2015届高三10月月考英语试题

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　　书面表达（共5分）

　　随着互联的发展和流行，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了。某英文报近期开辟专栏,讨论中学生网上购物的问题。请结合实际，按以下提示,用英文为该专栏写一篇稿件，谈谈你对中学生网购的看法。

　　1.网上购物的好处（比如方便快捷，节省时间，价格低等；）。

　　2.网上购物的缺点（比如快递比较耗时，无法试穿试用，质量得不到保证等）。

　　3.中学生对网购应该持什么样的态度。

　　注意:

　　1.词数120左右,开头结尾已为你写好;

　　2.网购的好处与缺点至少各两点；

　　3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

　　4.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

　　Dear Editor,

　　With the development and popularity of the Internet, online shopping has become more and more common in China. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Mike

　　【答案】

　　【解析】

　　【答案】【知识点】议论文Dear editor,

　　With the development and popularity of the Internet, online shopping has become more and more common in China. I’m writing to share my views about online shopping.

　　On the one hand, I believe it’s convenient and economical. With the help of online shopping, we can buy things we want at home with a click of the mouse instead of going to the shopping mall. Besides, we might save money by comparing the price of goods sold in different online shops.

　　On the other hand, it might lead to many problems. For one thing, your package can’t always reach you on time due to various unexpected reasons. For another, you can’t try on the clothes to see if they fit you or not like you do when shopping in a real shop.

　　All in all, I hold that high school students should have a cautious attitude towards online shopping in order to avoid wasting money or buying things of poor quality.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Mike

　　【思路点拨】范文围绕网络购物展开，抓住了写作要点。第一段先说明网购的现象，然后表明写这篇稿件的目的。二、三段围绕网络购物的优点和缺点。两段开头分别用On the one hand ，On the other hand串接起来，写作层次清晰For one thing, For another逐一列出网络购物的缺点，使行文更加流畅。最后一段用总结性的话all in all，用have a cautious attitude towards短语表明中学生对待网购应有的态度。总体来说本文论述结构严谨，条理清晰，词汇丰富，句式多变

　　甘肃省河西三校普通高中2015届高三上学期第一次联考英语

　　【题文】书面表达(满分25分)

　　假如你是校自行车俱乐部负责人，请你根据下列提示，用英语准备一份口头通知。

　　俱乐部的主要活动内容：

　　①开展每周一次的基础训练，有教师辅导，安排在课外活动时间；

　　②每月一次的户外活动，安排在双休日；

　　③同其他团体进行比赛。

　　参加俱乐部的好处：强身健体，广交朋友；

　　注意事项：器材自备；活动免费；

　　如何加入俱乐部（方式自拟）。

　　注意： ①通知要包括以上所有信息，要有适当发挥

　　②词数：100左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

　　Boys and Girls,

　　Welcome to the Cycling Club.

　　Thank you!

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　　安徽省2017届高三高考冲刺调研英语卷一

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　　中央电视台在2017年春节期间，推出“新春走基层”节目，主题是“家风是什么？”你校英文报针对该话题进行征文活动，假如你是髙三学生李华，你打算针对你家的家风“勤俭节约 (work hard and be thrifty)”为话题写一篇文章，要点如下：

　　1.首先工作学习要勤奋, 勤奋能给我们带来什么?

　　2.其次在我们的生活中要节俭，节约资源。如节约水，电和粮食等，不要浪费钱财,不要盲目追求时尚；

　　3.举例说明你在学习和生活 中是如何做到勤俭节约的.

　　注意：1.词数120左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3.短文标题和开头已为你写好, 不计入总词数，

　　Work hard and be thrifty

　　First of all, we should work and study hard._____________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】Work hard and be thrifty

　　First of all, we should work and study hard. As we know, hard work can lead to success. If people want to make more money or want to make greater achievements, they must devote themselves to their work. As students, if we want to do well in our studies, we should also spend more time and work hard. Then we can gain more knowledge and improve our abilities so that we can be admitted to good universities and in the future we can find more satisfying jobs.

　　On the other hand we should live a thrifty life. Resources should be saved. For example, we should save on water, electricity and food. Never waste money. Don't go after fashion blindly or compare with others in terms of clothes or food. Wearing plain clothes is suitable for us students. For example, as a senior school student, I concentrate on my studies and I like wearing plain clothes and seldom buy expensive designer clothe.

　　I think both working hard and being thrifty are equally important in our life and study.

　　2017年高考真题——英语（福建卷）

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　　如何理解成功，不同的人有不同的看法。请认真阅读下面的引语( quotation)，按要求用英语写一篇短文。“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm."

　　- Sir Winston, Churchill

　　内容要求：

　　1．你对该引语的理解：2．你的相关经历：3．恰当的结尾。

　　注意：

　　1．短文开头已给出，不计总词数：2．文中不能出现考生的具体信息：3．词数：120左右。

　　This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that__________________________

　　This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn't get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.

　　At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn't wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better.

　　Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.

　　Actually, we can't succeed in everything we try. What's important is that we should stick at it.

　　云南省云龙县第二中学2017届高三上学期期末考试英语

　　【题文】书面表达（满分25分）现在越越多的人在周末或假期到社区做义工。上周你班同学到当地一家福利院看望老人。请根据下列要点给China Daily写一篇短文，介绍活动情况。

　　给老人们读报、打扫卫生等；

　　与老人们交流；

　　你的感想。

　　注意：

　　词数：100词左右,文章开头已写出（不计入总次数）；

　　可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；

　　生词：福利院 welfare house。

　　Nowadays, more and more people choose to be volunteers in the community in their spare time.

　　【答案】写作：

　　Nowadays, more and more people choose to be volunteers in the community at their spare time. Last week our class went to a local welfare house to visit the old people.

　　My classmates and I did what we could to help them. Some cleaned the rooms, gardens and all the places which needed to be cleaned; some read newspapers and magazines to the old people; others talked happily with the lonely ones. We tried our best to show our love and care and we actually did it.

　　Frankly speaking, we were so happy that day. When we helped others, we also get something more important. That is when you pay, you gain. So please show your love, show your care, and our society will be more beautiful and more harmonious.